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  1. JAYJAY

    Episode 83

    Can't wait to see what's going on with Doris.
  2. Hey ML! Glad to see another episode! Really good. Different then others episodes, but still fantastic. I love the part with Mark/Dahlia/Rufus. Ooh good ending. I can't wait for the next.
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    Episode 56

    Interesting evening in Springfield...... Beacon: Reva is in her room. Jeffrey walks in. He's been out of town, "Hi, how've you been?" She sits, "Jeffrey, we need to talk." Jeffrey puts his stuff down, "Okay, what about?" "Us. You. Marah." "Reva there is..." She calmly stops him, "Yes there is. Jeffrey I have had so much fun with you. You are the first guy who hasn't hurt me. And I don't want to hurt you." Jeffrey takes a deep breathe. Park: Olivia is on a walk and runs into Ava and Bill. "Guys! Where have you been? I got a confusing message from you." Ava shows her ring, "We're married!" Olivia is speechless. Bill smiles, "It was really sudden." Ava laughs, "Hey I guess he should call you 'Mom' now right?" Olivia and Bill share and awkward stare. Malah House: Maureen is in her dress. Dinah comes over, "Oh honey you look beautiful!" Maureen smiles, "Thanks Dinah! I can't believe I'm going to Prom with the seniors. And the hottest guy in school." Dinah laughs, "It's weird that my little sister is on a date with my little brother." Maureen shoves her, "Well he's not related to me!" The door rings. Dinah lets Kevin in, "Hi Dinah." Maureen smiles, "I'm ready." The two walk out after Dinah takes their picture. After they leave the phone rings. Dinah answers, "Hello? Oh yes.... what? Realy?" Dinah is shocked. Company: Marina is sitting with her Mom, "I'm so glad you're in town." Eleni hugs her, "I know honey. I'm so sorry about what happened." Marina smiles, "How long are you here for?" "A little while." Marina wishes it was longer. Frank comes over, "Hello." Eleni smiles, "Hey Frankie." The three sit together. Spaulding Mansion: Gus is sitting in his room when Natalia walks in, "Hello Nicky." He jumps up, "Natalia! I have to tell you something." "Just save it! There is no excuse for why you left me, on our wedding night." He takes her hand, "Just let me explain." "No! Too much has happened." "What do you mean?" Natalia sighs, "I have something to tell you now." Gus is confused. Towers: Olivia looks at the wedding pictures, "Wow. I guess what happens in Vegas.... doesn't stay in Vegas." Ava kisses Bill, "Thank goodness it doesn't. Olivia I wish you could have come." Olivia laughs, "It's perfectly fine." Bill clears his throat, "Look at the time, we should go Ava." Ava hugs her mother and leaves. Olivia goes over to the bar, "Hi um... could I get a drink please?" Olivia picks up her paper she got from her AA meetings and drops it to the floor. PART TWO: Malah House: Mallet comes in. Dinah comes over to him with a smile, "I have some news!" Mallet puts his jacket down, "Yeah me too." He isn't happy. It worried Dinah, "What's wrong?" He sits her down, "Babe you cognitive test scores came back from the doctor. They haven't improved." She's greatly disappointed, "No." He holds her hand, "They recommend that we don't continue trying for a child. Until you're ready." She looks at him and shakes her head. She runs up to the room. Prom: Kevin and Maureen are dancing. Maureen stares at him, "Oh Kevin, I've wanted this for so long." He smiles, "I've wanted you too." She grins. He stops, "What the..." She turns around. Jason walks in with Vi Grant. Company: Marina gets up, "I need to take a walk outside. I'll be right back." Eleni scoots closer to Frank, "So what's going on with you?" "Not much. You?" "Nope." Frank grins, "You know a lot has changed since you were here last." She shakes her head, "Not everything." She holds his hand. Outside Danny approaches Marina, "Hey. What's going on?" She hugs him, "Hi. I'm so glad to see you." "I'm glad to see you. You wanna go for a walk?" She nods, they leave. Spaulding Mansion: Natalia pulls her hand from Gus, "Listen. That night I was angry and I couldn't handle that my own husband..." He stops her, "No Natalia that's just it! I'm not your husband." She scoffs, "What the hell are you talking about?" "My divorce to Harley didn't go through. We're still married. So our marriage was invalid." Natalia gasp and sits on the bed, "Oh my goodness!" "But it's okay Nat. I mean we can still get married. What's stopping us?" Natalia has a flash back to her night with Alan. Beacon: Jeffrey and Reva sit together. Reva holds his hand, "We both know where this is going." "Reva I'm not going to leave you." She nods, "I know. But you can't stay with me just because you're hiding from something or someone else." Jeffrey looks at her, "Reva come on!" She smiles, "Jeffrey you helped me protect Jonathan and Sarah. You helping keep the secret about them." "It wasn't my place to tell Lizzie or anyone else." She nods, "I know. And I thank you. Jeffrey you're the first guy to actually want me the way I am. Lets end this on a good note." Jeffrey stands up, "Are you leaving?" She walks, "Yeah." He tries to stop her, "Reva..." She turns around, "Jeffrey you've loved her all along. It's only a matter of time before you realize that." She blows him a kiss and walks out. Towers: Olivia is dancing with two strange guys. She turns around to see Bill, "Hey! My favorite son in law!" He grabs her, "You fell off the wagon!" She laughs, "Eh whatcha gonna do? You know?" He walks her to the elevator, "I'm glad I came back." They step in. She pulls away once they're inside, "Why did you come back?" He grabs her and kisses her. Malah House: Mallet sees Dinah on her bed. He crawls next to her, "Hey. I'm sorry that it didn't work out. But maybe it's for the better." She shakes her head, "Mallet I got a call from my doctor today." Mallet is confused, "About your test scores?" "Not that doctor," She looks him in the eyes, "Mallet I'm pregnant." He stares in shock. PREVIEWS: Reva gets an offer Dinah and Mallet discuss the plans Danny shocks Marina Mel is worried about Frank and Eleni Vi surprises Kevin Olivia and Bill heat things up
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    Episode 55

    Surprising Afternoon in Springfield..... Harley's House: Shayne and Rocky fall onto the couch kissing. Rocky hears footsteps. Suddenly they are shaken by the word, "SURPRISE!!" Their family and friends all stare in shock. Reva drops the cake. The two stand up and try and get dressed. Cross Creek: Bill comes home, "Ava?" Ava comes running, "Hi! How was your day?" "It was good." They kiss. Ava smiles, "Guess what?" Bill gets nervous, "What?" "I have a surprise for you!" He sees the packed bags, "Uh what is it?" She shows him plane tickets. Harley's House: Buzz walks his son over, "Rocky what is going on?" "Dad... I was..." Coop walks over, "What was he doing to you?" Rocky is confused. Coop yells at Shayne, "What the hell is your problem?!" Rocky stops him, "Coop! I'm gay." Coop shakes his head, "No you're not!" Harley leaves cleans up the cake mess. Spaulding Enterprises: Cassandra comes out of a meeting to see Alan sitting in the hall, "Hello Alan." He smiles, "Hello. How's business?" "Much better now that you're out." "I'm not so sure about that?" She laughs, "Does it hurt? Does it hurt knowing that I've taken everything; your job, home, family..." He stops her, "What do you mean my family?" She smiles, "Well you left but they haven't. They still live in the Mansion." "It's their home!" She shakes her head, "They never loved you Alan. All they loved was the comfortable lifestyle. And they don't need you anymore." His anger rises. Harley's House: Josh and Reva look at Shayne. Josh doesn't understand, "What is going on Son?" "Dad I am in a relationship with Rocky." Reva takes a deep breathe, "I don't understand he's a..." Shayne speaks up, "Yes! He is and I love him." Reva's eyes fill with tears. Shayne turns to see a shocked Marina sitting with Marah. Cross Creek: Bill holds the tickets, "What is this about?" She smiles, "Bill I know we'll get married eventually, why not now?" "What!?!" "Vegas! Las Vegas! We'll elope!" He sits, "I don't get it. Ava so much has happened since I proposed." "But we're still having a child. Bill don't you want this child to grow up with two parents in love? Like we didn't get?" Bill nods. PART TWO: Harley's House: Marah hugs Shayne. He walks over to Marina, "Marina I'm with Rocky now." She looks at him, "No. You're not!" He calmly tells her, "Yes I am." "NO! You loved me. You can't love him. He's a man!" He holds her hand, "Marina I'm bisexual." "Oh my God! Come on Shayne." He cries, "It's true." She scoffs, "That's not real." He nods and turns to his parents, "Dad I'm bisexual." Josh sighs, "Shayne it's not right." Reva turns to him, "Joshua!" "Reva it's not!" Reva hugs Shayne, "We'll support you okay." Josh sits on the couch. Coop comes over and grabs Shayne, "What the hell is wrong with you?!" Rocky runs over. Cross Creek: Bill turns to Ava, "We can't fly." "What?" "You're pregnant." She frowns. Then stops, "Wait! We can still take a bus or train!" "Ava come on!" "No Bill. Please?" He agrees and she runs upstairs. Bill leaves Olivia a message, "Hey Olivia it's Bill. Ava and I are getting married. I hate telling you this on a message but I didn't want you to hear it somewhere else. You know how I feel but..." He hangs up. Ava comes over, "We need to go!" The two walk out. Spaulding Enterprises: Cassandra smiles at her picture on the wall, "I think Brandon would be proud." Alan scoffs, "I don't belive you." "What?" He laughs, "You're not a Spaulding! You aren't Brandon's daughter." "Yes I am Alan! Accept it!" "No! Cassie. That's who you are, you're Cassie Winslow! The stripper turned princess!" She picks up her briefcase, "No Alan! I'm not Cassie Winslow anymore. I'm Cassandra Spaulding and don't you forget it." She walks out. Alan throws a vase across the room. Harley's House: Rocky pushes Coop away, "Would you knock it off?" Coop turns away. Rocky goes over to his niece, "Marina I'm sorry..." "No!" She pushes him away, "Don't talk to me. Don't touch me!" Shayne looks at his father but Josh just looks down. The two walk to the door. Coop walks over, "Rocky you go and it will change us." Rocky cries, "Coop please." Buzz puts his hand on Coop's shoulder, "Coop enough. He's still you're brother." Coop doesn't listen, "You say you love this... man. Then good for you because he's all you have now." Rocky and Shayne take a look at everyone who is upset by this. They take hands and walk out. Harley hugs Reva as she cries. Cross Creek: Olivia comes running in, "Bill! Where are you!?!?" She looks all over and realizes their gone, "No. No. NO!!!" She picks up the lamp and chucks it at the wall. She falls to her knees crying. PREVIEWS: Olivia makes a bad choice The teens go to prom Reva and Jeffrey have a serious talk Eleni and Frank get close Marina runs into Danny again Mallet and Dinah get bittersweet news Natalia returns!
  5. JAYJAY

    Episode 82

    I love Lucinda giving her Grandson advice.
  6. JAYJAY

    Episode 81

    Really good stories!
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    Episode 54

    It's a day full of surprises in Springfield..... Harley's House: Harley is with Dylan. Dylan is confused, "So Harley what is this about?" She is getting things ready, "I just think Susan needs some help from her family. So I invited everyone over." "Everyone?" She nods, "Yes my family and yours. She really needs us Dylan. It'll be sort of a surprise party." Dylan laughs, "Harley. A party?" She turns to him, "Dylan, our daughter needs this." Little do they know that Susan is listening in on the conversation and sneaks out. Cross Creek: Reva comes in. She sees Josh, "What are you doing here?" He smiles, "I live here now." She is confused, "What about Olivia?" "We broke up." "Oh." Josh smiles, "So did you get Mother's Day cards from the kids?" She grins, "Yeah. I know things are difficult with Marah but even she sent me one." Josh stands up, "That's nice. So what brings you by?" Reva scratches her head, "Harley invited us over. Something about Susan. I came to see if Billy would come, you know it's our Granddaughter." "He's not here but I'll come." She shakes her head, "You really don't have too..." "Reva. Susan is my neice. I care about her." The two walk out. Company: Buzz and Frank are closing up. Ashlee and Coop walk downstairs. Ashlee looks around, "Slow day?" Buzz puts on his jacket, "No Harley's having a party or something. I guess Susan's been having a hard time." Frank nods, "You guys coming?" Coop sighs, "Well we have to go out..." Ashlee stops him, "Coop this is important. Susan is my friend and your neice so you should go see her. I'll take care." Coop hugs Ashlee. Salon: Marah is getting her nails done next to Marina. Marina looks at her phone, "Oh Marah are you going to Harley's later?" Marah turns to her, "No why?" "Harley is having a surprise party Susan." "Oh really?" Marina nods, "Yeah I think you're family is going." Marah smiles. PART TWO: Beacon: Susan approaches Shayne and Rocky in the hall, "Hey boys." Shayne turns around, "Hi." Rocky smiles, "Shayne told me that you'd keep our secret to yourself. Thanks." She nods, "No problem. Listen I know you two have been having a hard time hiding. I can help." Shayne gets curious, "How?" Susan smiles, "Harley took the boys out of town. You guys could stay and keep me company." Rocky smiles, "Really? Nobody else?" "Nope." They all agree. Shayne and Rocky walks away. Susan sighs, "Sorry boys, but I have to take the heat off of myself for a while." Gym: Ashlee is working out. Ava walks over, "Hey never to late to start right?" Ashlee rolls her eyes, "Hello Ava. What are you doing here?" "I'm cancelling my membership program. I won't be working out for while." Ava rubs her stomach. Ashlee picks up her stuff but drops a book. Ava picks it up and reads the title, "How to Get the Body of Your Dreams." Ashlee grabs it from her, "Mind your own business Ava." Ava laughs, "Aw did Coop finally get over the whole, 'I love you no matter what' deal. He did that with me when I finally gave up the whole Good Girl thing." "I'm not you Ava." "I used to be sweet just like you Ashlee and Coop liked that. But once I gained confidence he wasn't to pleased. Just something to think about." Ava laughs as she walks away. Ashlee looks in the mirror for the first time in a long time with disgust. Salon: Marina giggles, "Oh! You're thinking Jeffrey might show up!" Marah shakes her head, "No. He's out of town. Anyways how's your guy?" Marina looks at the ground, "I left Cyrus?" "What? Why?" "Long story. The weird thing is that I already have other options." Marah gets excited, "What? Who?" Marina clears her throat, "Well Danny Santos came back to town..." "Right! I heard about you and Danny!" "Yep. And there's..." Marah turns to her, "What?" "Your brother?" Marah grins, "Shayne! Oh my God! That's great! You should get back with him." Marina is embarrased, "Well I don't know if he's interested." "I"m sure he is!" Marina smiles. Cross Creek: Ava sits on the couch. "I need to think of something!" She sees a picture of Billy and Vanessa from their wedding, "Oh the night I told you I was 'pregnant'." She gets and idea and calls the airport, "Yes do you have any planes leaving for Vegas tonight?" Harley's House: Marina and Marah walk in. Everyone else is already there. Marah hugs her parents, "Do you guys know what this is about? It's not her birthday." Reva shakes her head, "No. I need to talk to Dylan. Excuse me." They hear footsteps and hide in the other room. They all hide in the back. Outside Shayne and Rocky kiss on the porch. Rocky laughs, "Someone will see us!" Shayne opens the door. Rocky lays down on the couch. Shayne takes off his shirt and climbs on top of him. The two are making out. Rocky starts to unbuckle his jeans. Suddenly the entire party jumps in. SURPRISE!!!!!!!!!!! PREVIEWS: Shayne and Rocky face the party Ava shocks Bill Cassandra runs into Alan Olivia is devestated. Two families are shaken!
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    Episode 53

    Everyone is confessing in Springfield...... Bauer Home: Phillip is talking with Lizzie. "Lizzie, listen. You can be saved. Because that little girl is your full sister. She's not Rick's daughter. She's mine." Lizzie gasp. Rick turns to Beth. Beth is speechless. The room is silent. Lizzie walks the kids upstairs. Rick sits down, "What are you talking about?" Phillip turns to Rick, "Rick I'm sorry. I came back to town last year after Alan was shot. I ran into Beth and we..." Rick turns to Beth, "What?" Beth holds his hand, "I'm sorry Rick. It's true." Rick is confused, "But the DNA test..." Mindy steps in, "Rick the DNA test said that Alan wasn't the father. They didn't say you were." Beth turns to Mindy, "What the hell have you done Mindy?" Beacon: Marina is shocked, "Wait what? He's your brother?" Cyrus looks her in the eyes, "Yes. That 'Mark Guillespie' is my brother." She shakes her head, "No! No! It can't be!" He holds onto her, "Yes Marina it is!" She screams, "He killed my best friend Cyrus! That's the man that killed Tammy!" "I know I'm sorry." Marina pauses, "Oh my God! You let him get away! You're on his side!" She slaps him. Upstairs in Olivia's Suite. Josh walks in. Olivia is sitting on the couch, "Hey." "Hello." He notices the suitcase, "Are you going somewhere?" She looks at him, "No Josh you are. You're going home." Josh is confused, "What?" She sighs, "We both know where you want to be. You want to be at Cross Creek." "Olivia..." "We both know who you want. You want Reva." Josh shakes his head. Park: Susan sees Shayne on the bench. She sits by him, "Hey!" He hugs her, "Hi! How have you been?" She smiles, "I'm good. How about you?" He sits back down and ties his shoe, "I'm great." She stares him down, "Yeah yeah. And Rocky?" Shayne sits in shock. Cedars: Mallet and Dinah are going through the process of in vitro. They are with the doctor. Dinah is sitting on a bed, "So we can start it soon?" "Yes. Mr. Mallet just needs to make his deposit." Mallet gets nervous, "Oh um...." The doctor hands him a cup. Dinah rubs his back, "Baby. We talked about this." He nods, "I know. I know." Mallet sits down. Dinah laughs, "Not here you perv!" He jumps up, "I know!" The doctor walks him across the hall. Dinah can't stop laughing. Bauer Home: Mindy scoffs at Beth, "I didn't do anything." Beth is angry, "Did you lie to Phillip." Mindy sighs, "I'm sorry Phillip but Rick needed to know." Phillip hits his head, "Oh my God! Mindy!" She shouts, "I'm sorry!" Beth grabs Mindy's coat, "Here! Get out! Get the hell out of our home!" Mindy tries to stop her, "Wait Beth..." Beth won't listen, "No! You have caused enough trouble here. You still haven't grown up. You know what just leave. Leave town. Go back to France. We don't want you here!" Beth slams the door in Mindy's face. Mindy falls to the floor crying. PART TWO: Olivia's Suite: Josh is confused, "Olivia what are you talking about?" She puts his stuff down, "Josh I'm not sad this time. We both new this would happen. Atleast you haven't slept together yet." "What?" She smiles, "Josh I would know if you had. And then I'd make sure you never could have sex again." Olivia hands him a box. Josh puts it down, "Reva and I aren't..." She stops him, "Yet. You aren't yet. But you will. And I have to much going on now to wait for that." He shakes his head, "I'm sorry Olivia." She walks over to him, "I know Josh." She kisses him, "You are still one of the sexiest men in this town Josh." Josh holds her hand, "Olivia. Reva and I might not even..." She pulls away, "Yes you will. Because it's what it is. It's 'Always' Josh. The sooner you remember that the better." Olivia gives him a hug goodbye. Josh takes his stuff and leaves. Bauer Home: Rick won't let go of the baby, "No Beth we already found out that I was the father. Not Alan!" Beth cries, "I know. I should have told you about Phillip. I knew Alan was never the father. You see the first test last year I fixed to have Alan as the father. Then Cassie switched them and I truely believed that you were. Then when she told me the truth I knew that if we only tested Alan's blood then when it came up negative..." Rick shakes his head, "I'd believe that I was the father." Beth holds him, "Rick I'm so sorry." Rick cries, "This is happening to fast! Just an hour ago we were a happy family...." Rick turns to stare at Phillip. Company: Marina is running from Cyrus. He catches up with her, "Marina wait!" She keeps going, "I don't want to talk with you!" He grabs her arm, "I'm sorry!" She pulls away, "Don't talk to me! I can't be with you now!" "Marina please!" She turns around, "You've been lying! I don't think I can trust you!" He tries to reassure her, "No. You can." "I'm going to move back with my family... and I'll send for my things." Marina walks up to the boarding house. Cedars: Mallet walks over to Dinah giggling with Lillian. Mallet smiles, "Okay Lillian how much did Dinah pay you to keep pounding on the door?" Dinah laughs, "10 bucks and it was worth it!" He kisses her. Lillian smiles, "I promised Dinah that I'd be in the room." He smiles at her, "Thanks Lillian I appreciate it." The Mallet waves to Dinah as she is rolled away. Park: Shayne stares at the ground, "Who?" Susan sits with him, "Rocky. Rocky Cooper. He's my Uncle. Well he's more like a cousin since he's younger. And you're my younger Uncle too! Small world." She giggles. Shayne nods, "Yeah I think I know who you are talking about. Why would I know about him?" She looks at him, "I know Shayne. I know about the two of you." Shayne turns to her, "Susan please?" "I won't say a word Shayne." He smiles, "Thank you." She hugs him, "Sure. We're family right?" Susan hates what she has to do next. Bauer Home: Rick stares at the little girl, "She doesn't even look like me." Beth is sobbing, "I'm so sorry Rick." Rick takes a deep breathe, "I promised that I wouldn't let her be taken from her father. I will not break that." Beth shakes her head, "No Rick." Rick hands the little girl to Phillip, "Here's your daughter." Phillip holds her for the first time. His eyes fill with tears. Beth goes to hug Rick but he walks out. Beth runs to the door, "Rick!!!" She falls to the floor crying. PREVIEWS: Harley's plan fails Susan schemes Marina and Marah talk about relationships Rocky and Shayne's worst nightmare happens!
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    Casting Call

    Please Help with Casting Call Hispanic Male Age: 18-25 Character: "Ray" a sort of bad boy. African American Female Age: 40-45 Character: "Gail" the strong family woman.
  10. I loved the return home for Holden and Lily. Good luck on your finals!
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    Episode 52

    It starts out as a simple day in Springfield...... Bauer Home: The family is celebrating Bertha's 6 month birthday. Beth kisses Rick, "Oh look how pretty she is Rick." Rick smiles, "I know. She looks just like her mother." They take her to the livingroom. Phillip goes to stares at the phone. Mindy notices, "Worried about Lizzie?" Phillip sighs, "She's supposed to call." Mindy rubs his back, "I know. Maybe she's upset about the blood thing?" Phillip turns to her, "What?" "Oh nothing!" Mindy goes to walk out but Phillip stops her, "What are you talking about?" Mindy continues with her lie, "Beth and Lizzie haven't told you everything." Mindy made this plan after reading what she read in Beth's date book. Cedars: Colin comes to Lizzie with a file. Lizzie stands up, "Just say it!" Colin smiles, "It was a success!" Lizzie screams and jumps into Colin's arms, "Are you serious?!" "Oh yes Liz! I am serious. I knew this would save you." "You saved me!" "We saved you!" Lizzie kisses him. Harley's House: Harley is sitting at the table. Gus runs in, "I still haven't heard from her." "What did the Beacon say?" Gus sits, "Olivia ordered them not to give any information." Harley rolls her eyes, "Great!" Gus looks at her, "Harley just tell me one thing? Why didn't I know about our divorce not being official before I married Natalia?" Harley gets nervous. Beacon: Cyrus enters his room. Guillespie is sitting on the bed, "So did you call the cops?" Cyrus scoffs, "What?" Guillespie stands up, "They're out looking for me. They know I'm in Springfield. So I'll ask you again: Did you tell your skanky little girlfriend about me?" Cyrus grabs him, "You shut up about her!" Marina runs in and sees the two in a struggle. Lewis Construction: Dylan and Lucy are going over plans with the business. Lucy hands him more files, "Here is more on Spaulding." Dylan smiles, "Great." Lucy sits, "Well I am still legally a Spaulding myself. So we need to make sure that we don't do to much damage until my divorce to Alan Michael is final." Ava walks in, "Maybe I could help." The two are surprised to see her. Blake's House: Remy is gets another email that reads: How's your girlfriend? Remy slams his hand on the desk. He's been getting these mysterious messages for weeks. Blake walks in, "Hey what's going on?" "Uh... nothing." Blake smiles, "You want to help me with this?" Remy gets nervous, "What is it?" "Plans for the boys Graduation Party." Remy looks at the computers and wonders how he will protect Blake. PART TWO: Bauer Home: Phillip questions Mindy, "What are you talking about?" Mindy holds his hand, "There's a way to save Lizzie." Phillip is shocked, "What is it?" Mindy thinks on the spot, "Well you remember how she was saved last time?" Phillip nods, "By James yeah. Wait are you saying he could save her again." She sighs, "Well they said James isn't able to now. Something about only donating once." "What?" This sounds ridculous to Phillip but he wants to believe that there is hope. Mindy nods, "Yep. She would need a full blood sibling this time." Mindy leaves him to think. Cedars: Lizzie and Colin continue to kiss. Colin pulls away, "Liz? Is this what you want?" "Yes. Oh wait! I'm late I have to go to my sister's party." Colin nods, "Okay." "We'll talk tommorow about all of this." She gives him one last kiss and leaves. Blake's House: Blake walks over to the computer. Remy stands up, "Wait! What are you doing?" "I just want to email my Mom. Remind her to come into town." Remy forgot to exit out of his email, "Uh wait!" He kisses her. "Remy stop." She laughs. She gives in and Remy picks her up and carries her away. Lewis Construction: Lucy smiles, "Hello Ava. I've heard a lot about you." Ava smirks, "And I you." Dylan walks in between them, "Ava's engaged to Bill." Ava smiles, "We're expecting a child." Lucy walks over to her, "That's nice. Now how did Alan Spaulding's assistant get in here?" Ava sits, "I want to help you." Dylan is surprised, "Really?" She nods, "Yes. I'm going to be a Lewis soon and this can show my loyalty to Bill and the family." Lucy shakes her hand, "We'll see how this goes." The two shake hands. Harley's House: Harley looks at Gus, "Well... I didn't know until that night either." "Your lawyer had to know before then." Harley tries to be clever, "Well.... he left a message but I didn't get it." Gus is about to ask a question when his phone rings. Harley uses this time to go upstairs. Beacon: Marina pulls out her gun, "Freeze!" Guillespie pulls out his gun but runs off. Marina goes to shoot but Cyrus tackles her. "What are you doing Cyrus?" Cyrus holds her, "Marina please!" "Why do you care? Do you know who that is!?!" "Yes.... he's my brother Marina." Marina looks at him in shock. Bauer Home: Rick is opening Bertha's presents. Lizzie walks in, "Hi! I have news." Beth stands up. Phillip interupts, "Lizzie I need to tell you something." Lizzie smiles, "What?" Phillip looks her in the eye, "We can save you!" Beth stops him, "Phillip?" He turns around, "Beth we need to tell her. If it can save her." Beth is confused. Phillip looks at Lizzie, "We can save you with her." Phillip's finger points at the baby in Rick's hands. Lizzie shakes her head, "What do you mean?" Phillip takes a deep breathe, "That baby isn't Rick's Lizzie.... She is mine!" Beth falls to her seat. Rick clings to Bertha. Mindy smiles at her success. PREVIEWS: Beth and Phillip confess Dinah and Mallet try to become parents Susan confronts Shayne Marina is furious at Cyrus Olivia ends things with Josh
  12. Wow! You have really good ideas and creativity. I'm a Willen fan! Good job. I hope you continue to post these.
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    New Art!

    I really like your art! So great!
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    Episode 51

    A Dramatic Evening in Springfield..... Spaulding Mansion: Mindy walks in to Beth's old room. Edmund has allowed her in. Mindy picks up an date book, "Wait Beth why is this here?" She flips through it. She notices it was left here a year ago. "Well Beth lets see what you were up to last year." Mindy stops when she reads something, "Oh my God!" She takes the book and leaves. Bauer Cabin: Gus looks at the driveway, "My car's gone." "What?" "Harley someone took my car." Harley knows who it is. Gus picks up his phone and dials, "Natalia is probably worried sick about me." Old Road: Guillespie and Susan speed down the road in Gus's car. Beacon: Natalia and Alan fall onto the bed. She jumps on top and starts upbottoning his shirt. He kisses her, "I've wanted this for so long." She rips off her dress, "Just shh. Don't talk, just hold me. I want to be with you right now!" The two begin to have hot sex. Natalia's phone is vibrating under the bed. Towers: Frank and Alan Michael sit at the bar. Eleni hands them ice, "Well I hope you two are happy." Frank hugs her, "When did you get here?" "A little while ago." She turns to Alan Michael, "Hello." "Hi Eleni. It's nice to see you." They hug. Mel walks in the room to see both men talking with Eleni. Company: Marina is shocked to see Danny, "Oh my God! What are you doing here?" Danny smiles, "I had some business." "Business?" Marina gets worried. He shoves her, "Not that kind. Besides I heard all of the crime families relocated. I guess thanks to Springfields youngest detective." She laughs, "Well I do what I can. Where's Michelle?" Danny hesitates, "Uh... she's home with the kids." "Oh." He opens the door, "Hey lets go inside and you can fill me in on what I've missed." The two walk inside. Bauer Home: Phillip sits with Lizzie, "Oh Baby, I'm so sorry." Lizzie cries, "Daddy I've missed you so much. So much has happened." Lizzie is sobbing. "I know honey. I know about Sarah. I am so sorry." Phillip holds his daughter. Beth cries watching them reunite. Mindy walks in to see the three sitting as a family. PART TWO: Towers: Frank is describing Cyrus to Eleni. Eleni shakes her head, "As long as he's good to Marina I guess I'll keep my mouth shut. Marina's been hurt by enough men." They look at Alan Michael. He sighs, "Okay lets not get into that." Frank is happy to see her, "Where are you staying?" She picks up her purse, "The Beacon." Frank stands up, "Nonesense, stay at Company." Alan Michael stands up, "Okay well I best be going. It was great seeing you Eleni." They hug and he leaves. Mel tries to approach Frank but chickens out and walks home. Company: Danny and Marina are eating. Marina laughs, "Do you remember the time that we painted your old apartment!" Danny laughs, "Oh yeah! I think we goy more paint on each other than the walls!" Marina smiles, "That was fun." He looks at her, "I like the dress." "I just came from Gus's wedding. I feel bad going." Danny is confused, "Why? Did Gus and Harley get married again?" "No he's with Natalia now." "Who? I guess a lot's changed. Is it true that Cassie's running Spaulding?" Marina sighs, "Yeah. After Tammy died she kind of lost it." He puts his hand on her shoulder, "I'm sorry about Tammy. I know how close you guys were." "Thanks." He changes the subject, "So about this Cyrus..." "Lets not talk about him." She smiles at her ex boyfriend. Outside Shayne and Rocky are kissing behind the wall. Rocky laughs, "This is kind of fun sneaking around." "Yeah well Marina is inside." Rocky peaks, "Who's she with?" Shayne takes a closer look, "Danny? What?" "Hey. Let Marina worry about herself." The two continue to kiss. Little do they know that Susan is standing a few feet away. Bauer Cabin: Harley sits with Gus, "Natalia still isn't answering?" Gus is frustrated, "No. And now my phone is dead." "And we don't have a ride into town." Gus throws his phone, "Great!" Harley tries to lighten the mood, "At least it can't get any worse." A sound of thunder startles them. Gus looks at Harley, "You just had to say that?" She walks back inside. Beacon: Natalia kisses Alan, "That was great." Alan smiles, "Well worth the wait." "Oh yeah." Alan gets curious, "So where's Gus?" "With Harley." Alan kisses her. She gets up, "I need to go." "Where?" She sighs, "I have to clear my head." Natalia packs her bags. Bauer Home: Lizzie walks over to Mindy, "Did you know too?" Mindy nods, "Yes I did Lizzie." Beth holds Lizzie's shoulders, "Honey, Mindy brought him back." Lizzie hugs Mindy. Beth rubs her back, "You understand that we have to keep this secret." Phillip hugs Lizzie, "Honey, we'll work as a family to help you." Mindy is confused, "What do you mean?" Lizzie looks at the floor. Beth explains, "Lizzie's leukemia has resurfaced." Mindy puts down her purse and hugs Lizzie. PREVIEWS: Lizzie gets her results Lucy and Dylan get a new partner Gus question's Harley Cyrus confesses to Marina Remy worries about Blake Phillip drops a bombshell!
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    Episode 72

    Wow! Good twist at the end!
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    Episode 71

    Good scenes with Paul and Rosanna. I love the Lily and Holden, so much excitement.
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    Episode 70

    Can't wait to see what happens with Holden and Lily. Good stuff with Meg.
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    Episode 69

    OMG great episode! I love the Rosanna/Paul/Meg SL.
  19. Good episode. I like Mark and Rufus.
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    Episode 50

    A day in Springifield and most are attending the Aitoro wedding...... Church: Natalia her friends are waiting to walk down the isle. Dinah, Mel and Olivia enjoy their dresses. Mel smiles, "So? Are you ready?" She has a flash back to her conversation with Alan. She tries to erase it from her mind, "Uh.. yeah. I'm ready." Bauer Cabin: Harley runs in the door, "Susan?!?!" Susan walks in, "Hello." "What is going on? I got your message. Why are you here?" Susan sighs, "I did something." Harley gets nervous, "What did you do?" "Just remember that I did it for you!" Harley is worried. Church: Natalia walks down the isle after her bridesmaids. She smiles at Mallet, Frank, Alan Michael, and Rafe. She then notices Alan at the front with Gus. She pauses but continues and takes her place next to Gus. Bauer Home: Beth and Phillip are talking with James. There is a knock at the door. Phillip hides in the other room. James follows him. Beth answers it. Lizzie walks in, "Hi Mom." Beth smiles, "Hello sweetheart? Why are you crying?" "Mom.... I need to tell you something." Lizzie sits at the table with her Mom. She's ready to confess. Church: Natalia smiles at Gus, "Nicky... Gus... Whatever you want me to call you... I love you with all of my heart. And I know that we belong together. I will spend everyday happy as your wife." Gus holds Natalia's hands, "I promise to make up for the lost time. With you and with Rafe. And we will have the life that you always wanted and desereved." The two say their I do's and are pronounced Husband and Wife. Alan stands heartbroken. Bauer Cabin: Harley stares at Susan, "What did you do now?" Susan smiles, "No it's a good thing. I did it for you." "You keep saying that! What is it?" Susan finally says it, "Gus... I helped you with Gus." "How? He's marrying Natalia right now." Susan walks away, "Well kind of." Harley follows her, "What do you mean?" "Your divorce lawyer came over yesterday. You didn't fill out the papers right. So I paid him off to keep it hush." Harley grabs her daughter, "You what?!?!?" Susan tries to calm her down, "Don't you get it Harley? You and Gus are still married! He and Natalia are not!" Harley gasp. PART TWO: Towers: Gus and Natalia have just left the reception. Mallet and Dinah are slow dancing. Mallet rubs Dinah's stomach. She stops him, "Don't. The doctor called.... I'm not pregnant." Mallet pauses, "I'm sorry.... We got our hopes up." She wipes her teards, "Yeah we knew it was a long shot." Dinah cries on her husband's shoulder. Beacon: Natalia and Gus head up to their room. Gus gets a phone call "Hello? What?.... Hello?" He hangs up. Natalia worries, "What's wrong?" "Something is wrong with Harley. I think she's hurt. I gotta go." She grabs his arm, "Nicky this is our wedding night. Are you kidding?" "I'm sorry. I'll be very quick! It's urgent!" He kisses her and runs off. Natalia stares in disbelief. She walks into her room alone and slams the door. Bauer Cabin: Lizzie holds her Mother's hand, "Mom.... I'm dying." Beth is startled, "Lizzie what are you talking about?" "My leukemia is showing up..." Beth covers her mouth, "Oh my God!" "I know I found out 6 months ago." Beth is shocked, "What! Lizzie!" Lizzie is crying, "I'm sorry I thought I could handle this! I wanted to see what I could do but I don't know how long I have." "Oh God!" Beth holds Lizzie. Lizzie cries, "Just... I've been waiting for a sign of hope but..." Beth jumps up, "Lizzie I need you to be brave." She walks her to the door, "What's going on Mom?" Beth opens the door. Lizzie sees her father. Lizzie is in complete shock, "What is this? Some kind of dream?" She is in shock. Phillip steps over, "No baby... it's me!" Lizzie screams and falls into her fathers arms crying. Towers: Alan Michael runs into Marina in the parking lot, "I have to show you something." "Alan Michael I'm busy!" She goes down the stairs. Frank walks over to him, "What the hell are you doing?" Alan Michael drops the envelope. Frank sees the pictures of him and Mel, "You bastard!" The two begin fighting. Alan Michael punches Frank, "Just wait! I'm gonna make sure everyone knows who you are Frank!" Frank tackles Alan Michael. A familiar voice breaks them up, "Frankie stop it!" Alan Michael turns around. The two men are shocked to see none other than Eleni Andros. Bauer Cabin: Harley's car was stolen. She is waiting for someone to pick her up. Gus comes running in, "What happened?" "Gus what are you doing here?" "I got a call...." Harley takes a deep breathe, "Gus. I need to tell you something." Gus turns and looks at her. Company: Marina sits on the bench and thinks about Cyrus and Shayne. Suddenly she feels a backrub, "Oh that is just what I needed..." She stops. Is it Shayne or Cyrus. She doesn't want to say the wrong name. Suddenly he speaks, "You always liked my massages." "Oh my God! Danny?" She turns to see Danny Santos behind her. Beacon: Natalia hears the door open, "Nicky!" Alan walks in, "Don't say anything! I need to see you! I just can't stay away. I don't know why but I can't! You chose Gus over me! But I still can't be angry at you. I can't help myself. I know it's wrong. I shouldn't feel this way should I? She is shocked, "Alan?" "I should go and forget all of this happened. You should too." She walks over to him and kisses him. He picks her up and sits her on the couch. She stops, "Alan?" "Natalia, I want you! I need you!" "I need you too!" She kisses him again. Bauer Cabin: Harley chases Gus outside. "Gus wait!" He turns around, "What do you mean that we're still married?" "The lawyer said that the divorce didn't go through!" He's upset, "Oh my God!" She tries to calm him down, "Gus wait this doesn't change anything!" He stops her, "No Harley! This changes.... everything!" Beacon: Natalia and Alan fall down onto the bed. She tears off his jacket. He removes her dress. The two are ripping each other's clothes off. They've given in to the forbidden act. PREVIEWS: Gus worries about Natalia Natalia and Alan make love Mindy makes a discovery Lizzie and Phillip are reunited Eleni is happy to see her guys Danny and Marina get reaquainted Rocky and Shayne's secret is found out by someone!
  21. OMG!!! Great episode! Such a good ending. I feel so bad for Natalia.
  22. JAYJAY

    Episode 49

    The reason it wasn't so deep is because this isn't over. Ashlee doesn't believe Coop is over Lizzie and neither does he, (afterall he has kissed her a couple of times) Ashlee has done some thinking and her self esteem isn't as strong as before. This will be a huge obstacle for the two.
  23. JAYJAY

    Episode 49

    An emotional evening in Springfield..... Bauer Home: Phillip comes into the kitchen. Beth sees him, "Hey what are you doing?" Phillip's nervous, "I just needed to talk to you about what happened with Bertha." Beth stands up, "Phillip we said we'd never talk about this!" "I know but Beth...." Phillip holds her hands. They look into each others eyes. James walks and drops his basketball on the floor. He stares at his father in shock. Cedars: Ashlee shakes her head at Coop, "Why did you sleep with Lizzie?" "What? Ashlee I didn't...." Ashlee stops him, "I saw you! You never came to the hotel so I came back to town and I saw you in bed with Lizzie." Coop doesn't understand, "Ashlee..." "You know that night... it was supposed to be the night! We were finally going to make love! You threw it away for her!" "Ashlee I never slept with Lizzie!" Ashlee looks at Coop with confusion. Police Station: Gus is sitting with Mallet. Gus is staring at a picture of Harley and the kids. Mallet walks over, "Hey man. You nervous?" "Not really." Mallet looks at the picture, "She's something huh?" "What?" "Harley. There's just something about her that you can't shake. I've been there." Gus keeps looking at the picture. Boudreau House: Mel walks to the door. Frank surprises her, "Hey!" "Hi. Aren't you supposed to be at Gus's bachelor party?" Frank smiles, "I was. I left early." He starts kissing her neck. She giggles, "Frank. My parents are inside." "Then lets stay out here. In my car!" Frank runs to the car. She laughs and follows him. The two lovers are oblivious to Alan Michael Spaulding following them. Spaulding Mansion: Alan walks to Natalia, "Just admit it!" "Fine okay! I want you Alan! I can't get you out of my head! I want you more then my life right now! And I keep fighting it!" She pulls him close to her. Then pushes him away. PART TWO: Police Station: Mallet hands Gus his coat, "So you're staying with me and Dinah tonight right?" "Yep. It's a slumber party." "Ooh remind me to wear my Superman pajamas." Mallet jokes. Gus takes one last look at Harley's picture. He turns it around and walks out. Boudreau House: Mel and Frank are in the back of his car. She starts to open her blouse, "I need this! Today was so stressful." Frank kisses her, "You're telling me. Guess who I ran into?" She laughs, "Who?" "Alan Michael Spaulding." Her face freezes, "What?" "Yeah. He was at the party. Oh, but this really takes my mind off of it." She kisses him, "Me too." Outside Alan Michael pulls out his phone and takes a few pictures. He talks to himself, "I'm sorry Mel. But I need to stop this before you get hurt." Cedars: Ashlee sits with Coop, "What are you talking about? I saw you." "I fell asleep in Lizzie's bed." Ashlee shakes her head, "She was naked." "I don't know anything about that. But I swear on my mother's grave that we didn't have sex!" Ashlee looks at Coop, "I'm so sorry Coop. I just saw you two and I..." She cries. He holds her, "I'm sorry I should have called." "We'll work this out. Won't we?" "Yeah." Coop isn't sure himself. Bauer Home: Beth walks over to James, "Honey. Your father has come home." James is speechless. Phillip walks over to him. Tears fill his eyes, "Wow Son. You have become quite a young man. Are you 12 now? I've really missed you." James puts his hand on Phillip's face and emotion overwhelms him. He grabs onto his father and cries. Beth comes over to hug her son, "He's home honey." Spaulding Mansion: Alan stares at Natalia, "Now what?" She cries, "I do want you Alan! But I can't... I just can't be with you." Alan is confused, "You just said-" "I said I wanted to. But just because you want something doesn't mean it's right or it's good for you!" Alan is furious, "Fine! I don't care anymore! I have a business to get back. I had to sneak into my own house. Again! I can't focus on you anymore. You say you love Gus well you better. Because if you walk down that isle tommorow... don't you ever come back to me for anything." Alan storms out. Natalia falls to the floor crying. PREVIEWS: Susan shocks Harley Gus and Natalia say I do Alan gets his wish Frank and Alan Michael get a surprise Marina runs into her ex Lizzie comes clean about her illness
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    Episode 66

    I like the relationship between Lucinda and Luke. I enjoyed the part with her and Noah.
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