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  1. Thanks Redd I really wanted to get into who Ash was and why she was the way she is. THat's where the diary came in. And u really though Mona would get off easily huh. I hope her skipping jail time would have been a shock to everyone. But of course, Mona has big things coming up
  2. What's this Beth( Lorileigh) thing? I just realized u recasted Roxie! Wow? A lot of roles have been recasted. Who is Rafe's mother? Too bad Bill is clueless FTL is so tradtional in its storytelling I love it. Suprised that Rafe and Liz voted for Annie but it does make sense I knew it would be Annie. Well for a minute I really didn't but for some reason I am just not shocked. But what will be good is what Annie will do and I know ALAN won't let this ride. Round 2. Alan vs Annie. This will be good and I think they were married at one point in time huh?
  3. Love the Susan recast. Poor Harley and shame on u 2 Susan. How dare you? You have done ur mother so wrong on so many ocassions. Dirty little tramp. I'll never LIKE SUSAN!! U GOT THAT!? What does Roxie have up her sleeve? Harley should have beat the hell out of Susan! Roxie is BiPolar and a lunatic I am not trying to hear any excuse Mel has. She's dead wrong. And nothing will ever change that It was nice that Philip was there for Harley. Shayne going straight/? I dont think so. I will not accept that. I will only accept Shayne and Rocky. Why don't couples stay together on this show? Who is Ava? Loved the ending scene and now based upon the previews the ceo is revealed. Now I got to read one more. U killing me Jay.
  4. Oo Gus and Harley a couple now? Shame on you Mel. I will never forgive u for this. You know how bad ur hubby wanted this. I know if I were in his show, it woulde be over between us What is Roxie up to with Ashlee? Do u ever think ur cast is too big? I really love how solid these families are on ur blog and how well defined the roles are and Lewis vs Spualding. It's like on Dynasty or Dallas. I love it O I c, harley is still with Cyrus? But I know she longs for Gus. I do too. Oh my what evilness does Roxie have for Ashlee. I like both characters I hope She dont hurt Ashlee This is almost too much for me Remy and liz? Now thats hot. Blake and Alan working together so she can get with remy? Wow/ Why so? SHUT THE [!@#$%^&*] UP GUS AND SUSAN? OMG I AM STUNNED!!!! AND NOW EVERYONE KNOWS. I was going to quit reading for the evening but I may have to come back to see what happens. GREAT EPISODE JAY!!! U r on fire
  5. SO glad Roxie is still on and i lover her pic. I hope you switch Coop's pic back? I so loved the first Spualding scene. I am voting for Alan Micheal and I loved how Liz voted for her uncle So what is Roxie up to? What has that cluck been up to? Poor Alan Micheal. And Shame on Mel. Are they a couple? If so he he needs to dump her. Jesse and Michelle will now be working together. That's going to be a hot triangle. Loved the 2nd Reva Bend scene. We are really getting into Roxie's inner emotions I love it I loved Alan M's meltdown. I feel so bad for him. I could really feel his pain and I can't wait to see if he will seek revenge. I so love this CEO plot. SO much is involved. DAMN everyone who hurt him. GENIUS WRITING. The hottest plot in the blogs right now!!! I CANT WAIT FOR THE BATTLE to play out Annie, Alan, and Phil. Love it
  6. OH MY Mariana smoking crack!> She's a basehead!? Can Annie really be trusted? Is she a good girl or bad girl this time? O Wow Shanye and Rocky are done? That is too damn bad! Why does Olivia have a restraining order on Philip? So nice that Reva and Cassie made amenz. Esp during her cancer..again? My my how have the roles reversed. Susan is the do right person now? After all the trouble she's caused. But I do like the crack head storyline The battle between two brothers. Nice build up And I love the shorter ep. Thanks I can't belive how many I am behind Damn where did they all come from?
  7. Downtown Pasadena, Court House Ty takes his seat on the witness stand. Mona continues to smile at him. Ty vows to himself to keep his cool, never being one to do so other wise. Mona "State your name for the court to hear." Ty "Tyler Christopher Hutchins." Mona "Now, Mr. Hutchins, can you do this court a favor and tell us about our meeting we had about 4 years ago." Ty "Can you clarify the question?" Ty "Most certainly. You remember the conversation we had about 4 years ago. We met in a bar, the bar at a hotel you own TC Hotel. I asked you, did you know a man named Abe Williams. You stated you did. You asked why I was looking for the police chief, which he was at the time. I answered back with I wanted to destroy Abe and his entire family." Ty "I remember. And I told you maybe we could help each other out." Mona "Indeed you did. And like the say, the rest is history. You and I came up with this master plan to take down the Williams family. You funded this entire operation. So tell this court right now, why you wanted Abe and his family out of the picture." Ty "I needed my own person in the job of being police chief. So I could do what I pleased." Mona "Do you mean sell drugs and kill people?" Ty "I had an empire to run. And none of this would be happening to us now if you had just stuck to the script you damned lunatic. You were never to try and kill Daniel. You messed up and blew everything." Mona "I did no such thing. I got tired of being your lackey. I had my own goals. You were moving to slow for me. You told me you would help me. And what did you do? Plot and scheme to pry Jenn away from Mike. That was all you was worried about. You get to have all the fun while I had to creep around town." Ty "This plan was so delicate, it could not be rushed. We could not afford to make a mistake. But you didn't give a damn about that. So this is it huh Mona? You're finally about to burn in hell for your crimes and you want to take me with you huh?" Mona "You catch on quick. Your in this just as much as I am." Ty "Fine, I won't let you be the one to do it then. I'll do it to myself." Ty then looks at Judge Hatchet. "Your honor, I was in on it from the start. I helped Mona with some of her crimes. I funded her whole operation. But I had no idea she was making clones of Daniel and God knows who else." Judge Hatchet "So your admitting you were an accomplice in this grand scheme?" Mona "Yes your honor. That is what he is saying. He took advantage of my emotional state for his own personal gain." Ty "You were more then willing. In fact you were more thirsty than I to take out the entire Williams clan." Mona "I was looking for Abe only. You had other ideas." Judge "Alright enough. Mr. Hutchins, is to be put into custody immediately." Police officers rush over to Tyler as Karl and Jenn stand up in shock. Karl "Your honor, this is a mistake. Mona is lying." Judge "Order in the court." Jenn and Santino are stunned. Karl, walking up toward him "Wait before you take my son away. I have to say something please!" Judge "Alright, wait a minute. Let this man say what he has to." Ty look confused at his father. Karl "Son, Jenn and Santino have been sleeping with each other behind your back." Ty is stunned as Karl looks back at Jenn and Santino. "You didn't think my son was going to jail and you two would have it scott free did you?" Judge "Alright enough. Take Mr. Hutchins into custody." The police escort Ty out of the courtroom. Ty is unable to take his eyes off of Jenn and Santino. Ty is now out of eye sight as the Judge tries to gain order back after being disrupted by the announcement of an affair. Jenn and Santino look at each other. Jenn then leaves the courtroom. Santino walk up to Karl. Santino "That was a low blow." Karl "Just as low as you got with Jenn? You didn't think I was going to make it easy for you two to be together did you? Just because my son is going to jail doesn't mean nothing. I know my son and he will seek revenge on you and your little blonde slut." Santino "I know your son too. And I bet you won't escape his wrath either. Especially after I tell him you knew about Jenn and I and failed to tell him. Not so smart after all are you dummy?" And then Santino walks off to find Jenn, leaving Karl to think about what Ty will say to him when he learns he already knew about the affair. Episode 117: Ashley Shares a SECRET! Written by ML Cooks, Tara Smith and J. Lee Becker   Huntington Memorial Hospital Karim lies on his hospital bed, unconscious but alive after being hit by Ashley and run over by Sabryn, as LaDonna slowly walks in. She looks around, making sure she's alone, and then she slowly runs her hand across Karim's arm, as she flashes back to the horrifying moment when she found Karim's body on the side of the road. LaDonna "Oh, Karim….you don't know how glad I am that you're still with us….the blood transfusion was a success, and hopefully you'll be fine…" A tear drops from LaDonna's eye when she looks at his heavily bandaged face. LaDonna "You don't know how much it would've hurt me if I lost you….you mean so much to me, Karim. It may not seem like it, but you do. Working together all the time at Ivory…there's no one out there like you…I love it…." LaDonna looks away for a moment, but slowly turns her head back to Karim. LaDonna "I…..I…." LaDonna pauses as she stares at Karim. LaDonna "I love…you….Karim. Tears are seen in LaDonna's eyelids as she confesses this. LaDonna "Maybe its awful of me, maybe I shouldn't, but I do. Ever since we met, there's just something about you….I know you have Alexis, and I've held back…yes I claimed to not have anything for you, maybe I wouldn't admit it to myself….but this situation made me realize…I do love you, I can't lose you, Karim…." LaDonna lightly touches his face… LaDonna "But…I guess I will…because I know you and Alexis are together….I know you love her…and I'll step aside for her, as long as you're happy….but I wish you could know….that you're the one for me, Karim. You always were…there was no other man in my life like you, no other man for me….you're the man for me, you are the one, Karim, you have been, and you will be forever…" LaDonna begins to cry as she clenches her fist, trying to remain in control but she can't. LaDonna "And I'll always love you….I always will….and yes, I will let you and Alexis be together, you two can be happy once you recover….but I don't know if I can watch you two much more…not after this. I'm sorry, but its so hard….its breaking my heart every second. And that's why, I'm leaving Pasadena…I just can't deal with it…its not your fault, its mine….but I will, and you can continue with your life like this never happened….just never forget me, Karim, please…don't forget me." LaDonna stands, and as she silently cries, she turns around and begins to walk away, leaving Karim behind, but suddenly….she feels something on her hand, and turns to see Karim grabbing her hand!       The Blue Note Karl walks in and grabs a seat at the bar. He orders a scotch. As he drinks, he thinks back to yesterday when the guards were escorting Ty away in cuffs. He then wonders what his son will say to him now knowing he already knew about the affair Jenn was with Santino. This is a conversation Karl is not looking forward to. His thoughts are interrupted when the bartender deliver Karl another drink. Karl drinks it. He looks over at the entrance and sees Patti Labelle. Karl is stunned, and decides to get up and greet her. Karl "The wonderful and lovely Patti Labelle." Patti "Thank you darling. I remember seeing you at the triple funeral. Now correct me if I'm wrong but I believe Ty is your son right?" Karl "Indeed he his. And you got two girls, Ria and Jasmine." Patti "Those are my babies." Karl "That's nice. I just came over to tell you how much of a fan I am." Patti "Thank you darling, I really appreciate that. Would you like to have a drink Mr. Hutchins? I am having dinner with my girls but it looks like they are not here yet." Karl "Please, call me Karl, and I would be delighted to have a drink with you." Karl escorts her to the bar. Patti sits first then Karl does the same. Patti orders a glass of champagne when the bartender approaches her. Patti "So Karl. What do you do here in Pasadena?" Karl "I help my son run his hotel. TC Hotel." Patti " Yes, I have heard lots about it. It's a really fancy 5 star hotel. Didn't your son just get arrested yesterday?… Karl "Yes he did. But he won't be in there for long. TC Hotel is sitting very nice right now. Being only open for ten years now. I am also in the processes of diversifying my assets. Going to be investing in local companies here in Pasadena. Now is the perfect time with the economy in shambles." Patti "I know about it honey. My ticket sales have been down for the last few months. People can't afford to see Miss Patti sing. So I had to get a job here singing from time to time. Daniel was so nice to hire me." Karl "I would love to hear you sing." Patti "Can you sing Karl?" Karl, chuckling, "You're funny. I couldn't hold a note if my life depended on it." Patti "You have a nice smile Karl." Karl "Not more beautiful than yours." Patti "I tell you what Karl. I like you. I think we should go on a date. Miss Patti will sing for you darling." Karl "It would be my pleasure." Patti "How about tomorrow evening. You can pick Miss Patti up around 8. " Karl "See you then." Karl leans in and kisses Patti on her cheek as Jasmine walks in and sees this sweet scene of affection. Patti gets up and walks over to her table as Karl sips on the rest of his drink, happy, he scored a date with the infamous Patti Labelle. Karl "You still got your touch old man." He says to himself.     Downtown Pasadena, TC Hotel Alexis darkens her room and closes the drapes after just having taken a shower. She lights some candles and pours herself a glass of wine. She then takes her glass and sits close to her balcony sitting her glass down next to a book that lays on an end table. She takes a seat and picks up Ashley's diary. She studies it, it being her sister's diary. She sheds a tear. Alexis "I wish you were here sister. Maybe I'll learn something about you. And maybe I can find out if you wrote in here about me helping you when everyone thought you were dead. If that were to get out I would lose Karim for sure. And I got LaDonna breathing down my neck." She takes a sip of her wine and then opens the diary to begin reading a few entries. As she reads it, she is baffled and puts the pieces together on why Ashley was the way she was. January 18th... 1988 Dear diary, another day of pain, mom's new boyfriend Charles raped me and molested me, I hate it, I wish that I could just run away, where there will be no more pain, where I can just be free to do whatever I want, I told mom about it, like she gives a fu(k, she said she doesn't believe that Charles would do that to me, God, I wish I could just kill myself and end my pain. Why can't things get better? I'm a good girl, I do well in school, and I treat everyone really nice why can't they do the same back? When I came home from school mom yelled at me and hit me, because I forgot to do the dishes before I left for school May 18th 1988. Dear diary, here is a poem expressing how I feel right now. Broken tears and broken hopes, no one takes me seriously, they think it's a joke, wishing to end my sh!tty as s life, finishing off the pain and strife, why can't I just die instead of cry, pain and agony is all I see, misunderstood is what I'm cursed to be, I should just hang myself, and end the pain, no more tears and no more gain. They won't rape me anymore, and no one at school will call me a whore, telling me that I just want more. I' wanna do it tonight, I'm done with the sh!t, I'm done with the fights. July 21 1995... Dear diary, I am 16 today, fu(k it, I'm going to run-away, I have an aunt in Pasadena that knows me, and wants me to come live with her. I'm getting out of Detroit, I'm done!!!!!!!!! So, hopefully once I move there, things will get better, and I can finally live a good and happy life, like I've always wanted to. September 29, 2004 I met Bryan today, he is the love of my life, and I hope to get married with him one day, we hooked up at a bar in Pasadena, that was 3 days ago, he hasn't called me back since then, he might be busy with work, I'll just wait by the phone for him to call. *Sighs* May 5, 2007 Dear Diary, I am getting fed up with Sabryn…she is the only thing standing in the way of me and Bryan being together! She has him wrapped around her little finger, I know who he truly loves. I hate so many people…Natalia, all those pigs who raped me, but Sabryn is the worst. She's a bitch…she gets to have everything that she doesn't deserve! Bryan, all that money, a wonderful mansion…why can't I have all those things?! Why do I have to be the one who's out in the cold?! Well, not for long, I am going to bring that gutter snipe down a few notches! By the time I'm done with her, Bryan will be mine, and she'll be squealing for mercy. I don't know why everyone in this town loves Sabryn…why did Bryan even fall for her?! What makes her so special?! Bryan's the only one who ever showed me compassion, yet everyone else just sees me as the psycho who got ran over….not for long, though! I'm excited for the day she'll be out of the picture, and Bryan and I will be together. May 17, 2008 Dear Diary, My sister Lexis knows I'm alive now…I revealed myself to her and she got out of jail…she's one of the few friends I have in this world. She's been a big help, she's been babysitting little Bryan Jr., and she hasn't told anyone that I'm alive. She's even been keeping it from that guy she likes: Karim. I'm glad Lexis never had to go through what I did with those guys our mom dated, the only problem is that I don't think she entirely sees the great love Bryan and I have…but she's been very willingly assisting, and with her help, I can be reunited with Bryan in no time! She can have Karim, and I'll have Bryan. May 29th, 2008 Dear Diary, Today I did something I expected to do someday, but…it felt weird, and it feels like everything's different after this. I killed Dahlia Salem, she was a woman Natalia hated even more than Sabryn or me…she even hired some drug dealer to try to kill her once, I think. I don't have any problems with Dahlia, diary, I really don't…but I had to kill her. She caught me in Natalia's hospital room, I had no choice…so I kidnapped her, took her down to the train tracks, and just let a train plow her over…I wanted Natalia to die when I shot her, and I plan to kill that bitch Sabryn if I need to, but its just…I've never killed anyone before…it felt good, but to watch someone's life just leave them because of me…I mean, wow. I almost don't know how to explain it, and maybe a part of me wonders if I shouldn't kill anyone more…wait, no, I can't think like that. I don't care. I'm going to kill whoever gets in my way, whatever it takes!   June 6 2008 Dear Diary, I never really told you how Dr. Diego nursed me back to health after I was ran over, did I? Well, Diego's not the best guy in the world, he's sort of creepy but I came to him after I nearly died….this was when I began to hatch my plans to become the "Lady in Red". I had to be under his care for awhile, and he is a good doctor, and helped me set up my "death". Diego was also the one who helped me steal Natalia's baby, but I'll talk about that later. Sept 10 2008 Dear Diary, You know, I'm really going to be happy when I can reveal myself to Bryan and Sabryn…its gotten so boring stalking them. For months and months, all I've been doing is spying on him, and mainly Sabryn…observing, plotting…its been useful but tiresome at the same time. I'm just glad Sabryn's dumb enough not to notice me, and that I'm smart enough to keep Bryan from seeing me. I guess I can thank my partner-in-crime, Mona, for that…she's taught me a lot, I've sort of been working with her, she just hasn't directly assisted me in anything. But anyway, soon this whole stalking game will end, and I can destroy Sabryn's life!   Sept, 11 2008 Dear Diary, Another thing I really never had the time to write down was how I learned about Natalia and Bryan sleeping together…during my time as the LiR, I overheard Bryan and that gross tranny Rufus talking…apparently, Bryan slept with that stuck up bitch Natalia, and she filmed it all! She took advantage of my man, when I found out about that little particular detail, I discovered I may have a little more competition…I was infuriated, and couldn't stand Natalia. Sabryn's worse, but Natalia isn't something to preach about…but after that, I knew what I had to do. Maybe I'll tell you about that another time. Sept 17 2008 Dear Diary, After finding out about Natalia and Bryan and telling Lexis I was alive, I hatched such a great plan…it's a plan that got me the wonderful baby I had today, but I'll get to that later on. Basically, I hate Natalia, I mean how could she sleep with my man?! I knew Natalia was hosting a fashion show with her company that she's tried to take from my sister, Divine Design, and by this time Natalia had a lot of enemies. I went there, and watched everyone, especially Natalia. This was where I'd exact my revenge on her for sleeping with Bryan…when she was on the runway, I took a gun, and shot her! Nearly killed her…I wish she had died, but there are so many suspects since so many people were attacking her that day, I'll never be discovered!   Sept 25 2008 Dear Diary, I shot Natalia, like I told you the other day, but this wasn't the end of my big plan. You know how Diego's been helping me, well, I concocted a devious plan with him: Since Natalia was shot, he'd use that as a way to help send her into premature labor…it was obvious that the baby she was carrying in her stomach was Bryan's, not that other guy Mark's, so I knew that I'd get her out of the picture, and this would for sure give me more of a chance to get Bryan…Diego successfully sent her into labor, stole her baby, gave it to me, and just told her and Mark that the baby died! Oh its so great, now I have my little Bryan Jr…he's my son now, not Natalia's!!! And the time is coming so close to when I can reveal myself to Bryan and Sabryn…I think I'll crash their wedding, maybe! Hopefully the next time we meet, diary, Bryan will be mine! Sept 26th, 2008 Dear Dairy, today I feel so good. Today is the day I expose myself to the world. I am going to stop Sabryn's wedding to my man. I am going to get my man back and I can finally have the loving family I dreamt of for years. Nothing is standing in my way any longer. I can't wait to see the look on that Bitch's face when she sees me. I win again bitches. Ashley has come out on top again. I am no longer a loser. If only my other sister could be here to share in this day. I wish I could of met her. I wish I could have told my other sister about her. Mom told me if I told Alexis, the golden child, about her giving up her first born he would kill me. But more about this later diary, my man is waiting for me. The next time we meet, I'll be writing to you as Mrs. Bryan Datillo. Sounds so heavenly! Alexis finishes reading Ashley's diary and is in shock and awe. "I have another sister out there!"       Back at the Blue Note Jasmine walks over to Patti's table and kisses her on her cheek. Patti "Hey darling. How was work?" Jasmine "It was fine, Had another session with Daniel today. Where's my sister?" Patti "I don't know where that knuckle head is….Oh wait here she is now." They both look over and see Ria walking over to them. Patti "Hey darling." Ria "Hello. Hey Jazzy." Jasmine "Hi your self. You're in a great mood." Ria "I am. I had me some good ass dic-" She pauses, almost forgetting her mother was in her presence. Patti "Don't you dare say it. You better watch your mouth. Miss Patti don't want to hear my baby girl talk like a tramp." Ria "Relax. I caught myself. I meant to say I met me a nice man." Jasmine "That's good. Where is he?" Ria "Damn you nosey girl." Patti "I want to know too. " Ria "Love to be all up in mines. Anyway, he's back in Springfield." Patti "What is a Springfield?" Ria "That's where he is from, Springfield, Illinois." Jasmine "I don't understand. If you met him, why is he there and you are here?" Ria "Look , damn it, that's enough. Yall getting to nosey for me. It was just sex ok?! That's it, that's all." Patti, gasping "Don't get your mouth washed out with soap. I didn't raise Miss Losey Goosey. You are a Labelle! We have a reputation to uphold. You can't go out here and be spreading your snacks out to every one." Ria, rolling her eyes, " Let me live my life. I am damn near 35 years old. I don't need you to be telling me how I need to live." Jasmine "Don't talk to momma like that." Patti "Well you ain't doing something right! Yes, you are 35, and single, no children and you don't even have a job. It's a good thing Momma Patti is here." Ria "Can we just eat? I'm hungry as hell." Patti "I don't know where you get all this attitude from girl." Ria "I got it from that song you did back in the 80's. New attitude." Patti "Don't be getting fresh with Patti." Jasmine, interrupting before things could get any more tense. "I got a date tomorrow." Ria and Patti both look at her. Ria "A date? Damn you just got here to town. I barely can get one. Who you got a date with?" Jasmine, smiling from ear to ear, "Daniel." Patti "Daniel,…? Jazz, I thought we already talked about this." Ria "Daniel? He's white! What you dating a white man for? They're nasty." Jasmine gives Patti a look. Patti arches an eye brow. Patti "Don't you talk like that. I didn't raise you to be a racist. White, Black, brown, or purple, we are all God's children's." Ria "I don't like white people. It's plain and simple. They created crack to destroy our peoples." Jasmine "Give me a break." Ria "They hosed us down and got their dogs on us. Hell our country fought a war to keep us enslaved." Patti "All that has passed us now. You're so naive." Ria "Not at all. I just will never forget what white people did to my people. People act like now that Obama is our new half black president, everything is ok. White America was quick to clamor, " Martin Luther King's dream has been fulfilled" Please!… I bet White America will never elect an all black president. He got some white in him. Hell they had to bankrupt the country before they gave it to some body with some color." Jasmine "I am really sorry to hear you feel like this." Ria "I am just glad my daddy ain't white like yours." Patti "Now that's enough. I will not hear no more of this." Jasmine "Look at what you did Victoria! You're upsetting momma." Ria "Oh, here we go. I'm the loud ignorant one. I'm the ghetto one huh?" Jasmine "You know you are! I can't believe you would use my father's race as a negative thing to use against me!" Suddenly Ria's breast begin to itch like they never have before. It's an itch she's never experienced before. So bad is the itch, Ria put's her hand down into her strapless dress and begin scratching them, in public, as everyone watches her, leaving her mother and sister to look at her in total shock. Patti "Have you no shame? What the hell is the matter with you? You better take that nasty mess to the bathroom! How unwomanly of you." Ria "Is it my fault my breast been acting funny lately!?" Jasmine "Sounds like you need to have an exam." Ria pauses, realizing her breast has been acting funny lately. She really ponders going to have a breast exam. Ria get's nervous.     Back Downtown, Pasadena City Court After a recess in the trial because of Sister Pat assaulting Judge Hatchett, the court is called back into session. Miss Jenkins, at this point, is the only Williams there, and Jack and Mona both sit in their respective seats as Judge Hatchett comes back out. Judge Hatchett, sitting down in her chair "Will the defense please stand?" Mona nods, lightly smiling, and she stands up Judge Hatchett "After the events today, and the witnesses questioned by both the prosecution and the defense, and examining any evidence we have, I've made a decision on the verdict and sentencing of Kelis Williams." Jack, Mona, and Miss Jenkins all listen intently as the Judge announces Mona's verdict… Judge Hatchett "Kelis Williams, the city of Pasadena hereby declares you guilty on all charges presented here today!" Jack grins, and glances at Mona, who is still smiling eerily. She even winks at Jack Judge Hatchett "And now, your sentencing: Kelis Williams, the city of Pasadena and I hereby sentence you to some time in a mental institution. No jail time, and all you will have to do is spend time in a mental evaluation ward. After hearing all these testimonies today, I feel that you may not be fit to go to prison, nor is there enough evidence to give you the death sentence. You need some serious help my child" Jack, angrily standing up "Your honor, I-" Judge Hatchett "My decision is final! If and when Miss Williams gets out of the mental ward, all charges will be void." Sister Patterson, suddenly bursting back into the courtroom, "Say WHAT NOW?! My daughter, the devil, this woman, has committed so much sin-" Judge Hatchett, standing up as well "GET THAT LUNATIC OUT OF HERE!" Miss Jenkins, turning towards Pat "Now honey, my granddaughter didn't deserve no jail time, this is for the best. " Baliffs approach Sister Pat once again, but she holds out her Bible. Sister Patterson "Don't you touch me! I got the Lord on my side!" Judge Hatchett, groaning "That's it, Sister Patterson will report back to this court in 36 hours for sentencing. Charges, disputing court proceedings, menacing, assault, and mental instability. this trial is over! Court dismissed!" Judge Hatchett leaves the courtroom, and Mona laughs in success, as Jack stands around in fury and disbelief. Sister Pat, sitting down in shock, chest beginning to hurt, "How can this be?!!?!?! My daughter who will now be known as the devil, just got off scot-free for every single sin she committed!" Next Time on S.T.E.A.M. Life goes on for Mona!
  8. What a very nice opening scene. I loved Blakes reaction and it's not normal for me to like him but his reaction was spot on and then London talked about the wedding vows. VERY NICE And Ava's and James's scene. What a great follow up. I love how at first James didn't or wouldn't like really acknowledge her feelings for it was about how she found him. And she didn't make it about her. It was about Bobbie. I cant wait to see where this takes them GREAT scene ready set match. Ginny is going to beat that ass. I can't wait. it was a long time coming and so well built up Again this is my fav storyline. I really like the characters of Ginny, Taneisha and Owen and it's funny how much hype this storyline received on the back burner at that. Poor Alley. It just keep getting worse and worse for her. Damn when is she going to be vindicated. I am really rooting for her. I hope Jon and Alley make their way back to each other. I liked Victor's flashback. I really feel bad for him. I think he needs help. O I LOVED NAN'S scene with Carlos and Jenny. I love the interactions and the witty dialong. I could pciture nan acting that way in my head. SO funny. I love it. I would have took the 20,000 if it was me. Can't wait to see the court scenes." I'm advised not to talk to you" LMAO LOVE IT Alicia a slut. Damn Will died over her. She man hungry. Wow what a damned good episode for Blake. I felt his pain. This always has been an interesting Quad. I hope Alley and Jon get back togetehr but then I like the idea of LJ Jon and London being a family. I am torn. It took great writing skills for that and it took a long time for this build up. All those episodes ago.(how many seasons ago did i begin reading?) It's has been a nice ride. Your newer readers would not understand. This is going to be a hot storyline this season. Finally Jon finds out ITS ABOUT TIME> And Alley pregnant. its getting juicy LOL LOved Ginny punching Tanisha. I know it is on. OMG the moment is finally here. I dont think I am feeling the WIll and Lenvy Ghost storyline. Where is Jace. I am not liking Alicia niether. So glad Nan and Bryan made it offical. I love them What I dont get is how is nate kissing this child? He may have amnsesia but is he sick and dumb too? great episode Matt. Moved very fast, ( and it was long) O and loved the marli pic. Nice touch. I noticed!!
  9. Thanks Redd. I am glad Lynn is a hit already. She is about to become involed in a MAJOR storyline. I had a feeling she would be a fit. To me, I though Mona's trial moved slow. But I am glad u didn't think so. I was worried how would readers feel about a trial strected out over 3 episodes. There was so much mmore I could have done with it. Beacsue the size of the trial and the amount I had to cover, i also didn't know how these last few eps would turn out considering I could only write in a limited number of scenes to balaance out the trial. Thanks for reading Redd. It's nice to know I have not lost my touch. Just know I am working towards a new umbrella plot, that will end up being the biggest thing to ever hit STEAM. Redd where ur seires at? I see you got a new one
  10. did u re cast refae and if so why? And who is Noah and what happend to Montel Williams? Again the star story was the battle for ceo. Loved all the drama surrounding it and now it's time for the brother to go head to head. I LOVE IT. I was nervous as the votes began to pour in for Elizabeth. Such a genius plot!!
  11. Of all characters u decide to keep Marli. What about Trella and my other favs. why start wit some one i dont like. Every time I see marli it remind me of my name Marlin. Ria going to be like sis Pat huh, Miss Pat as u call her, lol can't wait for this
  12. Now who is Kellan? CC is vile, sending her own child away? becasue of a man ?lol I love nan and Bryan and alway did but I am confused on how Nan is being sued. I had to laugh and she said make are the bad people go away, DUH nan u r the bad people. Desk sex, yummy God Marli is still here. Love Tanisha and Ginny's rivarly. THese two crack me up So Lena sees ghost. Well she can go see sister Patterson. i wonder where u r going with this one though So if Will and Lenvy are ghost what are they going to be doing? Shouldn't they ride off into the sunset together and call it a day? WOW I can't belive Ginny reacted like that. I bet she is going to beat Nisha's ass. After she get out of jail that is for acting a damned fool at the airport I lloved Bobbies dialog and interaction with Steph. TOO FUNNY. Will Jon ever find out what Marissa did? NICE ENDING and I love you u interwine the scenes back and forth
  13. LMAO Greta is mad. She said she dont care who drinks it as long as it's somebody huh? LMAO like fu(k it huh? Maggie and Abe engaged? Very nice. JAN IS STILL [!@#$%^&*] LOONEY But again Euggie and Lucas, YUCK! But I mean it is nice they over came that and the last scene was acutually emotional. What the hell is Jan going to do now?
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  15. Well It's been a long time boss and I'm back, it's offical. I hope you are not far behind. I love the casting of Jesse. I see a hot couple in Jesse and Michelle Did you recast Coop? God I hope not and if you didn't change that pic back. Love this big CEO storyline. I love buisness storylines them selves and this has so many people invovled and in so many ways but then again, I expect nothing less from you jay. Nice umbrella plot. So JUICY and seems set up so WELL. VERY WELL I love Alan's out burst. I like Alan in genereal. Well I am back and dont leave us hanging like this I also think what Cassie did was a nice thing
  16. On the outskirts of Pasadena, Kiko walks into a building with the name “For the Birds Mental Rehabilitation Center.” He walks over to a receptionist. Kiko “I am here to see the patient.” Receptionist “One second Mr. Whitfield.” She makes a phone call. “Mr. Whitfield is here to see the patient….Ok.” She hangs up the phone and looks at Kiko. “You can go back.” Kiko “Thank you.” Kiko is buzzed through a pair of double doors. He walks into a common area with mentally handicapped people. He sees some playing tag, and others playing with Barbie dolls. He looks in the group of people and tries to find whom he is looking for. He sees a beautiful brown skinned woman. He walks over to her. He kneels down in front of her and looks into her eyes. The woman is starring off into space. Kiko “I’m here. Do you need anything?” The woman looks into Kiko’s eyes with a look of evilness. She speaks, “She’s a slut. She’s a whore. She’s a Bitch!” Kiko, shaking his head in frustration, “You have to let this go. That happened many years ago. That’s why you are in this place now. Because you can’t let the past go.” Woman “A bitch! A slut! A whore!” Kiko “What the hell am I paying this place for? You aren’t getting any better.” He stands up and kisses the woman on her forehead. “I’ll be back soon. Please let this go. It’s destroying you.” Woman “Slut whore Bitch.” Kiko just walks off leaving the woman to herself. Episode 116: Slut, Whore, Bitch! Written by: ML Cooks and Tara Smith Script Editor: J. Lee Becker   Downtown Pasadena, Court House Tyler, Jenn, Santino, and Karl arrive at Mona’s trial in time to see Everyone looking at Daniel, the man Mona tortured to, almost death walks up to the stand, and takes his oath. He gulps as he sits down, and Jack approaches him. Jack “Now, Mr.Cosgrove….you know first hand what Miss Williams is like, don’t you? This mad-woman tortured you more than she even did the previous witness…tell me, did she kidnap you, chain you up in a bunker, and torture you?” Daniel, vividly remembering it, “Yes, yes she did. She’s ruthless, she’s not even a human being…she deserves whatever you give to her, trust me.” Jack “Can you describe to me how exactly she tortured you?” Daniel “Oh, you really wanna know how? You really want to how she tortured me? I wouldn’t even know where to begin….the little bitch left me chained in a dungeon in a standing position, she didn’t feed me, she hit me with a shovel…you think people like Ashley Jones are bad, this woman defines the word “psycho”. And I’m damn glad to see her in jail.” Jack “You see, your honor. No one here wants Miss Williams to be released…they all are terrified of her! Now, Mr. Cosgrove…tell me exactly how Miss Williams kidnapped you.” Daniel “She gave me drugs, they caused me to try to rape Lauren, the late love of my life…she called the guy who was put to death for my murder, Chris, and he came to my house to try to save her…but suddenly, it all blacked out…and that’s when the bitch herself came in….” Lauren "Let me go! Your hurting me!" Chris, who is now inside the house "Don't you hurt her Daniel! It's me and you now and I have waited for you to show up. Keep screaming Lauren so I can find you" He instructs Lauren , trying to make his way through the pitch black house. Mona, after surveying the neighborhood very well, pulls up in Lauren's driveway. She grabs an aluminum can that has a hose connected to it and gets out her car. She goes to the side window and begins to pump chemicals into Lauren's house from the can. Daniel begins to kiss Lauren and he rips her shirt off. "Give me some!" Lauren tries to push Daniel off of her. Chris finally finds his way to the back bedroom where he hears Daniel and Lauren." I'm going to kill you Daniel!" Just as he takes another step, Chris passes out, followed then by Daniel and then Lauren, breathing in a secret chemical agent Mona has pumped into the house. Mona goes back to her car, and being the strong woman she is, drags one of the body-filled body bags into Lauren's house. Using a flash light to find her way through the house, she drags the body bag to the back bedroom. "Say good bye to Daniel" Mona pulls out a butcher knife from her bag of tricks. Daniel “That crazy ass woman cloned me, and my clone was there, stabbed, and that’s how she set up Chris for my murder….when I wasn’t dead at all, she really had me chained up at some place…in a bizarre dungeon of hers on a mountain, to be exact. Mona ashes her drugs stick against the skin of a person who is chained up in the chains and cuffs. Mona "Welcome to hell Daniel!" Daniel screams as the red hot cherry of the blunt burns his skin After hearing that, even Sister Patterson is speechless and is finding it harder and harder to defend her evil daughter. Madea “Do you see what your affair with Don did to your daughter? You created a demon!” Daniel “EVERYONE thought I was dead….the only people who knew I was alive was Mona, and her other prisoner Sharan. That was enough torture, being away from the woman and people I loved. She chained me up for SO LONG, I begged her to let me go, but she didn’t, and just kept on with her disgusting torture….” Daniel "Please, I am begging you. Please let me go. I didn't hear nothing, see nothing nor do I know nothing. Just please let me go." Mona stops digging, and wipes sweat that is rolling down her face "No can do. If I let you go, then what kind of fun will I have? I won't be able to get my thrills." Daniel "Haven't you tortured me enough? You shot me, got me hooked on Meth, played with my mind." Mona "Enough? Don't think so. I am just getting started." She takes her shovel and bashes Daniel's knee cap with it. Daniel screams out in pain. Daniel “And after she had enough, she left me for dead, she left me there in that disgusting place! And she didn’t care that she was basically killing a guy, she just shrugged it off as she took off on her submarine! It was like I was a piece of trash, DAMN HER! My former boss Ty ended up finding me after he blew the bunker up….” As Ty and Karl, who are about 200 ft. away from Mona's resort holds a trigger in his hand. Karl "I'm an old man for Christ's sake. I can't be out here in this heat slaving away placing bombs like a terrorist" Ty "Just shut the hell up!" Karl "I won't have you talking to me like this. I am your father. You will respect me. Now what is bombing this cement block supposed to do?" Ty " It's obvious Mona is trying to hide something. Why else would she cover her resort with cement. With any luck I hope I find some answers and Mona. When I see her, she's dead on sight." Ty presses the trigger and Mona's Mountain resort explodes with Daniel trapped inside.......... Daniel “And then…he and his father were digging through the rubble, and they found me….thank goodness they did….” They walk over to what was once Mona's infamous Mountain Resort. Karl and Ty now sort through the steaming debris. Ty hears someone coughing. Ty "Did you hear that?" Karl "Sounds like a man coughing" Ty and Karl move debris and rubble even faster to locate this person. Ty "Keep making sounds so we can find you." Then Ty ,moves the million dollar piece of debris, when he moves it he sees Daniel's face Daniel, beginning to choke up as he thinks about what was happening at that very moment he was rescued, “And while that happened……C-Chris….a local around Pasadena…was….he was….put to death for my….my….murder….because of that woman, she let a man….go to death row because of what SHE did, and he was innocent the whole time, he didn’t do a thing….” The officer start's the procedure and the lethal toxin's are injected into Chris's veins, slowly paralyzing him. Chris's eyes shut for the very last time. His last sights are of police officers standing all around him waiting for him to die. Chris never thought he would die like this, And with that, Chris expresses his last possible thought. Chris's heart monitor tells the story of a dead heart. Chris is dead, for a crime he did not commit……… Daniel “He died, and he’s never coming back….damnit your honor, that’s why you can’t let her go! That woman, Mona or Kelis or whatever the hell her name is, let a man DIE. She cloned me, she got me hooked on meth, she hit me with a shovel, a big screen TV, taunted me, haunted me, she’s SCARRED ME FOREVER! So you cannot, and you will not, EVER let her go free! No matter what crap she dishes out! I still remember how horrified I was the freaking day she walked into the Church at Bryan and Sabryn’s wedding…” Mona holds her machine gun in her hand as Ashley, who just officially revealed herself to be back from the dead, Sabryn, Bryan, Dre, Daniel, Tyler, Ria, her famous mother Patti Labelle, Sharan, and Kevin all look at Mona in shock. Daniel and Ty are even more stunned from the others. Daniel has flash backs of Mona shooting him and making it look like an attempted suicide, then he remembers Mona drugged him with Meth to keep him from exposing what she did, then he remembers Mona kidnapping him and holding him hostage in her dungeon then torturing him day after day. Then he remembers Mona leaving him there for dead when Mona tried to bomb her dungeon. Daniel has this raging fire inside of him. He hollers out, and not even phased by the machine gun he charges after Mona, jumping on top of her and tackling her to the ground. Daniel then begins to choke Mona, as Mona gags, and coughs. Daniel "Fu(king Bitch! I am going to kill you!" He then grabs Mona's neck and lifts it so Mona's head is off the ground, then Daniel begins to pound Mona's head into the church’s hard wooden floor. Daniel “I wanted to murder her, I really did! I hate her so much, she’s not even a human being….maybe that’ll show you how evil she is.” Jack “I think I’ve proven my point with Mr. Cosgrove. No more questions, your honor.” Judge Hatchett “Defense, would you like to cross examine the witness?” Mona, standing up and smirking at Daniel “Certainly, your honor.” Mona walks towards Daniel, who’s anger flares up just at Mona being inches away from him. Mona “Now, Mr. Cosgrove….you told the prosecution all about how I kidnapped you and tortured you in this underground bunker. But of course, you left out that you helped me with a lot of things, and it was also mentioned that you were hooked on meth. How do we know that, with you on drugs, anything you claim is true? You may be lying, you may be remembering totally wrong! Who‘s to say you‘re not high now?” Daniel “EXCUSE ME?! What the HELL are you talking about? YOU got me hooked on meth, and everything I said was as true as it gets! Sharan was there, she can confirm it!” Mona “Oh I think I already made it clear that Miss Johnson can’t be the most trusted witness here. And neither can you…Mr. Cosgrove, anyone who was on drugs at the time of their supposed kidnapping can’t be trusted on the stand! Not to mention, you tried to commit suicide by shooting yourself.” Daniel, who is fuming now and wants to lunge at Mona but holds himself back “Whoa, whoa, whoa, EVERYONE knows that you did that! EVERYONE! YOU shot me and made it look like I tried to kill myself, you dirty bitch!” Daniel then flashes back to the incident… Inside of Daniels car, Daniel is drinking heavily on a bottle of whiskey. He has a gun laying on the passenger seat. He looks at Laurens house and begins to sob. "I messed up again. I lost Lauren and my freedom." He downs some more alcohol, as he drinks, the Lady in Black, wearing a black glove, reaches in the passenger seat window, grabs the gun and shoots Daniel point blank. The lady in black flees the scene leaving gun shot victim Daniel to die........ Daniel “It was all you, Mona, all you! I didn’t do a thing.” Mona “Says you! You claim I shot you, who knows if you actually shot yourself after all? Again, no one can trust anything you say on this stand! Not to mention, you did help deliver things to me for Tyler Christopher Hutchins.” Ty(leaning closer into Daniels ear to keep their conversation on the low) "One of my men dropped off a package on the bed in room 420. I want you to get it, try it out and if it is good go back to room 420 and then there will be a woman will be waiting for you." Daniel "A woman? What the hell is a woman gonna do with a pound of weed? Ty "Don't asks questions when we are getting money!" Daniel "....Bet. I hope it some good good, I need a lift right now." Ty "Now I must warn you, that the person buying this package is dressed in all black with a black veil. Don't be alarmed! Now she is to give you a stack. And please Daniel, don't mess this up and don't lose none of my money. I need all my chips!" Daniel " Ty relax man, you will get all 10 of your Ben Franks. I have never messed up any deal before have I?" Ty "Just go get my money. Time is money!" Daniel “You can’t pin any of this on me like you did Sharan, and I won’t let you make me look like some meth-addicted floozy who’s word is taken for nothing! Because DAMNIT, you DID do all that stuff to me! I should kill you right here and now for it, and how you’re trying to turn it around on me in-” Mona, interrupting “There you have it, Mr. Cosgrove’s outburst only proves my point. Defense has no more questions.” Judge Hatchett “Mr. Cosgrove, you may step down. “ Daniel, enraged at how Mona totally changed things around on him, gets off the stand and charges out of the courtroom. Outside, he sees Sharan sobbing. Daniel, sighing “Are you alright? “ Sharan, wiping her eyes “I….yeah, I am. I’m sorry, its just….Mona put me on full blast up there. She made it sound like to everyone, including Kevin, that I had a blast shooting Abe.” Daniel “If its any comfort, she did the same thing to me. I thought my testimony would be enough to take her down, but then, she swooped in and acted like my meth use totally discarded the testimony, and she also used how I helped her against me.” Sharan, shaking her head “I…I can’t believe she’s doing this, she’s such a monster. To do that to both of us…I can’t go back in there.” Daniel “Neither can I, not after this. How about…I take you to get some lunch?” Sharan, smiling lightly “I’d like that.” Sharan stands up and Daniel takes her hand, and they both walk off…     Back in the courtroom, the trial continues. Judge Hatchett “Prosecution, call your next witness.” Jack “Prosecution calls to the stand…Sister Patterson Williams!” Sister Pat, immediately jumping up, “And its about time! I’ve been hearing all this talk up here, and my God is displeased with all this! My sinner of a daughter has just been tormenting all these poor people on the stand, its time for me to make everything right!” Sister Pat walks up to the stand, and the baliff comes over for her to take the oath, and he holds out the Bible. Sister Pat, shaking her head “Oh no, sir, I brought my own Bible today. And not to mention my Holy Water. I always come ready for battle “ Sister Pat pulls out her faithful Bible and Holy Water. The baliff shakes his head and walks away as Jack walks up to the stand. Sister Pat, scratching her chin, looking at Jack, “Hmmmm….my third eye tells me there’s something off about you. Your honor, whatever happened to District Attorney Stacy?” Judge Hatchett “Lets just say she wanted a bigger role in the occurrences here around Pasadena.” Sister Pat “Well, I refuse to give my testimony to this man! All is not right with him, my third eye and the Lord are telling me so! And I do the Lord’s work and only the Lord’s work I do.” Mona, standing up “Objection, your honor: This woman is too mentally unstable to be questioned by the prosecution or the defense, I say she needs to step down. “ Judge Hatchett, looking at Sister Pat for a moment “Sustained. Sister Patterson Williams, please step down.” Sister Pat, looking at Judge Hatchett, confused, totally shocked as is the courtroom but a little happy they won’t have to be forced to listen to Sister Patterson put words and sounds together that amount to a hill of beans. “EXCUSE ME?! Your honor, I have come here today to set the record straight for the Lord, to give my daughter the justice she deserves-” Judge Hatchett “Its my ruling that you are unfit to be on the witness stand. Now, please step down!” Sister Pat, standing up, but she doesn’t get off the witness stand “YOU need to stand down if you are so insistent on destroying the Lord’s work! I am a servant of the Lord, I only do what he asks!” Sister Pat suddenly grabs her Bible and her Holy Water, and she JUMPS up and tackles Judge Hatchett! Judge Hatchett lets out a scream as Sister Pat pours Holy Water all over her, and begins to beat her with the Bible! Sister Pat “NO ONE WILL DISRUPT GOD’S WORK! NO ONE!” Sister Pat then THROWS Judge Hatchett out into the middle of the courtroom, and Miss Jenkins scowls as her daughter causes chaos. Sister Pat, sitting in Judge Hatchett’s chair “Now its time to PRAISE the Lord! Everyone get down on their knees and PRAY!!!! PRAY!!!! Especially you, Kelis, for you have committed so much sin! It was I who had to stop you from vandalizing my God’s House!!!!!!!!” Then out of no where, they hear a scream come from second floor balcony. A person, climbs up on the chandelier and swings across the air like George from The Jungle. Patti "Look, it's bird!" Ria "Naw, momma, that's a bat!" Kevin "It's my mother!" Sister Patterson jumps off the chandelier and lands on top of Daniel, knocking him off of Mona. Sister Patterson "Damn you devils! All this violence in my God's house. The devil is a liar. Every one stop this madness NOW!…. Yens all going to hell!" Sister Pat “And she is so evil, she won’t repent! We all gotta praise the Lord to show Kelis the error of her way-” Suddenly, Sister Pat is wrestled out of the judge’s seat by two bailiffs, and she struggles and screams out, but they both finally overpower her and begin to escort her out of the courtroom as everyone looks on in shock. But everyone stands up and gives out applause as they see Sister Patterson being escorted out. As Sister Patterson walks past her mother, Madea reaches out and smacks her up side the head. Judge Hatchett breathlessly gets up and goes to sit back down in her chair, and Holy Water is running down her hair and onto her suit. Judge Hatchett “That’s it, I’ve heard enough today. I do not believe anyone has anymore witnesses.” Mona, standing up and interrupting the judge “Your honor I have one more witness.” Everyone in the courtroom are confused, especially Jack. Jack “Objection, I was not notified about this. This is some sort of trick.” Mona “I am fighting for my life here. I have a right to defend myself. And this witness was last minute. “ Judge Hatchet “Overruled. Call your witness Miss Williams.” Mona “Thank you your honor.” Mona turns and looks out into the crowd with a broad smile. People wonder if they will be the one she calls upon. “You’re Honor, I call Tyler Christopher Hutchins to the stand!” The courtroom is shocked, chatter begins to increase. Ty is stunned that Mona is going to call him to the stand. Ty’s face begins to feel warm, as he sweats. Santino “Boss what is she doing?” Ty “She’s going to take me down with her. It’s over. The game is finally over. I’m going to jail. And if I do, you better make sure you kill the Williams family.” Jenn is stunned after hearing Ty say that. She’s convinced it’s time for Ty to get what’s coming to him. Ty stands up and he has a stare down with Mona. He slowly walks up to the stand and prepares to tango with Mona. Next time on S.T.E.A.M.: Mona’s VERDICT!!!!!!!        
  17. Pasadena City Court Judge Hatchett and the entire courtroom is shocked to hear that Mona will be representing herself! Jack Nicholson, the new District Attorney for Pasadena, stands! Jack "Objection, your honor! Miss Kelis Williams is insane and a psychopathic murderer, she is too unstable to defend herself!" Mona "My name is Mona not Kelis, and if I am too insane and unstable to defend myself, I am too insane and incoherent to stand trial. I am within my rights." She says smirking at Jack, letting him know from the start, this is not an open and shut case. Then suddenly, the court room hears this!,….. "Don't you dare talk about my daughter that way you dirty devil .My third eye is seeing clearly today. I sense evilness in him your honor. But it's ok. I got my holy water and bible handy and ready for war." Referring to the new DA Jack. Everyone in the courtroom knew who it was, the infamous and very sinful, Sister Patterson. Madea pulls her back down so she can sit down. "Don't you embarrass me in this court girl. I will give you something to make you cry. I don't know why I ever gave birth to you. I should of have had an abortion. Would have did the world great good……OOO, girl you so ugly, I just hate to look at ya." Sister Patterson "Don't talk to me like that Miss Jenkins! We need to pray that evilness out of you." Judge Hatchett, pounding her gavel, "Order in the court! …..Defense makes a valid point. It is unsure if Miss Williams is fit enough to stand consecutive trials and serve jail time, but she has been deemed fit enough to at least be here today, and every defendant does have the legal right to defend themselves. And Miss Williams, you will be referred to by your legal name, which is Kelis Williams." Jack glares at Mona as he sits down indicating, he won the first round, as everyone watches. Judge Hatchett putting her glasses on to look at the very long crime filled docket, "Now, Miss Williams is on trial for one count of stalking, six counts of torturing, drug possession and consumption, 2 counts of murder in the first degree," She pauses, shocked at the list so far. She looks at Mona, "Young lady, what is going on with you? This is unheard of." She looks back at the docket as Mona realizes, the judge is already sympathizing with her. Judge Hatchett " One count of manslaughter, two counts of rape, three counts of kidnapping, two counts of attempted murder, inducing panic at Can I Get a Witness Baptist Church-" Sister Pat, standing up, "Inducing panic and disrespecting MY GOD'S HOUSE! That there is the worst crime of all. I have never seen such blatant disrespect for the Lord in my life! I got something to say and if you don't know me by now, you will never never never know me. Everyone knows I am going to SAY IT NOW!! Your honor, God has been-" Miss Jenkins, grabbing Sister Pat and yanking her back down "Be quiet and SIT DOWN! I'm not going to tell you again. I will beat the hell outta you!" Judge Hatchett "Order, order in the court! Sister, I ask that you do not disrupt the court hearing, or I will have to remove you from the courtroom. Now, continuing…evading police, and two counts of drugging other people. Now, does the prosecution have an opening statement?" Jack, standing again, "Yes, yes we do, your honor. The prosecution is pushing for the highest punishment for the defendant: The death penalty. Kelis is a serious security threat to Pasadena and the world at large. And we will do whatever it takes to get that penalty. We have all the evidence, and I am sure we can top the defense." Judge Hatchett "Does the defense have an opening statement?" Mona, standing "Yes, and that is, that while I did those things, I have gone through so much, I simply cannot be blamed. Of course that is weak, but you shall see as I go along, your honor." Jack almost snorts, as Judge Hatchett looks to him. Judge Hatchett "Prosecution, call your first witness. Jack "Prosecution calls to the stand….Sharan Johnson!" Everyone turns and looks to Sharan. Sharan has a nervous and shocked look on her face, and she locks eyes with Kevin for a moment. She slowly gets up and heads to the witness stand. She sees Mona directly in front of her, and Mona gives her a small wink as Sharan takes oath. Jack, walking in front of the witness stand "Sharan Johnson…from what you've claimed and the evidence we've gathered, Miss Williams stalked you, kidnapped you, raped you, amongst other despicable things. Is this true?" Sharan, nodding "Yes, she's insane. That woman is obsessed with me, she thinks we're somehow in love. She TORTURED me on her island for months. Just to stay alive, I had to pretend to love that sick woman. I mean, its indescribable what she did. There is no other woman on this planet that is as crazy as her. She's demented, a psycho…it still hurts to think about it. I mean, I will never forget what she did to me. She took me away from the man I love, my town. My life. " Jack "Now, tell me specifically…did this woman, Kelis Williams, rape you?" Sharan, beginning to shake "Yes…yes…..she did…." Sharan then remembers the incident. Sharan "It…was brutal…" Mona walks toward Sharan Sharan "Please leave me alone." Mona "Never." She says grabbing her, and kissing her. Sharan bites Mona's lip and out of anger Mona punches Sharan in the face then bashes her head into the wall. Mona then pushes Sharan on the floor. Mona kneels down and tears Sharan's shirt off and massages her breast. Sharan tries to struggle and get up but Mona punches her in the face again and Sharan passes out. Mona unsnaps Sharan's bra and begins to lick her nipples while she places her hand into Sharan's panties and massages her clitoris. Mona has her way with Sharan as she lays unconscious. Sharan, getting teary "It was in her underground bunker, I was trying to escape…she violated my body, so easily…like I was just a piece of property…." Jack, turning towards the judge, "You see, your honor? Just this witness shows how evil this woman is, and how she needs to be killed, just so no one hurts like Miss Johnson. She was kidnapped, her body was treated like trash…the prosecution has no more questions." Jack sits down, as Sharan remains on the stand and she shakes at the sight of Mona, and Mona clenches her fist as she watches Jack smugly sit down, but she looks to the judge. Judge Hatchett "Would defense like to cross-examine the witness?" Mona, standing, eerily smiling, "Yes, your honor, I would." Kevin, in the back of the courtroom "No….oh Lord no…please let Sharan be alright, God…." Mona smiles lightly as she approaches Sharan, who is scared stiff. Mona "Miss Johnson, you claim I so easily forced you into everything, you were very unwilling the ENTIRE time…now, you are under oath….did you not tell me how much you loved me, how much you enjoyed being on my island, that you wanted to meet Sister Patterson Williams with me?" Sharan "I…I did say that, but I had to do that so you wouldn't kill me." Mona "But you see, Miss Johnson…who's to say you aren't just saying that you pretended to protect yourself? Who's to say you weren't VERY willing during the process in which Daniel Cosgrove was tortured, and when Abe Williams was tortured, and when Abe Williams was…shot? " Kevin and Sister Patterson are shocked, and Sister Patterson stands up. Sharan, her eyes widening as she realizes what Mona's playing at "Kelis, please…PLEASE….don't. " Mona "Oh yes, that's right, Miss Johnson. You shot Abe Williams, you partook in his murder! You WERE an accomplice to murder! You watched as I tortured the man, you had the power to stop it, you were not restrained, yet you let me torture him to my heart's content…you willingly shot the man! In fact, right before that, he was on the path to escape but YOU stopped him." Sister Patterson "OH MY GOD! I want her arrested your honor. She shot my husband. No LORD!!" Sharan, getting emotional "Don't! NO! YOU FORCED ME! I DIDN'T WANT TO SHOOT ABE! It wasn't my fault, you made me do it, I had to do it!" Everyone in the courtroom is stunned at this revelation, and Kevin looks at Sharan with a huge amount of pain and shock in his eyes. Mona "Now Miss Johnson, I would like you to explain to this courtroom what exactly happened that day you shot Abe Williams. " Sharan, getting very nervous now as her face looks stained "Well…well the man was attacking you, I just couldn't let him, regardless of my feelings for you…." ABE "You are nothing! You're just a gay whore like your mother!" Abe squeezes more and Mona hits him in his groin, and he stumbles backward, and she reaches for her gun in her back pocket SHARAN "Mona no!" Mona looks back at her, and Abe kicks Mona in her knees and the gun goes flying across the room in the corner... Mona falls on the floor, and Abe gets on top of her. ABE "That's what you wanted; right?" He rips opens her blouse, and Mona is fighting him. MONA "Get of me you scum!" Abe over powers her, and he rips opens her pants. Her hands and nails goes to his face, and scratches him. SHARAN "Get off her!" ABE "Shut up!" SHARAN grabs the chair. "Abe get off of her now!' Abe turns to Sharan, and she serves him across the face with the chair, and Abe falls out of consciousness on the ground. Sharan "Then….you got that gun and wanted me to shoot him! You told me I WANTED to kill him, which I didn't! I NEVER did!" MONA, gets up, and she makes her way toward the gun, and picks it up, and she walks back toward Sharan. "Have you ever killed someone?" SHARAN "Excuse me?" MONA "Its a simple question…" SHARAN "There's nothing simple about that - and no." MONA "But you would if you had too…" SHARAN "I don't like where this is going - and I am not a murderer." MONA "I think everyone is capable of murder. MONA, Mona places her hand on Sharan's shoulder. "Earlier... You wanted to kill him, I saw it in your eyes -" She hands her the gun. MONA "Go ahead... shoot him! If you love me, you would kill my father. Prove to me you love me" Sharan looks at Mona, and looks back at the gun, and Abe. MONA "Come on... Do it!" Sharan slowly takes the gun from Sharan. Abe slowly opens his eyes. Sharan "And UNWILLINGLY because of you, yes, I shot him! I shot Abe Williams!" Sharan's hand starts sweating, and she can't hold back, she sees her hand pulling the trigger, and suddenly her head is full with images; visions of how Mona introduced her to Mona Island , and all the pains Abe caused Mona. Tears starts pouring from Sharan's eyes, and everything starts moving in slow motion, Mona takes another puff from her smoke, and Abe is trying to say something, but all you see is his mouth moving, with his words not being understood, Sharan looks back at Mona, and she wanted to aim the gun at Mona's head, and blow her head away, but she stops herself... She returns her attention to Abe's direction, and Mona claps her hand, and the gun goes off… Mona "And there you have it everyone, this woman willingly helped me, she shot Abe Williams…and may have helped cause his death….so you were not unwilling THEN, were you?" Sharan, breaking out in tears "NOO…DAMNIT…IT WASN'T LIKE THAT! NO! I DIDN'T WANT TO DO IT! I DIDN'T WANT TO DO A THING! PLEASE, PLEASE, YOU ALL HAVE TO BELIEVE ME!" Kevin stands up and barges out of the courtroom angrily. Sister Patterson "Arrest her right here and right now! I pay my taxes, let me see my money at work. Lord my third eye never saw this coming." Mona "Defense has no more questions, your honor. I have proven my point." Sharan sobs as she gets off the stand and wipes her face with her hands, and Mona slowly blows her a kiss, and she storms out of the courtroom after breaking down on the stand… Judge Hatchett "This court will wait until this trial is over and then decide if the witness, Sharan Johnson will be brought up on charges. Prosecution, call your next witness." Jack "Prosecution calls…Daniel Cosgrove to the stand!" Episode: 115; Ode2A Smooth Criminal Written by Tara Smith, and ML Cooks Flashbacks Written By: ML Cooks and Durand Saint Hialire Story Editor: ML Cooks Westwood Park, Dre's House Dre walks into the kitchen and pulls out a Budweiser from the fridge. Lauren comes out from the bedroom. Lauren "Hey you. How was Mona's trial? Was Daniel there?" Dre "Yea, your boy was there. The trial was cool I guess. Mona represented herself. It's resumes tomorrow. " Laruen "I miss Daniel so much. Did he have a woman with him?" Dre "Naw, I don't thank so." Lauren sighs and grabs a seat on the couch. "I don't know how much longer I can keep this up." Dre "Well you gone have to. My life and my brother's are on the line. We have a plan and we have to stick to it." Laruen, wiping a tear "This is stressful for me. This isn't good for my baby." Dre "You only got what like 5 more months to go. 20 weeks ain't that long off.' Lauren "It's long enough. What if Daniel moves on in that time? Jasmine was flirting with him right at my coffin. Do you know what it was like to hear the man I love, at my funeral, getting hit on by another woman? It's like hello! I am right here. Have you no shame. She was like a hawk, swooping in to get her prey…. I love Daniel and I am faking my death for us." Dre "How do you think he is going to feel when he finds out you faked your death? What is he going to say about this child? You say if it's Kevin's you're going to put it on the black market. What about Kevin? I can't believe I just said that. Knowing I can't stand that nigga. But I know if it was me, I would not want my baby on no black market. Why not just give the child to Kevin. He could use some good news right now. Home boy has hit rock bottom." Lauren "The last time Kevin and I had a conversation, it was not pretty. SO I won't be doing no one no favors. I know this is wrong but I can't raise this child if it's Kevin's. I can't keep it." Dre "But you'll keep it if it Chris's child? I don't get that." Lauren "Daniel already knows that I was with Chris. If he found out if I slept with Kevin and bore his child, he wouldn't be able to handle it. Daniel and I have been through so much, I just want us to be happy. I love him and I just want to have a good life with him." Dre "Good luck with that. I don't think Daniel is going to stay single for long. ?You are really playing with fire and I can't even believe I am going along with this. Lauren, I don't know If I can't let you do this. I can't let you put this child on the black market if it's Kevin's" Laruen "What choice do you have? Are you going to stop me?" Dre "I need to get out of here before I loose my cool." He puts his beer down and walks outside to get some fresh air, leaving Lauren with tears in her eyes. She rubs her belly. "What am I doing? I can't keep this charade up any longer.. I have to end it. "         Huntington Memorial Hospital Ria walks into Natalia's room. She sees Natalia holding Mark Jr. Mark Jr's foot is in a cast. Natalia, smiling at Ria, "Oh Ria. I am so glad to see you." Ria, smiling back at her "How's the baby?" Natalia "MJ is going to be fine. He got shot in the foot. Kiko took the bullet out in surgery. I am so blessed and lucky thanks to you. I don't know what I would have done if you had not showed up at my house." Ria "It's a good thing I did. God has a funny way of working. I guess I needed to save your baby to get back in your good graces." Natalia "I've missed my best friend." Ria "I've missed you to girl." She leans down and gives Natalia a hug. Ria "Girl it was crazy. I got me some good dick and just hours later, I had to be captain save a hoe. Talk about a day." Natalia "Watch your mouth girl. I got a little one here. Kiko did say that MJ will have problems walking. We don't know how bad though.' Ria "Oh, my bad. You know how I get sometimes." Natalia "So who's your new boyfriend?" Ria "Well I wouldn't call him that. He's was just visiting Pasadena. He was here doing a terrorist training thing. He's from Springfield Illinois. He's hung up on some white Bitch anyway." Natalia "You have not changed. I don't get it. I'm your best friend again right?" Ria "Yea girl?" Natalia "I'm white right?" Ria "Uh hunh." Natalia "So why do you not like white people?" Ria "Girl I just don't. Look at what they put my people through. All those years of slavery. Uprooting us from Africa. Selling my people like we were cheap pieces of meat." Natalia "What about President Obama's election? Doesn't that signify change?" Ria "Girl hell naw. He's half black. He still got some white in him. So the day still needs to come when a 100 percent black man take office." Natalia "Well If you hate white people, then how can you like me?" Ria "Cause you my girl. I don't see you as white. I have to tell myself you're a Latina." Natalia burst out laughing. Then Ria grabs her breast Natalia "Girl what are you doing?" Ria "Ever since I sexed down Remy, my breastses been feeling funny. Like the feel so warm and tingly." Natalia "Maybe you should get it checked out." Ria "No no. It's just some good ass sex. That's all. I have some things to do. I got a dinner date with my family tonight." Natalia "You so crazy." Ria "I get it from you. Look I am really happy for you. You got reunited with your son. Especially after Miss Flip Mode stole her from you." Natalia "Thank God Ashley is dead. Diego helped her and he is still out there somewhere." Ria "Someone needs to find him." Natalia "I just might have to"       Outside of his house, back in Westwood Park, Dre is smoking a black and mild. Dre "What the hell went down there? " He says after looking at the police tape around Natalia's house. Dre's thoughts are interrupted when Kiko approaches him. Dre "Hey bro." Kiko, a bit frustrated "Don't "hey bro" me. " Dre "What's got tripping?" Kiko, shaking his head as he walks pass Dre "Its nothing. How's Lauren?" Dre "She's all worried about this baby crap, wanting to sell her baby on the black market just because of who its pops could be." Kiko "You know, you're lucky I'm even participating in this." Dre "You have to, man. Ty's gone kill us if you don't." Kiko "Yeah, but its disgusting. I am letting a woman fake her death, and in doing that, I'm causing her boyfriend to go through so much pain. Daniel's life has fallen apart because of this, because of us! He has to go to therapy with Dr. Jasmine Winters and that's barely helping him. We made him go through that mockery of a funeral. " Dre "In the end he'll get his woman back." Kiko "But will Daniel be too broken and too depressed by then, Dre? Ever think about THAT? And not to mention, you are just letting this woman sell an innocent child on the baby black market. I feel bad for Lauren, but do you know how cruel this is?" Dre "Hey I'm not a fan of that plan." Kiko "But you probably expect ME to be the one to deliver the baby and help sell it off, don't you? I am a respected doctor, I will have NO part in this. I promise you that. I am not Diego Serrano damnit, I don't steal babies. I will never stoop to the level of people like him, you had better know that. And damnit Dre, I should just go to Mike right now and tell him that Lauren Roman is alive and well and living in your house-" Dre "Cool it, man! What the hell is wrong with you today?" Kiko "Everything is what's wrong with me! I am hiding a pregnant woman who is supposed to be dead and she wants to sell her baby on the black market, I have Ria on my ass all the time asking for sex, and I have to deal with ten million other things each day!" Dre "Something's wrong, I can tell. There's something else bothering you." Kiko "Oh just stop." Dre "We're bro's, man, you can talk to me." Kiko "Yeah, and I wanted to get close to you so I could, but this wasn't exactly what I wanted…growing close by faking people's deaths." Dre "Hey, I understand, I got you, man. But this will all be over once we get Ty." Kiko "And how long will that take? Long enough to rip a child away from its mother?" Dre "Lauren's better than our momma." Kiko, getting angrier "DON'T even bring her up." Kiko storms off as Dre confusedly watches his brother…. Next Time on S.T.E.A.M. Daniel and Mona go to WAR AGAIN!!!!
  18. WOW Will got his little girl!!! AWESOME.
  19. I CANT WAIT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1
  20. Well Folks, Sorry to announce that a further delay is still needed for me and my series and for my return to t he blog world.. Hell I could not even find this blog after the change over. It's been one thing after another for me. Life is really testing me, but I am strong. I see the blogs have really petered out here but am so thankful that a few are still hanging in there, Matt, Jay and Miss T. Please keep it going and my return shall be soon. Damn I don't know about yall but I miss Sister Patterson to death. I do have episodes done, like 5 or so, if I posted them, who would read? Redd where you at with Novi?
  21. Good episodematt. I forgot some of the things that were happening but got thrilled as I learn what happend from the finale. I love Nan and she was classic in this episode. Reminds me of Nat. I swear they are long lost sisters. It was a lot of mytery in this episode and it moved extremely fast. I had to think to myself this is one dangerous ass college. In Cody of all places. I loved Will's final scene. I am still reeling he is dead. U sure do like to kilL em don't you?. I must admit I was confused with the opening scene at first to find out it was only a dream then came Will's scene, i didn'nt know it was really an after life expereince. oh well. I still liked that scene. It was capmy and different beacsue it's not often you see things like that. THEN I LOVED TANISHA> home girl beat Ginny to the puch trying to get her. It was so nice to see Owen and I loved the mentioning of Trella and Will's grave. nice throw back to the past esp for me kuz I have been with this sereis so long. Funny how we had two pregenant ladies but both could not tell their mens they were. C preggos wow. Is it even Carlos's? And Blake and Alley, yuck. C MARLI SURELY WAS CLEVER and I liked her last scenes( i assume she is leaving) Again I love bryan and always has And James is back, again this is a nice blast fromt he past and I cant wait to see how Ava is going to handel this. More yet, I can't wait to see how James is going to react when he sees Ava again. And That Bobbi sure is s a sick little girl. How old is she? You have a lot of nice storyline sset up cant wait to see how this last season plays out. Its bittersweet and a little sad for me. And you got Ria on here. I am out the fence on that one. lol SHe plays such a vital role on STEAM and has her first front burner storyline. But it's all good. I like how you got both lily's and Ria on her. Wow I bet the backstage drama would be to die for for. Hmm maybe a spin off Matt? How many episodes do we got left and when can i xpect the next one?
  22. WOW, A LOT HAS HAPPEND SINCE I HAVE BEEN AWAY. SO much is going on. But I love how the stories interwine and propel the other and or the next one. Eugenia and Lucas? Please. I was hoping you wasn't going there but you did. It seems so weired and even weireder is that baby switch. The firs thing I was going to say are you kidding me, Eugenia is dark skinn and jan is white Then you said Euggie's baby was white, so I am really keeping my close eye on this. But I AM SO MAD AFTER WATCHING THE PLOT MOVE SO SLOW BUT TO HAVE THAT BEATIFUL PAYOFF that I missed it. SO GRAND. SO OLD SCHOOL. I LOVE IT!!! Man Give me the episode number for that. That is a great story.I love how celeste was brought into it, but I think it would have been even more interesting if celeste was locked up in the room too. You and your coma's lol. I love the idea of Tony/Kate/Anna this is a good triangle, set up well esp How kate set him up. That's a good story and I hope to see it played out although Tony and Anna aren't my favs, maybe this story can redeem them for me. THIS STORY HAS THE POTETNIAL TOO. It's almost a gold mine. Again I love how Jan broke out finally. I love it. Bo and all his babies. I don't know if I am liking that element to the story. The road blocks are certainely up for Bo and Hope. I love how Hope walked in on him Kristen. What episode number is that as well. I also love Suga's invovlement in Voctor's story. In salem, shottings, stabbing,s and coma.s are the standard here it seems. How could Nicole leave Jan and that baby in the secret room like that? And to leave Salem with a man, and not get revenge right away for what Greta did to her. That's not the nicole I know. I do like the Laura vs Robin and Alexis vs. Cassie. Like to see where that goes. Where is Miek in all of this? I would have love to see where stefano confronted Viv over Peters' death. So I am all caught up now and LIS is on fire. So many twist. A lot of strong stories. I've been gone too long. Good job Tara. Sami keeps doing stupid things. Now she'll have to add escpe from jail charges from her. And Will and Destiny are dating? It was only a matter of time. I hope I am in time for that long awaited custody battle. Again I love Greta now. Great job with her. Her rabies really did a number on her. she was 4 sheets to the wind
  23. Your welcome Tara and anytime. Enjoy Lisa. You know, I used to hate Greta, everyblog and their momma had Greta on it. I was just never a fan of her. But I must say when I brought her over to the spin off "Affairs of the Heart" She got VERY interesting and her follow up story when rejoinging LIS after AOTH ended it's temp run, Greta has kept me glued. I don't wish for her to come back. I really feel she has run her course. Just a few words from ML.......
  24. After an extended period of quiet from the production companies of MLC now comes word the sexxy sudser will return with new episodes some time in June. The series picks up with the long awaited and anticipated trial of Mona. The series will not skip any story beats. Also comes word that rapper TI has been released from his contract role of Dre. No other details were given. TI is the third actor to play the role of Dre. Rumor has it a few major characters are on their way out on S.T.E.A.M.
  25. 51 cast memebers?!! This is a crying shame. No wnder we never see abe and nem
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