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  1. Thanks guys Redd just let me know what u need.
  2. All things must come to an end. The time has come for S.T.E.A.M. to come to a close. One of the things I tried to do from day one was avoid your typical soap clichés. I think that's one of the things my readers loved. As time goes on it gets harder. As my readers know, I took a year off and when I came back, I discovered I no longer had that burning desire for S.T.E.A.M. any longer. It no longer felt special to me. I've been wrestling with this for a very long time and now decided now is the time to end things, on a high note. S.T.E.A.M. was never meant to be an open ended series. I just never knew how far it would go. I thank each and everyone one of you who have made the series the success it was. Never in a million years did I think this series would take me in places that it has. I truly thank you all who read and took the time to comment. Your words will forever be with me. Now I am going to give you some of my thoughts and explain some things from my point of view of S.T.E.A.M. Let's start with some of my all time favorite plots. The very first over the top thing I did was the mini story arch "Love Runned Down" which coincided with the launch of SONOP. It was when during a rain storm, Alexis crashed into Sabryn's car, which lead into Sabryn running into Bryan's car and then running over Ashley. Many didn't know at that time those kinds of events would be the norm for STEAM. I knew Ashley would be back from the dead at some point. Another one of my Favs was the addition of Sister Patterson. Truth be told, I've never thought of all her back story with DC and the affairs and stuff until I saw the success she had become. She was not intended to be as big as she was in the series. I started to mold a lot of story around her. Another one of my favs was the rivalry between Jodie and Jenn which then led into Jodie exposing herself at Natalia's fashion show as having HIV. It started when Jenn and Ria went to Cle whom they found DC, Jodie's old pimp. I got a lot of mileage from that story. If I say so myself, I rank that up there with one of my best plots ever. I loved Mona's aka The Lady in Black Story in the first Season. It was so dark and no one really knew why she was doing the thing she was doing. Then came the lady in Red. I thought for sure everyone would think it was Ashley, but no one knew it at first to my surprise. Since no one caught on I decided to extend the story just a bit. Here are the things I wished I would have done differently At times I wonder if I should have not killed Chris off. Other times I felt I killed off Abe to soon. Ms. Jenkins was never supposed to be a real Person. I only casted her based on my readers responses. I never really had a strong story for TY which I truly regret I wish I would have done more as a couple with Daniel and Lauren I thought of giving Ria a lesbian relationship at one point in time. I regret killing off Jodie too soon. I regret Ria never got a major storyline. That's thanks in part to Sister Patterson's success. And I wish I would have fleshed out the Mark/Rufus/Dahlia/Natalia story. It had a lot of mileage and I just let it go. I've toyed with the idea brining on a new mystery woman, Lady in Hot Pink, whose identity will remain a secret for now. The series is not over just yet. I killed off Kevin partly because I thought there were too many Williams's men and readers got confused. (It also fit the story.) They were not fleshed out so well. I thought I didn't need all of them here so hence Kevin and Dre left the series leaving only Kiko and Karim (which are not hoes, I want to clear that up right now.) Out of the two I felt Karim had a stronger story so he stayed. The only one that can be really called a hoe was Dre but even then I am not so sure. I do think these men were misunderstood and that's probably my fault. Let's see what else do I wish were different? I can't think of anything else. Oh yes, Thanks to Tara who has been a tremendous help with STEAM. And A special thank you to Matt P who was STEAM's biggest fan. I ALWAYS look forward to hear what you have to say sir. Matt you have been there from the begining and I so appreciate that. JayJay, you being a newer reader to STEAM it was refreshing to hear your take on my series. To Philip, Though your words were simple they were meaningful Not eveyone got at times some of my scenes or what I was trying to do but you did. Thanks for reading. I have not yet decided what my next project will be but I will keep you all posted. You can currently catch me writing on the Blog Life in Salem Thank you all, the last episode ends with #150 later on this year. Let the countdown begin. Also let me know what are some of your fav stories and some of the things you did not like. What do you want to see happen before it ends? Here's a little treat. A rare Preview on what' coming up: Karim/Alexis/Ladonna: now that Alexis is pregnant things are really going to heat up in this triangle. It will be of course, in true STEAM fashion a tug of war between the ladies. They keep trying to one up each other. This story will be front and center for the rest of the season. Sister Patterson: I am breaking the Sister down to the bare minimum at the nut house. She is going to question the power of God. Then hopefully when she over comes this "final battle" we hope she can put herself and everything back together. Many dangerous people are after the Sinful Sister. Mona, Lynn, and Apple. It's going to get very dangerous for Sister Patterson. It seems the odds are stacked against her. Lauren/Daniel/Sharon: Things for Lauren goes from bad to worse as she realizes the mistakes she's made may have dire consequences. As the news spread that Lauren had Kevin's child, Karim takes drastic action, leading to conflict with Lauren's new found Sister Alexis. That angle of the story will also be dealt with in coming weeks. Lauren's return does cause some stress for Daniel/Sharon. Can they overcome this latest ripple? Will Lauren and Daniel find their way back to each other? Rufus and his OntheDL story- It seems things may be coming together for Rue finally. A new man possibly. She is going to take her place at Divine Design and start a new line and become rich. Good things are in store for this tranny. The big mystery is, who is Rue's new DL lover? HMM which man in Pasadena is on the DL? Ria- FINALLY Ria gets a major story, dealing with and overcoming her breast cancer will change her as a woman. Ria will also finally find love. With who though? Bryan/Natalia/Sabryn/Mike- Sabryn has an uphill battle on her hands. With Bryan and Natalia teaming up against her to take her son away from her and with Natalia at Divine Design, Sabryn will have to start her fashion house from scratch. Her and Mike move ever so closer as it becomes a war between Mike and Sabryn vs Natalia and Bryan. Sabryn feels betrayed that Bryan has teamed up with her arch enemy. It's the final straw in Sabryn's eye. Look for a very strong Sabryn when and if she emerges from jail. I always knew at one point Natalia and Sabryn would beef and here it is now and it's going to be good. Too bad it's so late in the series. This will also be another front burner story. Will Sabryn and Bryan ever find there back to each other before the end? And one more thing, This is for Bellcurve, which never got to say my peace. So since this is my domain i will so so now. Hey Bellcurve, look back at all my epsidoes and look at all the comments that people have left me. Make sure you read them carefully and slowly. You will see that STEAM is no where damn near a -1 you jack ass. Where's you hit series at you bum?
  3. Im really starting to follow things more. A very good episode. I llved Belindas sex book, I have one of those to. LOL I loved Philip and Bill going at it. Good dialog there. And Boy oh Boy poor Pencer. I really feel bad for her. She needs some help. I cant wait to see where this goes. I think Amanda and Dect. Grant would look good together. I can't wait to see this vote on Kevin. Ur doing a good job Jay. THings are coming together for me. Now I am all caught up!!
  4. Was Gavin only for the movie? Rick had some very powerful lines in this ep. Good for Phil and Beth but I just know troulbe is lurking around the corner. A very good movie. What made you do it? It was very nice to focus only a few characters for once to. I feel like i know a lot more.
  5. Good Scene at the end I knew something big was about to go down at the party. I loved the sceen with liz and Kardashian. Liz's story teminds me of Abby of Y&R. I lloved mel's line thank god shes a live kuz now I am going to kill her or soemthing like that Zach was a pretty rotten person for what he did. Another easy to follow episode.
  6. Another prety good epiode. I like the dynamics you have set up for both quads. Very good stuff. Again this ep was easier to follow. I LOVED the dialog in Leah and Marti's scene. Good job. And I got a kick out of the Santa. I loved his lines as well. Good Job!!
  7. I really liked this episode. It kinda really felt like we were in new york. GREAT casting chocies in this episode and I liked Karsashian cameo. THis ep was much easier to follow. So the 4 musteteers are looking for the new genration of muketeers? nice homage to history gor GL fans. I had to laught at Liz's black son line? Why did she feel the need to say that? No big deal just curious. Much better ep and easier to follow. U r on fire with this ep postings. How do u do it?
  8. Downtown Pasadena, Ivory Inc. Alexis storms into Karim’s office. She looks and sees Ladonna sitting in his chair writing a memo. Alexis “How I am not surprised that you’re in Karim’s office. You practically live in here.” Ladonna “This is a business and I am at work.” Alexis “Oh is that what you call it? Taking Karim away from me is what I call it. I knew that’s what you wanted all this time.” Ladonna “Don’t you have anything else better to do then act like a loser?” Alexis “You know Bitch; I have been waiting for this for a long time. You went out your way to cast doubt about me in Karim’s eyes. You fed on that and pumped his head up.” Ladonna, standing up from the chair and steps out from around the desk to get in Alexis’s face “You did that all by yourself. I know you are hiding something and it pertains to your sister’s diary. You’re the one not being truthful and honest with Karim.” Alexis “You have no idea what you’re talking about. You’re a phony. You’re a scheming slut. As soon as you saw Karim and I were having serious issues you swooped in like a bald eagle. I am not going to let you get away with this. I will not let you be with Karim.” Ladonna “Oh god you starting to sound like Ashley. What’s next we are going to have a few catfights, and then you’re going to die and come back from the dead and crash my wedding? Its 2011 Alexis come up with something better than that. Something worth my time. How about that?” Alexis “You think I’m like Ashley. We’ll see. You know nothing about me.” Ladonna “I know you are hiding something from Karim. I will find out what it is.” Alexis slaps Ladonna “I hate you bitch!” Ladonna “The feeling is mutual. And I also have been waiting to do this” Donna sucker punches Alexis in the jaw. Alexis falls back onto one of the leather sofas. Donna hops on top of her and begins to choke Alexis. Alexis grabs a hold of Donnas’ hair and pulls on it, using her other hand to punch her in the face. Alexis lands a punch right in Donnas’ jaw, busting open her lips. Donna finally releases Alexis neck. She throws Donna off of her. She grabs LaDonna’s hair and begin uses it to drag Donna around the room while giving her random punches as she does. Alexis “Karim is mine and we will be back together.” Suddenly Ria walks in. She sees Alexis dragging Ladonna by her hair as Alexis pounds on her head. Ria “Oh hell naw! Donna, girl you ok? Get up, punch that hoe in her face, do something. Don’t let the white girl win.” Alexis “Racist bitch after I handle Donna, you’re next.” Ria “It ain’t nothing but a thang. Ria Winters is going to beat some ass up in here today.” Ria runs over and punches Alexis in the face with a right and left hook. Alexis lets go of Donna. Ria follows up with yet another set of punches to the face. Ria then pushes Alexis against the wall as Ria runs up and grabs her head and begins to pound Alexis’s head into the wall. Ria, with each pound she utters a word “Don’t, (pound) you (pound) ever(pound) (pound) in (pound) your (pound) (pound) life disrespect me again Bitch. (pound) (pound) (pound) I’m the head bitch (pound) in Pasadena. (pound) And don’t you ever forget it. (pound) (pound) (pound) (pound)” Ria then lets go of Alexis and she immediately falls to the ground being knocked out cold from the bangs against the wall. Ria “And I don’t want to have this conversation again.” Ria looks at her nails and then blows them. Ria “Ladonna, I am disappointed in you girl. You was letting the white girl work you out. “ DC then walks in. He sees Alexis on the ground and the office a mess. “What the hell happened in here?” Ria “The white girl got that ass beat.” Ria then walks out of Ivory. DC pulls out his cell phone and calls Alexis an ambulance. Episode 129 Death to Sister Patterson! Written by ML Cooks For The Birds Mental Rehabilitation Center Orderlies escort the mighty Sister Patterson into the west wing of the facility and into her room. Sister Patterson, shouting, and kicking her legs the entire time, “This ain’t no work of the Lord! I am Sister Patterson! You can’t do this to me! I am not crazy! Get your sinning hands of me you fools!” Sister Patterson tries to wrestle out of the cuffs. Meanwhile, Sister Patterson is so loud she can be heard in the east and north wing of the building. In the east wing Lynn hears the animal like howls. Lynn “It can’t be. It’s the SLUT WHORE BITCH!” She continues to listen to the rampage. In Sister Patterson’s room “I am Sister Patterson! Oh hear me and hear me now! What is the church going to think? The church’s mother has been checked into the Looney bin. What is Miss Jenkins going to think!? GET OFF ME!!!” A nurse comes in and injects Morphine in the ranting Sister’s arm; Sister Patterson collapses to the ground. In the North Wing. Mona and Apple step out their room to see if they can see what’s going on. Apple “I don’t believe it. She’s here.” Mona “Who? What are you talking about? It sounded like Slutty Patterson.” Apple “Oh it is. This is fate. This is our chance. This is your chance to do some real damage to her. I know you want to don’t you.? It’s in your blood.” Mona “That sounds about right. It’s time to take out the woman who caused me all my pain. I am going to kill Slutty Patterson.” Apple “I just love when you talk like that.” She plants a kiss on her. “Death to Sister Patterson!” Mona “No no lady. It’s Slutty Patterson.” Mona now kisses her passionately and they step back into the room and make love. In Lynn’s room Lynn rolls her wheel chair out into the hall to see if she can see her arch enemy. Lynn “I know it was her. I’d know that ugly voice anywhere. This is my chance. This is the moment I’ve been waiting for. This is my time to get my revenge. I am going to kill that slut. I am going to stab that whore. Damn it I am going to cut that bitches head off and eat it for breakfast.” With so much rage and hatred, Lynn gets the energy to get up out her wheel chair and runs through the hall and into the common area where all the wings link up. She pounds on the west Wings door. “I’ll kill her! Let me at her! I’m going to kill that BITCH!!”Orderlies immediately rush to her and sedate her. Back in Sister Patterson’s room, While Sister Patterson is out stone cold, the orderlies place a restraint jacket on her and then she is then thrown into her bed. Now let the madness in the crazy house begin…….. Huntington Memorial Hospital Lauren is hugging Daniel. He pushes her off of him. Daniel, in disbelief “What the Fu(k?” Lauren “Oh Daniel I know it’s a lot to take in. But it’s me. I’m here. I’m not dead.” Daniel “What do you mean? I went to your funeral. I don’t understand. I mourned you.” Lauren “I know Danny and I am so sorry. I had to fake my death.” Daniel “Fake your death? Are you crazy?” Lauren “I had to. Tyler had a hit out on me.” Daniel “TY!?” Lauren “Yes baby, I had to do it.” Daniel shaking his head, “I don’t know what to say. I-. How-. Where in the hell have you been all this time” Lauren “I’ve been in Pasadena.” Daniel “WHAT!?Where? Lauren “That doesn’t matter right now. I’m back. Ty is in jail so I can be free.” Daniel “You could have come to me with something like this. You could have gone to the police chief. Mike and Ty are enemies he would have been glad to help. I don’t understand why you did this. Just when I make it back to you from the brink of death from being tortured by Mona, you led me to believe you were Killed. My heart ached for you for months. I can’t believe you did this to me. I can’t believe you didn’t trust me enough to come to me with something like this.” Daniel is so mad and confused he slaps Laurens face. Just as Lauren rubs her cheek and recovers from shock, a nurse walks over to Lauren. Nurse “The Doctor has some news on your baby.” Daniel “What do you mean? Baby! Lauren what is this all about?” Lauren, tears immediately forming in her eyes knowing what she is about to tell Danny is going to hurt him, She pulls it together to tell Daniel, “It’s true. I had a baby.” Daniel is taken aback and really enraged. So much rage he slaps her again. Nurse “Sir I’m going to have to warn you not to do that again.” Daniel “A FU(KING BABY!!! Lauren what the hell? I can’t believe you.. What ?-Why….(grunting)MMMM.” He turns around and this time punches a wall. Nurse “Call security.” The nurse walks over to Daniel and tries to escort him out the hospital. Daniel pushes the nurse down. Lauren “Please Daniel. Calm down. The baby isn’t yours!” Just then Daniel pauses. He looks into her eyes. His eyes begin to water up. Daniel “It’s not mine?” Nurse “You damn right it’s not yours. The baby is black.” Lauren, to Daniel “I’m so sorry. “ Daniel “You have a black baby?” He smirks and chuckles. He shakes his head and just turns around and walks out the hospital. Daniel walks right past Ria who is entering the hospital. She walks further in the E.R. and sees Lauren. Ria “Ahh hell naw.” Laruen “Hi Ria, Yes it’s me. I’m not dead.” Ria “Girl you are trippin'. What you mean you ain’t dead? Is this a trick? Did I miss something?” Lauren “It’s a long story.” Nurse “Ok Ms. Romoan your baby’s situation is critical, time is of the essence.” Ria “Baby? Oh hell naw. Lauren girl I don’t even know what to say. But you best believe after my appointment with Kiko I’m coming to look for you I need to know what’s goings on.” As Ria walks away she talks to herself “Back from the dead honey. Is this what it’s coming to now these days?” Ria knocks on Kiko’s door, and barges in. Kiko “I am going to be nice about this. I have a lot going on Ria please, don’t harass me today.” Ria “After learning that old played out pimp DC is your father, I wouldn’t want to be bothered with me either.” Kiko “Is that what you said when you slept with my father or my brother?” Ria “Oooohh boo, don’t say that. It sounds so bad doesn’t it? You make me sound like Brooke Forrester on the Bold and the Homeless. See what had happened was, Brooke slept with Ridge, his father Eric, then Ridge’s brother, and now Brooke might have a thing for Ridge son Tommy.” Kiko, standing up from his chair “Enough! I don’t give a damn about who is sleeping with whom on your lame ass soap operas, that are being canceled left and right. I have work to do. I warned you to stop harassing me. NO I WILL NOT HAVE SEX WITH YOU VICTORIA! End of story. Damn your are a predator!” RIA “For you information faggot, I have an emergency.” Kiko “I’m going to file a restraining order on you.” He picks up the phone to call Mike. Ria then yanks the phone from his hand. Then she rips open her blouse. Kiko “Victoria this is outrageous, you are outrageous.” He grabs her arm and begins to pull her out his office.’ Ria “No please, wait. I’m in pain. Something is wrong. My girls been tender and hurting. Especially after beating that white girl's ass Alexis .See look. There’s a lump in my right one, Look damn it! I don’t want sex. I WANT TO SAVE MY LIFE!” Ria chokes up and turns away from Kiko not wanting to let him see her at a weak point. He turns to her realizing she is not playing games after all. He spins her around. She is clearly crying. Kiko “Oh my god. You’re scared. Ria I am so sorry.” He holds her. She pushes him off her. Ria “Oh now you want to show me compassion? You’re treat me like a predator” Kiko “Ria, you are a sexual animal. I’ve never seen anything like it.” Ria “Enough with the small talk home boy. Are we gonna get these breast exams cracking or what? I may have lost some time to my life fu(cking around with you.” Kiko, now realizes she may be right, if it is breast cancer, he may in the end cost Ria her life. Kiko immediately feels regret and remorse. Kiko “Wait in the lobby and I will send someone to get your test done.” Ria fixing her clothes, “It’s about time jackass. And for you not to care about soap operas you sure knew two of them just got the ax. Faggot!” She wipes a tear and walks into the lobby. As she sits down she closes her eyes and says a quick prayer. “Lord I am begging you; please don’t let me have breast cancer.” She prays as a tear rolls down her face. Downtown Pasadena, Pasadena Public Library. Rufus walks inside and over to the tech area. He checks in with his library card and grabs a computer. She opens the search box and types in: Adam4Adam. While the website loads she thinks to herself “A new year and it’s time for me to find love. I want to be loved to damn it. It’s time to find Miss Rue a man.” She logs into her account and checks her inbox. She sees she has a new message from user on the DL. She opens it up and reads. “I read your profile and liked what I saw. I am on the DL here in Pasadena and before we go any further discretion is a must.” Rue “Oh come on, this is 2011. No one cares if you lick a little di(k every now and again.” OntheDL “I would like for us to meet up to see what happens.” Rue responds “I am not really too fond of the DL thing but I am an open minded person. I suppose we can meet. Hit me back up and let me know on like when and where.” Rue hits send. Rue “I hope I don’t regret this.” Back at For the Birds. Apple gets up off the bed from lying with Mona after love making. Mona “What you doing? I thought I wore you out.” Apple “Oh you did baby. I love how you sex me. But if we want to destroy Slutty Patterson there is something I must do. It will give us the power to do what we need to do.” Apple walks over to her dresser drawer and pulls out a few candles, red, white and purple. She then pulls out a silk a silk rope. Apple casts a circle. She then lights the candles and then the silk rope on the altar. Mona “This isn’t looking right. What are you doing?” Apple “Silence my loved one. I am giving us power.” Apple begins to chant: "With this rope I bind thine power, to be mine for second or hour. To make me strong when I am week. To give me wisdom that I seek. To give me courage as not to flee. Thine will be done, so mot it be." Apple grabs the silk scarf and sits next to Mona on the bed. Mona “What did you just do?” Apple “We will now have power and courage. The power and Courage to take on your mother. Like you wanted, Slutty Patterson.” Mona “What you do some type a voodoo?” Apple “Nothing of the such. Just trust me Mona. Very soon, we will have the power to get revenge on your mother and then break out of here and be happy for the rest of our lives, together.” Mona gives Apple a look of bewilderment. She has an uneasy feeling about Apple. As Apple rubs the silk rope around her, the lights begin to flicker in the facility Next on : Ria learns if she has breast cancer, Alexis gets another surprise, Jasmine gets involved in the madness at the nut house…..
  9. jay the next episode will rock your socks. esp Lauren and Daniel. You will be surprised for sure. I dedicate it to u. I also wrote Sister's Pat next story with you in mind. I think you're really going tolike it. Funny you should ask where does she go from here. You will surely find out. Stay tuned
  10. EXITS Hit’s S.T.E.A.M In a pres release, ML Cooks has announced the exits of a few characters to his campy series. Jennifer, Ty, and Dre all have been let go. As STEAM looks to broaden its story base, Dre was let go. He really didn’t catch on the I had hoped states the writer. Though leaving upon learning about his mother being in town, Dre, will continue to make appearances as needed for the rest of the season. Having two recast, and not really having a story for him, he’s expendable. On Jennifer leaving, ML states that Jenn has a wonderful run. There really wasn’t any room on the canvas to tell a story for her. I love Jenn, but right now there is just no room for her. No last airdate has been set for Jenn. I am just resting the character for now. She may reappear later in time but for now her time is done. Jenn’s co star, Ty Christopher is also out. Again ML states this is a process of strengthening the story base. Ty has done a lot of bad things and I really don’t know where to go with him at this point. So he is in jail where he will remain for the time being. Ty also had a great on the sexual series, having assisted the infamous Lady in Black. Ty will have a few recurring scenes until his story is wrapped up. ML also hints that few more exits are on their way. Who could they be?
  11. Ill never forgive u for killing off Remy
  12. Ok what happend to the pictures. It would be interesting to see this booting of kevin storyline go to the Dr. Phil show. I would love to see Josh with a blad head and face. I dont know if u anwered me but why did u kill Remy off and where is blake at?
  13. A much slower episode.So annie ended up in jail Poor her and now josh has cancer? Its very hard getting back into ur series with so many new people or should I say such a big cast. There are almost no stroylines I can identify with and I've never had this problem before with FTL there was always some story that kept me on the edge of my seat. Wheres the big drama at? i wish I watched GL kuz maybe then I would under stand better what the heck is going on. O what's kevin's story? is he dangerous??
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    #128: D!ck!

    Westwood Park, Natalia’s House Natalia puts her son Mark Jr. in his crib when she hears her door bell. She walks over to the door and opens it and happy to see its Ria. Natalia “I got a little nervous answering my door. I had flashbacks of Suga shooting my son. But you saved my sons life girl. I will be forever grateful.” Ria “It’s nothing. I am sure you would have done the same thing for me.” She walks in Natalia’s house and gives her a hug. Natalia “I am so blessed to have you as a best friend.” Ria “Girl what you got to eat in here I’m hungry. I didn’t want to stay at my house for breakfast. Miss Patti and my sister are working my nerves. I can’t take much more of this. Patti and her music tales from the 80’s. All she says is somebody loves you baby. Her and her new attitude. Girl she is going to drive me to drink.” Natalia “Maybe you need some sex. You sound so stressed out.” Ria “Ooh girl you ain’t never lied. I do need some dick. But on some real sh!t, it’s a new year, 2011. I’m not getting any younger. I want a husband, I want kids. I want a family Natti. It’s time to stop playing games. I want more out of life then some good ass dick.” Natalia “I think your mother’s new attitude has rubbed off on you.” Ria, chuckling “Girl you crazy. I just been doing a lot of thinking lately. Looking at my life, I feel empty. I have no one to come home to all night. I have no one in my corner. I want to build something with somebody. Tired of being alone.” Natalia “I know how you feel. I used to spend a lot of lonely nights pondering over Mark. I have my son now; a lot of things have changed.” Ria “How does it feel Natti? Being a mother? What is that like?” Natalia, smiling, walking over to Mark Jr’s crib “It’s the most beautiful thing in the world. Knowing you created another human being. I mean words can’t even express the feeling honestly. It makes me want to fight harder. I want to make sure M J has the best possible life that I can offer.” Ria “This is going to lead into something with Sabryn and or Bryan I know.” Natalia, looking up at RIA “You’re right. Bryan is unfit to raise MJ. He’s made comments how he wants to sue me for sole custody of our son. I' m not going to let him. I am going to beat him to the punch.” RIA “Oh lord, sounds like you are about to hatch one of your plans.” Natalia “You know me so well. I’m a lioness now I have to protect my family. I have to stop playing games. I have a son to think about now. MJ needs a father figure so I will offer Bryan to be a father to his son with Sabryn and his son with me under one roof. We can be a family.” Ria “I see you on the same stuff I’m on. You want you some in house kind of dick. I got ya girl.” Natalia “The dick is good. But this is for my son. Bryan having a nice dick is an added bonus. But if he refuses, I’ll sue him for sole custody of his son with Sabryn and our son. “ RIA “Hell naw girl. Sabryn is not going to let you raise her son.” Natalia “She’ is going to jail. She isn’t going to have a choice. I’ll have the family she’s always wanted.” Ria “I know that’s right.” Episode:128, D!ck Written by ML Cooks Downtown Pasadena, City Jail Bryan with Bryan Jr in a stroller walks up to Sabryn’s cell. Sabryn smiles at her son. Sabryn “He gets more beautiful every time I see him. How is he?” Bryan “He’s good. He misses you. He needs his mother.” Sabryn “Well I wouldn’t be in jail if you would just keep your dick in your pants. This is your fault.” Bryan “I am so sick of you always blaming me. I didn’t tell you to shoot Ashley several times.” Sabryn “And I didn’t ask you to have an affair with Ashley. Now what? You had the affair. Not I. I did what I had to do. I had to put a stop to Ashley’s reign of terror. She’s insane. She kidnapped our son that led to me shooting her. Have you forgotten that?” Bryan “No I have not.” Sabryn “Good. Then you won’t be too upset when I get out of here, which I will, I will be fighting for sole custody of my son.” Bryan “Sabryn, you can’t mean that. I am his father.” Sabryn “I know and it makes me sick. I will not let a cheating pig bear any influence on my flesh and blood. BJ will be raised with value. Unlike you. He will be taught to think with his head and not his pant.” Bryan “You’re taking this too far.” Sabryn “Probably not. I am going to erase you from BJ’s life. He is never going to know you are his father. “ Bryan “I never thought it would come down to this between us. Sabryn I love you. We can still be a family.” Sabryn “NEVER! You have ruined that! You have a child with my enemy. Bad breath Natalia. She would always be there, scheming and plotting because that’s what losers do. I don’t want to spend the rest of my life fighting with her. I have a son to raise now. I have to think of him. I’ve given this a lot of thought and I just think it’s best if you didn’t raise him. You are unfit.” Bryan “You know, you shot a woman like 6 times. I don’t see how you’re going to get out of that.” Sabryn “You’re wrong. You’ll see that. Enjoy the time you have with BJ now. It’s not going to last long.” Bryan “I bring BJ down here to see you and this is the thanks I get?” Sabryn “See you in court Bryan.” And with that Bryan takes his son and leaves the jail, thinking about his children. For the Birds Mental Hospital Dre and Kiko are escorted to their mother, Lynn’s room. Lynn is sitting in a wheel chair looking out the window. Dre walks in front of her and kneels down with tears in his eyes Dre “Momma it’s me Dondre.” Lynn looks at her first born son and looks back outside. Dre “Momma what happened? How did you end up in here?” Lynn “Your father did this to me. He cheated on me. He had an affair and had children with another woman out of wedlock. And one of those spawn is here. And I swear to God I am going to kill her.” Dre “Momma what are you talking about?” Lynn “Your brother tells me her name is Mona. Her father is DC and her mother is Sister Patterson.” Dre “This is crazy. Lynn “I am not crazy.” Dre “Momma Kiko tells me that Don is out father? Is that true?”<BR style="mso-special-character: line-break"><BR style="mso-special-character: line-break"> Lynn, with tears forming in her eyes “Yes son. Don DC Williams is your father. He cheated on me. I had a nervous breakdown after he did that. That’s why I was never there for you Dondre. I am so sorry for letting this happen.” Dre “It’s not your fault momma. DC did this. He did this to you. I swear I’ll make him pay for this.” Lynn “Dre, I’ve missed you so much? Why? Why did you run away when you were younger? Do you know how many sleepless nights I had worrying about you? It was only me and your brother. Don left us after I found out he was sleeping with his brother’s wife. He left his family. Oh Dre I am so sorry for not being there for you. I am sorry for making you run away so young.” Dre “Momma I don’t blame you so don’t blame yourself. I love you.” He leans in and hugs her and Lynn wraps her arms around her son. Then Police Chief Mike Dietz walks into the room. Mike “Dondre Whitfield?” Kiko “Mike, please not now.” Mike “Justice waits for no one Kiko. Dre know what he did and it’s time to pay.” Lynn “What I going on?” Dre “Momma I am in some mess but don’t worry I’ll take care of it.” Mike “Dondre Whitfield, you are under arrest for assaulting a police officer evading the law. Tyler is also accusing you of killing Lauren Romoan.” Kiko “Did you have to do this in front of my mother? They just reunited after many years.” Mike slapping the cuffs on Dondre “You can continue your reunion downtown.” Mike escorts Dre out the room. Lynn is in tears as Kiko shakes his head in disgust. The Williams House Sister Patterson is sitting in her living room just staring at the wall. “This is the home I raised Kevin in. It’s so hard to be here. This house that once had a loving family in it is now empty. Where did I go wrong? How did it get to this point?” Her thoughts are interrupted when she hears a pounding on her door. Sister Patterson “Only the devil knocks like that damn it. Got me cussing.” She swings the door open and is a little surprised to see the police Chief Mike. Sister Patterson “I’m sorry brother Mike. The bible meeting is canceled for tonight. I am going through so much. Too much actually. I’ve lost everything.” Mike “I’m sorry; I’m not here for the bible meeting. I’m here to arrest you. I have a bench warrant for you.” Sister Patterson “Do you know who I am?” Mike “Yes I know who you are that’s why I am here.” Sister Patterson “I am Sister Patterson and I will not be arrested. I do God’s work and it’s his work that I only do. You are here on a mission from for the devil. On what grounds are you arresting me?” Mike “Judge Hatchet wants you to get a mental evaluation.” Sister Patterson “So the judge thinks I’m crazy huh?” Mike “We all do.” Sister Patterson “I beg your pardon?” Mike “Can we just do this peacefully?” Sister Patterson “What will every one say? Sister Patterson has been arrested again. What will the church think?” Mike “There going to praise the Lord that you are confined to a mental hospital for a long overdue evaluation.” Sister Patterson slaps Mike. Then Mike spins the Sister around and slaps cuffs on her. Sister Patterson “Get these cuffs off of me. You can’t lock up an agent of God. Have you lost your cotton picking mind? How dare you? I just lost my son and you are here to take me to a crazy hospital?” Mike “Yes” He says escorting the sister to her car. Sister Patterson is outraged as Mike drives to the mental facility. Huntington Memorial hospital Lauren walks into the ER where Kiko is. Lauren “My baby please, help my baby!” Kiko turns around and is stunned to see Lauren Kiko “Lauren, what are you doing what is going on?” Lauren “I can’t keep this charade up any longer. I’m coming out of hiding. My baby needs medical attention.” Kiko “Kiko takes Lauren’s baby and instructs a nurse to get a bed ready and the nursery. Lauren “Oh please Kiko, please save my baby.” Kiko “We’ll do the best we can.” Then Daniel walks into the hospital. He sees Lauren. Daniel, almost speechless “No it can’t be. Lauren?” Lauren “Yes it’s me Daniel.” She runs up and gives him a hug. Next on Daniel learns that Lauren has a child with Kevin
  15. Pasadena Highway On the highway, Dre drives his car as fast as he can, still reeling from the shock that DC Williams is his father. Dre “How did all this happen to me? I was just some dude that came here after running away from his momma, and I get rolled into all this crazy [!@#$%^&*]. Ty and Lauren, Sharan and Kevin and Mona, and now my own brother tells me that fat guy is my dad...and Kevin is my cousin? Wait, no, Kevin is my brother. All this damn time I've been fighting with my own brother? And my sister is a psycho? Then momma's here...Kiko's known she's here all along and never told me. Damn it all.” Dre looks in his rear view mirror to see Kiko's car pulling up behind his. Dre “Oh hell naw.” Dre speeds up in order to get away from his brother, but Kiko keeps after him. Kiko, inside his own car “Come on, Dre, just stop and let me talk to you...come on. You have to let me explain everything.” Kiko takes out his cell phone and tries to call Dre. In his car, Dre sees Kiko calling, and scowls. He picks up the phone and rolls down the window, then tosses it at Kiko's car! Kiko, seeing the phone bounce off his car “Oh crap! Damnit, Dre...but I'm not gonna give up. I'm not gonna let you go into a rage and end up like Kevin.” Kiko realizes what he just said, and stops for a moment. However, he quickly snaps out of it and continues on after Dre. Kiko “Dre would never do that...then again, I never thought he'd fake a woman's death, either. I can't take the chance. I just need to talk to him.” Back in his car, Dre sees that Kiko is still on his tail. Dre, groaning “This boy ain't gone quit, is he?” Dre finally gives up and pulls over, and Kiko follows. Both of them get out of their cars, and Dre angrily approaches his brother. Dre “What is it, Kiko, what?! You gone tell me now that Patti LaBelle is our aunt?!” Kiko “No, Dre, no...I just want to talk to you. I want to make sure you're okay. I want to explain everything.” Dre “Make sure I'm okay?! Explain something?! Explain this: Why Momma was here, right here, and you never told me! And then this crap about DC being our father?” Kiko “The whole DC thing isn't easy for me to handle either, Dre...I was shocked when she told me, and I only just found out. I don't know how to handle it or what to think...I don't even think he knows. As for momma, I didn't feel comfortable telling anyone that she was here. She's not really herself, Dre...she is in For the Birds because she's totally lost it. I'm not even sure what happened to her. There were times where I wanted to tell you, or was going to, but we got so wrapped up in everything else going on in this crazy town.” Dre “I just don't get it, Kiko. You got momma locked up...and we're Williams? We're part of that crazy as hell family? Kevin, who I guess I could call my rival, is actually my brother? That sicko Mona is our sister? It doesn't even make sense. “ Kiko “I know, I feel the same way. I really do. I just want us to stay calm and work this out.” Dre “Well I'm not sure if we can do that, man...but...” Dre pauses, and Kiko raises an eyebrow. Kiko “What?” Dre “Take me to see momma.” Kiko “What?!” Dre “You heard me. Take me to see her.” Kiko “Dre, I don't know if thats the best i- Dre “She's my momma too, I deserve to see her! I need to see her.” Kiko, sighing “Alright, alright, fine...just come with me. I'll take you right to her.” Episode#127: The Long Lost Sister Written by: Tara Smith Story Editor: ML Cooks Lavender Hill, Hutchins Mansion Jenn sits in the living room of Ty's very large and expensive mansion...she sits on the couch, watching television reports on Tiger Woods and his infidelity. Jenn, shaking her head “Damn, he's worse than Ria or me put together.” Suddenly, Santino walks in. Santino “So I see you're STILL living here, even though the owner of this place hates you?” Jenn “Well walk right in why don't you? And yes, Ty is in jail and I think he has bigger things on his mind than kicking me out of this house...the only other person living here is Karl, and he's so consumed with things now that Ty's out of the way I don't know if he even remembers that I'm staying here.” Santino “You better hope Ty doesn't get out of jail or he's going to fry you, especially after he learns you are mooching off of him even after he dumped you.” Jenn “Oh, and I suppose he'll just be best buddies with you again? You're out of his good graces too, Tino, since YOU were the one that slept with me behind his back...but I suppose you've forgotten all about that, because the last time you were here you acted like an ass and ran off with some skank!” Santino “Don't call Alexis that...I had to help her with something. But I meant what I told you last time...I do love you, in a way, Jenn...but it was nothing more than a small affair. “ Jenn “Bastard. Maybe I considered it a little more than that, but whatever...however, I'm not just going to sit by while you run around with her.” Santino “I'm not yours, Jenn. You don't own me. Nothing is even going on between Alexis and I, and I'm not going to let you go after me or her like you did Jodie.” Jenn “You should know I had good reasoning to investigate Jodie like I did, even if she is gone now. Don't compare the situations, but I do think I have some degree of right to keep you away from that girl...we never ended our relationship, Tino, remember that.” Santino “You forgot torture when it comes to Jodie...don't act innocent, Jenn, and you and I never even had a firm relationship to begin with. YOU were the one that was with two people Jenn, not me...and I thought our last confrontation here made it clear where we were headed.” Jenn “What are you saying?” Santino “Jenn, it was fun while it lasted, and I'm sorry, but I think its best if we officially call it quits, right here, right now. We're never going to work, and we were never going to work past what we had: A fun short term fling. I did fall for you, and love you, but really...we'd be kidding ourselves if we went any farther.” Jenn, scowling “You're just saying all this because while Ty was getting arrested and our affair was coming out, you got close to Alexis...you're just doing this so you can have her. Well, fine, then, Santino, but don't come crawling back once it goes crashing down.” Santino “Thats not true, but I assure you I won't come crawling back.” Jenn “And don't ever cross me again...or you'll regret it. Now get out.” Santino “Gladly.” Santino leaves, and Jenn angrily grabs a glass of champagne that she was drinking and throws it against the wall as she realizes that she and Santino are officially over.   T.C. Hotel Karl and Patti walk through the T.C. Hotel, now under the control of Karl, as Karl shows her around. Patti “This has to be the fanciest hotel that Miss Patti has seen in this town.” Karl “Darling, unfortunately, class is not very common in this city...however, I will commend my criminal son on building up a nice hotel. It is very nice...feel free to stay here, if you like.” Patti “Oh, no, thank you but I am living with my daughters. I need to keep them under control.” Karl “I definitely understand..I made the mistake of not keeping my son on a tighter leash and look where that got him.” Patti “Its not your fault. We can't choose our children's paths, but we can try to steer them away from a bad one.” Karl, faking sadness “I just...I feel so terrible. Like I wasn't a good enough father to him...” Patti, comforting him “Don't blame yourself. Whats done is done and we can't go back and change that. Now we just have to look to the future.” Karl, smiling as Patti walks right into his web “Thank you, Patti...your words, your voice are all so soothing.” Patti, chuckling “Oh you are too kind. I must say, this date today has been really enjoyable.” Karl “Oh, it has...it really has. I want to get to know you better, Miss LaBelle...we should go out to lunch and explore the city of Pasadena another time as well.” Patti “Indeed we should...you know, I haven't been with any man in awhile, and my track record isn't the greatest, however, you have definitely charmed me. And Miss Patti don't say that alot.” Karl “My track record is not the greatest either, but perhaps its time we fix that. “ Patti “Yes, yes I think it is about time.” Karl “However, I wouldn't want to go too deep or too fast, because I have a few things I need to take care of before anything else.” Patti” “Such as?” Karl “I am going to make sure that my son goes to prison and rots there, first of all...and its about time I kick that little whore of his, Jennifer, out of my mansion. After I deal with those two, I am going to restore the Hutchins Empire. Ty has destroyed it, but I am going to rebuild it back to its former glory...and I promise you, Miss LaBelle, that no one is going to stop me.” Downtown Pasadena, Pasadena City Jail Sabryn sits in her cell alone and flashes back to when she shot Ashley so many times and killed her. She then remembers how Ashley kidnapped Bryan Jr. and Sabryn had to get him back. Sabryn “Damnit...I need my son. And Bryan has him...I saved him from Ashley but he went straight to Bryan. I have to get out of here and get BJ back...” Sabryn continues to look around, all alone in her cell, if thats even fathomable considering most of the people in Pasadena act like they have mad cow disease. She can't stop thinking about her baby. Sabryn, starting to tear up “I just want to be a mother to my son, why did all of this have to happen to me? What have I done wrong? I know I shot Ashley but she's just done so much to me! She tried to steal my fiancee and kidnap my baby, she crashed my wedding! I couldn't just let her live when she was on the run with Bryan Jr.” Mike, suddenly walking up to her “If its any comfort, and I know its not, I understand how you feel.” Sabryn, jumping “Oh, sorry, I, um, didn't know anyone was there...” Mike, smiling lightly “Hey, its okay. Again, I understand why you did what you did. Doesn't make it right, but I understand.” Sabryn, raising an eyebrow “The police chief understands why I shot a woman seven times?” Mike “It doesn't make it right, like I said, but I get it. I had a woman terrorize the love of my life for months on end, right up until the day she died.” Sabryn “Oh...Jodie. She was one of Natalia's models, I think I heard about how Jenn tried to destroy her.” Mike “I was once with Jennifer, and really thought I loved her. However, now, most days I want to strangle her...Jodie was the sweetest and nicest woman you'd ever meet, but Jenn just wouldn't stop, and tortured her with the secret of her HIV for so long...Jodie could have spent her last days happy, but she didn't. I still think about Jodie everyday...I miss her.” Sabryn “Wow, I'm sorry. Mike “No, I'm sorry. I shouldn't be going on and on like that.” Sabryn “Does it look like I have anything better to do? I've lost someone too, just in a different way. I really thought Bryan was the love of my life, but now I just can't stand him. I really did love him and wanted to marry him, but he's lied to me time after time. He lied to me about Ashley, and he also lied to me about sleeping with Natalia. I can't stand to be with him anymore. I can't let myself get hurt again.” Mike, nodding “I get it. I still hold alot of angry feelings towards Jenn, so I can understand why you killed Ashley. I'd never kill Jenn, but when someone tries to disrupt your happiness, it drives you to do crazy things.” Sabryn “Exactly, and it was when Ashley started messing with my son that I finally had enough. I wasn't going to let her take him form me...if she was still alive and that happened today, I don't think I'd change a thing. However, now I'm in here, and the only friend I really have is Sharan...I've lost everyone else.” Mike, smiling “No you haven't...you have a friend in me.” Sabryn “Really?” Mike “Really.” Mike and Sabryn smile at each other, finding that they have more in common than they thought, and wondering if they can help each other through their tough times... 7 Eleven Lauren heads inside the nearest 7/11 to get formula for her infant son; she's in heavy disguise, and all but ignores the cashier when she walks in. She immediately heads to the area where the milk is, and begins getting some; she smiles at her son. Lauren "This'll make you feel good, won't it?" Lauren stares at her son for a moment; she begins to notice things on his face that are different. Peculiar. He has short eye openings, and his lips are thin. Lauren's concerns are raised. Lauren "That's not natural...I know babies look different, but...I..." Lauren wonders what could have happened to her baby; she thinks back on her pregnancy. Suddenly, she freezes; she remembers all the drinking that she did during her pregnancy. Lauren "No; it can't be. No. It can't be; my baby's fine." She continues to look at her son, and she can't get past how off his facial features look; no healthy baby looks like that. Lauren "Screw being dead; I can't even take the risk of something happening to this beautiful boy. I have to get to the hospital!" Lauren drops the formula and darts out of the store. For the Birds Rehabilitation Center Alexis stands face to face with her mother, none other than Applelonia, and Apple grins. Alexis “I need you to tell me, Mom: Who is my long lost sister?!” Apple “Oh, don't be in such a rush, Alexis...we haven't seen each other in years and you only want to know about your sister? How about a simple "How are you?" Alexis “You've been locked up in a mental institution, obviously I know how you've been!” Apple “Well, you could still be a bit more warm and respectful.” Alexis “I know what you did, Mom. You abused Ashley and let all your boyfriends rape her! I read the diary, I know EVERYTHING!” Apple “I expected that you'd read it eventually, as much as I never wanted you to know about any of that, I knew you would anyways. I told Ashley I'd kill her if you found out, but apparently, Sabryn did that for me.” Alexis “How dare you treat her like that! Do you know how much pain she went through?! She turned into a psycho because of you!” Apple “Don't blame me for Ashley's insanity over Bryan, that wasn't my fault. I raised you well enough, didn't I? Ashley dug her own hole when she committed all those crimes.” Alexis, raising an eyebrow “How do you know all this?” Apple, chuckling “Sister Patterson isn't the only one that knows things automatically, dear.” Alexis “Oh to hell with it, I used to love you, but after reading all these horrifying things, I don't want to even look at you anymore. I don't care why you're here, and I hope you rot here for all eternity...but I need to know: Who is my other sister? And why didn't you ever tell me?” Apple “It wasn't the right time, Alexis...everything has to fall into place perfectly, you know. You'd be surprised at what I've learned about that over the years...however, perhaps now is the time to tell you...” Alexis “I don't care about things falling into place, you are going to tell me.” Apple “Alright then. Your long lost sister is Lauren Roman.” Alexis, eyes widening “LAUREN?! LAUREN is my sister?!” Apple “Yes, yes she is...I know this for a fact.” Alexis just stares in shock at this revelation... Next on ML COOKS RETURNS AS HEADWRITER!!!!!
  16. A pretty good episode. The scenes moved right along. Weird ending. I never did like ALicia. Poor nan. All Viallioans must come to an end I guess. Maybe she'll erve time at For the Birds to join the nutcases their. I do not like Yvonne at all. Its wrong what she is doing to her daughter. Poor Bobbie. I hope she doesnt die AWW Poor Tinaish. I guess it serves her right. I wonder what she is going to do now. And My husband Bryan is back. Surprise Surprise. Good ep matt
  17. Wow Chloe is a real Bitch.nicole is right though She has a son to care for. What's the beef with Niocole and Vivian? And what has happend to Hope and Bo whats all this about?
  18. Thanks Tara for giving me bascially carte blanche with the series It has and will pay off. We have been working so hard the past few months. I can't wait until re launch our next episode.
  19. I hope Billie has some back bone. After seeing her on Celeb APrrentice I am disaapointed. Will u be addressing her smaller lips?
  20. Westwood Park, Ria's House   Kiko walks up to the entrance of Ria's house, and Ria stands in the doorway, smirking. Ria "Oooh nice to see your fine ass show up here. I've been waiting for you." She says untying her robe to reveal a sexy outfit. Kiko "Victoria, I really appreciate you doing this for me...I needed a place to meet my brother, where no one would expect, and this was the perfect place. But please don't get the wrong idea. Aint no sexuals happening tonight" Ria "I got you and your fine ass brother Dre in my house and you think I aint getting no dick!" Kiko "You know I'm not going to repay you like that." Ria "Boy, you so gay! " Kiko "You know, thats a really rude insult." Ria "That ain't an insult thats what I think you are! What man turns this good !@#$%^&*] down?" Kiko, sighing "Just tell me when Dre gets here, and be on the lookout for any cops." Ria "Don't worry, I got your back, I just wish I could get on top of it." Kiko shakes his head and walks inside Ria's house, sitting down in the living room as he waits for Dre. Ria sees Dre's car drive up. Ria "Well, there's your mandingo brother now!" Kiko "Good." Dre sneaks up to the entrance of Ria's house, making sure no one spots him. Ria "Well well well, look who came crawling back. Sharan not giving you any no more? I know she's up that white boy's ass now." Dre "Nice to see you too, Ria. " Noticing what she has on "What the hell are you wearing? I think you have the wrong idea?" Ria "I was hoping I could get two for the price of one. Dre "You want to have a three some with me and my bro? You crazy." Ria "I don't know what Sharan got that I don't...but get the hell inside before someone sees you." Dre walks inside, and greets Kiko. Dre "Yo, bro, what you drag me here for?" Kiko "You're on the run from the police and you ask me that?!" Dre "How you know about that?" Kiko "Well, Karl Hutchins paid me a visit. You just are their main target at the moment. I cannot believe this has spiraled into so much chaos. I never wanted to be apart of this, like I told Lauren right before all this went down. It won't be long until Ty finds out that Lauren's alive." Dre "Ty's in jail, he can't do nothing to us." Kiko "Ty is a powerful crime lord, who's to say he won't get out?" Dre "And his rival Mike Dietz is the police chief. He ain't letting Ty's spoiled ass walk out of that place." Kiko "I guess we'll be joining him soon, then! I can't believe you just went on the run like this!" Dre "I ain't done nothing wrong, and I'm not gone let them just lock me up because of Ty!" Kiko "You faked a woman's death! That's not wrong?!" Ria, peeking back in for just a minute before going back outside "Wow, you two make my !@#$%^&*] wet when you fight." Dre "Bro, you need to just calm down." Kiko "Where's Lauren now?" Dre "I don't think that's any of your business." Kiko "I've been taking care of her all this time, of course its my business! Where is Lauren?!" Dre "She and her newborn baby are doing just fine." Kiko "She had her baby?!?! She had her baby?! This just keeps getting worse...first the stuff with momma and DC and now this…" Dre "Momma and DC?" Kiko "Just forget it." Dre "What's going on with momma?" Kiko sighs...he knows that it was basically now or never, because by the time he actually gets up the courage to tell Dre about their parentage, Dre could be in a jail cell. Kiko "You know DC Williams?" Dre "Yea, Abe's brother and Kevin's uncle." Kiko "He's our father." Dre "WHAT?!" Kiko "Momma told me." Dre "Momma told you?! She's here?! In Pasadena?!" Kiko "Sorta...she's in a mental institution. For the Birds." Dre "Say what?! Momma was in a mental institution and you didn't tell me?! DC is our father?! Kevin is our cousin?! Mona is our cousin?!" Kiko "No, Kevin is our brother, and Mona is our sister!" Dre's eyes widen as the truth sinks in. All this time, the father that he never got to know is DC. And his mother is here in Pasadena...and his arch rival is his brother! Dre storms out of the house, angry. Kiko chases after him. Dre "DC is my father...momma's here...to hell with all of you!" Ria, confused "Did he just say that DC was his father?" Kiko, again sighing "Yes, Ria, DC Williams is our father." Ria, gasping "OH HELL NAW! So I slept with your father, and two of your brothers?! Good dick do run in that entire family" Kiko "Don't remind me. Dre, wait!" Kiko chases after Dre, as Dre gets in his car and drives off...   Episode#126: Parentage Revealed! Written by: Tara Smith   Williams House   Sister Patterson sits on the floor of her living room...it still has yet to be picked up after Kevin tore it apart so many days ago. Sister Pat tries to read the Bible, but a few more tears fall from her eyes and she just closes it...she is dazed, and she doesn't know what to do. Sister Patterson "Lord, why you doing this to me? Why you putting me through so much pain?" Sister Pat's eyes are stained from all the tears, as just about everyone in her life has shunned her. Mabel "Madea" Jenkins, Sister Pat's cold mother, walks in. Miss Jenkins looks around at the wrecked house. Madea "Well damn, just because your son is dead doesn't mean you get to laze around your own damn house!" Sister Patterson, looking up at her mother "What are you doing here, Miss Jenkins?" Miss Jenkins "Well, I decided to come to see you one more time." Sister Patterson "Why is that, Miss Jenkins? Don't you hate me?" Madea "Honey you better watch your ugly mouth. You know how I feel about you and all this damn pain you brought your family. But I finally got my say in court, and everyone knows what you did to me and how crazy you are. Thats good enough for me." Sister Patterson clenches her fists, just closing her eyes and turning away from her mother, not in the mood to deal with anyone or any more of Madea's insults right now. Miss Jenkins raises her eyebrows. Madea "This really has got you down, doesn't it?" Sister Patterson "My son is dead, Miss Jenkins, and everyone in my life has turned on me. Madea stares at her daughter for a moment...Madea groans at first, but for the first time, she sees genuine, true pain inside Sister Patterson's eyes, and also for the first time in her life, she feels genuine sorrow for her daughter." Madea, sitting down "Honey you gotta break out of this. I know your family ain't no Cosby show but I did not raise no punk." Sister Patterson "My husband is dead. My third eye don't work no more. My two living children have turned on me. God ain't answering my prayers. What do I have left going for me?!" Madea "Patterson, do you think I got through life surrounded by people who love me? Sister Pat doesn't answer." Madea "No, I didn't. I mean hell everyone knew me as that crazy old woman that gets on high speed car chases, but here's the difference with you: You have had all these people that did love you, I didn't. And they may not love you now, honey, but you can get them back. You gotta rise above all these jackasses trying to get you." Sister Patterson, stunned "I've never heard you talk like this, Miss Jenkins." Madea "Well honey I got some love in me. And don't no child that came out of my uterus fall but not get up." Sister Patterson slowly nods...she and Madea stare at her, and for the first time in all of their lives, the mother and daughter lean in and hug! They embrace for a moment, Sister Pat at least enjoying her mother showing love for once. Madea, pulling back after a moment "Okay honey don't push it!" Sister Patterson "Thank you, Miss Jenkins. I knew there was a reason I loved you." Madea "Well, uh, don't think this means you gone get all this loving from me, I mean what I said about you before still stands." Madea gets up, and she briefly gives a smile to Pat, before leaving the Williams House. Next, Celeste enters. Celeste, smiling at Pat "Hello, dahling. I see you and Miss Jenkins had a nice talk." Sister Patterson "Yes, Celeste, we did." Celeste "You know, Sister Pat...I always thought you were crazy, and believe me, dahling, I still do...but after being in Pasadena for a little while, I really see the pain you went through, and are going through...and you don't deserve it." Sister Patterson "Thank you, Celeste, that means alot to me. I just don't understand it." Celeste "Oh, dahling, you'll get through it. I know you will...I mean you are Sister Patterson for goodness' sakes. And for the record, I never blamed you or judged you for what you did to Madea." Sister Patterson "Again, thank you, Celeste...I am glad I at least have my family. And thank you for comforting me at the funeral." Celeste "I would do it again if I could. But now, I have to go back to Salem...but we will keep in touch, trust me on that. And by the way…" Sister Patterson "Yes?" Celeste, edging towards the door "I'm taking Miss Jenkins back to Salem with me." Sister Patterson's eyes widen, and for a moment, she slips back into her old role, and slaps Celeste before grabbing her Bible! Celeste darts out the door, and Sister Patterson chases after her. Sister Patterson "DON'T KNOW ONE TALK ABOUT, AND DON'T KNOW ONE TAKE MISS JENKINS!!!!" Celeste runs out to her car, where Madea is waiting, and immediately hops in as Sister Patterson approaches. Celeste, driving off "BYE DAHLING! LOVE YOU!" Madea, lighting a cigarette "About time I say goodbye to this crazy ass town! Can't say I'll miss ya, Pasadena, but I got to get out of this looney bin!" Sister Patterson just watches, hollering but also shaking her head, as Celeste and Madea head to Salem...   Ivory Inc.   Karim is at his desk doing some work with LaDonna, trying to get his mind off Kevin. LaDonna, turning away from her work for a moment "Karim, how are you? You haven't spoke much." Karim "I'm better, LaDonna, but I still can't believe any of this." LaDonna "Its gonna be okay, Karim, its gonna be okay. " Alexis then walks in, and rolls her eyes at Karim and LaDonna. Alexis "Well look what we have here." LaDonna "Alexis, not here, not now." Alexis "Oh shut up! Karim, have you forgotten that I'm your girlfriend?" Karim "Please, Alexis, my brother just died." Alexis "I am really sorry for your loss, but that doesn't give you and LaDonna the right to leech onto each other. What about me, Karim? Did you forget all about me after that crash?" Karim "Alexis, to be honest, I still think you lied to me about Ashley and everything she did. I'm sorry, Alexis, but I refuse to be with anymore liars. I already put up with this with Ria and am not going to go through it once again with you. Enough is enough. Hell, you attended that funeral with Santino." Alexis "You're one to talk! Santino and I are friends, we've been helping each other out." Karim "But when I was just friends with LaDonna, that wasn't okay, was it? However, now, LaDonna and I have feelings for each other, and I love her. Its time to move on, Alexis. I'm sorry, but its over." Alexis, leaning over the desk and slamming her fist down "You BASTARD! I LOVE you and this is how you repay me?! By hooking up with your receptionist?!" LaDonna "We didn't "hook up"!" Alexis "Save it, Donna. I love you, Karim, I love you so much, and I'm not taking this. You haven't seen the last of me." Karim "Actually, I hope I have. Now please, get out." Alexis, tears in her eyes "How dare you do this to me." Alexis turns, and angrily leaves Ivory! LaDonna "Thank goodness she's gone!" Karim "I loved Alexis, but you're right...and now we can be together." LaDonna "You mean you want to make us official?" Karim, smiling "Yes, yes, I do! LaDonna leans in and passionately kisses Karim as they finally become a couple!   Outside of Ivory, Alexis kicks a trashcan over in frustration. Alexis "I'm tired of Pasadena! I am tired of LaDonna, Sabryn, Bryan, everyone! Speaking of which, I am going to testify against her and get her ass thrown in jail, but first, I'm going to find my mother and be done with all this madness!" Alexis feels slightly light headed but brushes it off from lack of eating. Alexis then walks off.   Back at Westwood Park   Natalia enters her house with the just released Mark Jr. Natalia smiles as she cradles him in her arms. Natalia "It feels so good to finally bring you back home with me...and don't worry, what happened that one day will never happen again, little one, I promise." As Natalia gets settled in, Bryan walks in. Natalia, groaning "Do you ever leave me alone?" Bryan "Excuse me? I barely get to see my son, and I wanted to be there when he came home from the hospital! You and Sabryn need to stop acting like I am banished from seeing my children, it really gets tired." Natalia "Oh shut up, for once I can agree with your bitch of an ex-fiancee on something. We both know that you're a fool, Bryan, and all you do is think with your little head instead of your big head. " Bryan "Like you have any room to preach. Doesn't everyone say that you paid that drug dealer that shot my son to stab Dahlia?" Natalia "First of all, that is not true, and secondly, Dahlia got stabbed two years ago, and she's dead now. It doesn't matter...how I wish Mark was really Mark Jr.'s father." Bryan "That man is a nutcase and you know it. He will never touch my son." Natalia "Oh you're lucky he left town, or else I'd have him and we'd be married right now. Hell, I would let him adopt Mark Jr." Bryan "The hell you would. You'd have to go through me first...YOU are lucky that I haven't pursued full custody of Mark Jr." Natalia, getting up close to Bryan and lowering her tone "You wouldn't dare." Bryan "Try me." Natalia "Stop talking like you can bring me down, Bryan. You know you can't...really, what do you have going for you? You don't have Sabryn, Ashley's dead...your just some egotistical sex addict." Bryan "That's not true." Natalia "You slept with Sabryn, Ashley, AND me?! Hell, you played Sabryn and Ashley at the same time. " Natalia then leans in and KISSES Bryan. Natalia, pulling back for a moment "Tell me you didn't enjoy that. Tell me that's not the only reason that you are here." Bryan, staring at Natalia "Tell me YOU didn't enjoy that." Bryan and Natalia are silent for a moment...they both lean in and kiss again! They fall onto the chair, kissing passionately, but Natalia realizes what she's doing and kicks Bryan's shin! Bryan hollers out in pain, grabbing his leg, and falls back. Natalia, standing up "See? I told you. Now get out." Bryan stares at Natalia furiously, before limping out of her house, while Natalia goes back to tending to her son.   Unnamed Motel   Lauren is with her son inside the motel...she breast feeds him, and while she does, she continues to think about all the craziness surrounding her at the moment. Lauren I wonder where Dre went...he got that call and rushed off. I hope the police didn't find him. Lauren sighs, and looks down at her son. Lauren "You're so beautiful...I already love you, and I know you're Kevin's son...but your daddy just killed himself. And I still remember what Kiko said about the fetal alcohol syndrome...do you really have that?" Lauren just shakes her head, wondering what to do about all of this. Lauren "Daniel is with Sharan...Kevin's dead...the police are closing in on Dre and will probably figure out I'm alive, and Ty would kill me. How did I get into all of this?!" Lauren looks down at her son again. Lauren "I think its about time to start getting formula...you'll need it soon, but with Dre on the run, he can't exactly do that, and neither can I…" Lauren sits and thinks for a moment. Lauren "Oh what the hell...you're my child, I need to place your needs over my own…" Lauren sits her son down for a moment, while she puts some of her clothes back on, and huge sunglasses so no one will recognize her. She then picks up her son. Lauren "Well, off we go." Lauren then leaves the motel!   For the Birds Rehabilitation Center   Apple is sitting with Mona inside of their room. Mona "I wonder how the Williams clan took my lovely little eulogy at the funeral…" Apple, smirking "Oh, I think you rocked them to their core, yet again. Don't you worry, you did well." Mona, grinning "Thanks." An orderly then walks in. Orderly "Apple, you have a visitor." Mona "You have a visitor?" Apple, chuckling "Its about time. I knew that they'd come." Mona raises an eyebrow as the orderly takes Apple outside to a large room, where the patients can often sit if they are let out of their rooms. She sees Alexis there. Apple, approaching her "Its been a long time." Alexis "I guess it has, Mom...so you really are here. Its time for us to have a little chat." Apple "Indeed it is." Alexis "I'm just going to cut to the chase: Who's my long lost sister?" Apple's smirk grows into a grin as she is revealed to be Alexis and Ashley's MOTHER!   Next time on Alexis finds out the identity of her hidden sister!  
  21. The Dimera House Kristen opens the front door after hearing a knock. She is surprised and delighted to see Bo. Kristen “Bo, Come in.” Bo “Don’t mean to barge in like this. Are we alone?” Kristen “No one is here but the maids. I’ve missed you.” She gives him a hug. He holds her back. Bo, pulling away from her “Listen, we have to talk” Kristen “You’ve come to a decision about Hope and I? You chose Hope didn’t you?” Bo “No. It’s not that easy. It’s about your sister. I wanted you to hear this from me.” Kristen “Hear what? Which sister are you talking about?” Bo “Megan. Megan is claiming to be pregnant with my child.” Kristen “What? Bo? How? How could this happen? My sister?” Bo “Kristen I am sorry. I was drunk. Megan took advantage of me.” Kristen, deeply hurt, wiping a tear rolling down her face, “When will you find out if this child is really yours?” Bo “Hope and I are waiting on Lexie to call with the paternity test results.” Kristen “This is a hard one to swallow Bo. You have Hope, Megan and me out on a limb. “ Bo “I didn’t ask for any of this. What you and I have just happened. Naturally. I can’t control it Kristen. I love you Kristen. I love you.” Kristen overjoyed to hear those words from Bo’s mouth, runs up to him and holds him. He wraps his arms around her as well. They look into each others eyes, and giving into to passion Bo kisses her. He then pulls back Bo “I can’t do this Kristen. I am hurting so many people. “ Kristen “I love you and you love me. Bo love me. Love me now.” She kisses him and pushes him into the Dimera living room. She begins taking her clothes off and then his. She pushes him onto the couch as they are both naked. He looks at her nice curvy body. Unable to help himself he pulls her down onto to him as Bo and Kristen have a love session in the afternoon. Life in Salem Episode 450: Love in the Afternoon Written by: ML Cooks Bo and Hope’s House. Hope is in the kitchen feeding Pam and Addie. Addie “Where’s daddy?” Hope “I don’t know sweetie. (She says as she wonders if Bo is with Kristen or Megan) Hope “Guess what girls; I rented some movies for us to watch. Let’s go into the living room and get comfortable.” Pam “Ok mommy.” Hope escorts her twins into the living room. She turns her flat screen TV on and gets the movie ready to be watched. Wondering where Bo is, she dials his cell phone number but it goes straight to voicemail. She sighs. “I’m losing my family. I’m losing everything.” Tuscany A waiter walks over to Kate, Justin’s and Philip’s table. Kate “I’ll have a water crest salad.” Justin “Give me the Filet mignon.” Philip “While you two eat your bird food, I’m going to eat like a man. Give me a t-bone, well done.” Waiter “As you wish sir.” The waiter walks away. Philip “ Salem …. I see nothing has changed. “ Kate “A lot has changed my son. Victor is dead, Stefano is dead, and Marlena is dead. Vivian owns Salem . It doesn’t feel like the same place anymore.” Philip Well I knew all of that. It’s just going to take an energized go getter like myself to get this rolling. It’s time for things in Salem to be shaken up. 2010 is going to be one hell of a year in Salem . I don’t know what Vivian has on her mind, but she’s a fool if she thinks The Kirakis’s are some push over. And because my dear cousin here Justin couldn’t get the job done, I guess this task rest upon me.” Justin “Well Excuse me. I tried. I can’t do this by myself.” Philip “I can” he says smugly. Justin “I like to see you try. Vivian has garnered a lot of power.” Philip “So what does that mean? You could only nip at her heels?” Kate “Ok you two. Enough. This is not the way we are going to get back our empires. This is what Vivian wants. Let’s focus.” As she says that, the waiter comes back with their food. Philip’s mouth waters as he is about to dive into a piece of heaven after been served jail food for the past few years. Justin smiles at Kate and Kate gives him a flirtatious look. Salem Jail Mike with April walks over to his mother’s cell. Laura, getting off her cot is thrilled. “Michael. So glad you came to see me honey.” Mike “I miss mom. How are you holding up?” Laura “I’m used to being confined. Nothing new for me.” Looking at April “I see you brought my attorney. Is everything ok? Did something change?” Mike “Oh, no. I just thought I would let you know April and I are dating now.” April “I hope that is ok with you Mrs. Horton.” Laura “It is. I am so glad it’s just not that vial Robin. Mike I am telling you, she is setting me up to be in here.” Mike “Mom, please don’t. This is hard for me to deal with. I got my own mother, accusing my son’s mother of faking a fall and framing you for it. “ April “Don’t worry; we will get to the bottom of this. It’s only a matter of time.” Laura “Oh I know. Liars never win and Michael you will see I am telling the truth. I have no business being here. Robin is not a good mother for Jeremy. She’s a liar and a cheat. I hope you can come to you senses soon.” Mike “I love you mom. Your trial is soon.” Laura “I’m counting the days. That’s all I have to do in here. I’m counting the days until Robin is exposed for the lying Bitch she is.” Mike “I’ll be back soon; I have an appointment with the board of directors at the hospital.” Laura, frowning up, “You have a meeting with the board? That can’t be good.” Mike “Very interesting to say the least. Something big must be about to happen. I’ll keep you posted.” Laura “I love you Michael.” Mike and April leaves, leaving Laura to ponder her thoughts of her freedom. Hotel, Lucas and Eugenia’s Suite Greta stops pounding Nicole’s head into the ground. She is unconscious. Jan “Please Greta. We have babies. Just let us go. You have to get help. I’m sorry for everything. “ Greta “No way in hell. It’s over. This ends now.” Greta aims the gun at Jan, then at her son Bentley. Eugenia “Greta, it doesn’t have to end like this.” Greta “I thought I asked you to quit talking.” Greta fires the gun in her direction but it misses. Josh and Bentley begin crying. Greta “Damn shut those babies up! I can’t take it.” Jan and Eugenia both try to comfort their sons. Neither one is getting any quieter. Greta “That’s it.” She fires the gun in Jan’s direction but the bullet hit’s Bentley in the back. Jan let’s out this horrible scream. Greta screams as well “SHUT UP MY HEAD IS GOING TO EXPLODE.” Lucas comes too as he hears all the screaming and sees blood pouring from baby Bentley. Lucas is horrified. He’s angry. A rage is building inside him as the cries of the babies get more intense. He jumps up and grabs Greta, knocking the gun out of her hand. He begins to choke her. Pinning her against a wall, he is choking the air out of her body. As the baby cries echo louder in Lucas's head, the tighter his grip becomes on Greta’s neck. Eugenia hollers out “Lucas No! Stop it!” Greta’s face is now purple and she’s making gagging noises. Eugenia “You’re going to kill her.” Lucas “It’s too late for that.” Lucas drops Greta’s lifeless body onto the floor. Greta is dead. Lucas has killed Greta!
  22. After a very long hitaus, the longest running Days blog will finally return in early April. When we last left LIS we were in the middle of a major transition. When It comes back with episode 450 the transition will continue as we were going through a writing change, as ML Cooks joined the headwriting team again. Tara and I have have been hard at work the last few months mapping out storylines. And let me tell you, no other Days blog can compare, come close, or even light a candle to what we have coming up next. You can take that to the bank. Stay tuned for more news as we get closer to our launch date.
  23. Well I wanted to soften up Lauren and I thought Archer would be the girl to do it but After seing her work on OLTL I was not impressed. Lauren has done a lot of misunderstood things she does have a lot coming up. I just wrote her reunion scene with Daniel. WoW is all your going to say. Thanks Jay and btw what happend to remy?
  24. Some Casting News. With S.T.E.A.M.’s return now comes news of a rather surprising casting move. Newcomer Melissa Archer has been let go as she played the character of Lauren Romoan. Ms. Archer is the third actress to tackle the role. “We just decided that the change of actress just didn’t work out.” Series creator stated at press time. Coming back to the role is series veteran Brittany Woodland will be reprising the role as Lauren effective immediately. Brittany re joins S.T.E.A.M. having debuted as a recast of this character in season 1. Brittany was let go at the beginning of the 3rd season with reasoning stating the creative team is going in a new direction. Brittany comes in at a time when Lauren is going through a lot right now. She faked her death and had Kevin’s child. “ Things really get intense with Lauren. She has no idea the effect her actions are going to have. I’ve been taping some pretty shocking scenes that will air in a few weeks. I was taken aback when I read the scripts.” Brittany told the press.
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