GENERAL HOSPITAL PILOT EPISODE 1
GENERAL HOSPITAL
By C. Nathaniel Richardson
GENERAL HOSPITAL FANFIC PILOT 1
Part 1
GENERAL HOSPITAL
Michael walks up to a door that says “Dr. Monica Quartermaine, Chief of Staff.”, knocks on the door, and sees Monica.
Michael: Grandmother.
Monica: Michael! Hi honey. How are you?
Michael: I’m good. I came to give you the good news.
Monica: Oh…I already heard!
Michael: So…you know?
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PRISON
The guards escort Ava Jerome to the visitors’ area, where Kiki is waiting on the other side of the glass. They simultaneously pick up the phones.
Ava: Kiki I thought I told you I didn’t want you to see me like this.
Kiki: Sorry mom. I had to come see you.
Ava: I already know that I’m a horrible mother. You didn’t have to come all the way to the penitentiary to tell me.
Kiki holds up her left hand, and Ava is shocked.
Ava: Oh my God. He asked you.
Kiki: Michael and I are getting married.
Ava: Wow that’s…that’s wonderful. Congratulations. When’s the wedding?
Kiki: This week.
Monica: Congratulations! I will be more than happy to help with any planning.
Michael: That would be great, if you’re up to a fight with my mom.
METROCOURT HOTEL - BALLROOM
Carly: You put that over there by the table. And I want the threshold overrrrr here.
Carly continues to dole out orders and Franco walks in.
Carly: Hey you. I’m real busy.
Franco: I can see that, but can I borrow my lovely girlfriend for a minute?
Carly: Franco I’d love to but I just can’t. I gotta…
Franco silences her with a kiss and Carly smiles, but she’s focused…
Carly: I really needed that, but I gotta finish planning Michael and Kiki’s engagement party. I don’t want anything going wrong.
Franco: It won’t.
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MEANWHILE, Carlos Rivera is in the back alley of the Metro Court, and it’s dimly lit. He looks around, and starts walking. Suddenly, Shawn appears in front of him, and pointing a flashlight, and a shiny silver Smith and Wesson, at Carlos.
Shawn: What the hell are you doing here?
QUICK CUT TO…
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Ava: Well I’m...happy for you honey.
Kiki: Well you don’t seem like it.
Ava: Because I’m here. I would rather be supporting you.
Kiki: I don’t think the Quartermaines would want you around after what you’ve done.
Ava: There’s nothing that would keep me from supporting you.
Kiki: I know mom. I...wish you could be there, too.
Ava: I’m so grateful that you’ve stood by me, despite everything that I’ve done.
Kiki: You’re always gonna be my mother.
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Carlos: I had to go to the bathroom.
Shawn: You’re a terrible liar.
Carlos: Looks nice in the ballroom. Looks like Sonny’s son and Ava’s daughter are gonna have a nice engagement party.
Shawn: Julian sent you didn’t he?
Carlos: I don’t work for him.
Shawn: Yeah right.
Carlos: I took the rap for Sonny because Ava threatened my Sabrina. It’s her fault Sabrina left!
Shawn: I don’t give a damn about your vendettas.
Carlos: Well I can’t get to Ava and Sonny. They’re locked up.
Shawn: So you’re going after their kids? I can’t allow that.
Suddenly, someone knocks out Carlos.
Shawn: Jason? Thought you were done.
Jason: Old habits die hard. Let’s get him outta here. I’m not gonna let him hurt Michael.
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Monica: Your mother IS something else. Guess I better lay off.
Michael: Thank you grandmother. I appreciate it.
Monica smiles.
Monica: I’m so happy. For you. For all of us. For our family. I’ve got all of you back again. I’ve lost Alan, Emily, Edward, A.J., but Jason’s back, and I’ve got you.
Michael: Don’t forget Aunt Tracy.
Monica: I couldn’t if I wanted to.
Michael: I gotta get back to the office. Jason and I are working on a project.
Monica: Okay. You have a good evening.
After Michael leaves…Monica walks to her desk, sits back down, and looks at a picture.
Monica: Alan, oh how I wish you were here. Everything is better than I ever could have dreamed. Michael and I have gotten close, and Jason’s back...with us.
Then she sighs and pulls up something on her computer.
Monica: There’s just one more thing that will make everything complete.
Monica looks at a DNA test showing that Jason is Michael’s biological father.
END OF GENERAL HOSPITAL PILOT 1
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