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Unleash The Dragon! Episode97


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In an undisclosed location,

Ashley walks in the room with Rufus.

arquette_alexis01.jpgRufus, looking at Abe,mjhv.jpg Sharan and Mona

"Looks like we are gonna have a party."

MacyGrayArtist.jpgMona, jumping up

"Who in the hell is this?"

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"He walked in on me talking to Alexis."

Mona

"You dumb Bitch. He is not apart of the plan. Why can't you be careful? Everything that is going to happen is plotted out to a tee and here you go with this woman."

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"That is no woman. Like at his Adam's apple."

Mona, looking closer

"You're right?"

Rufus

"Give me a break. It's not that big. I'm a woman thank you very much."

Ashley

"Oh yea?" Ashley then rips off Rufus's skirt and panties and out flops his manhood. Rufus's face reddeneds with embarrassment. Mona and Sharan are stunned.

Mona

"Wrap that sh!t up. I don't want to see that needle." Mona turns her face and begins to vomit on her father's face.

Rufus , looking at Ashley

"You ignorant Bitch. I can't believe you just did that." She says with a tear running down his face.

Mona, wiping her mouth

"It's ok. I don't blame you for wanting to be a woman. Men are pigs. They are a waste of space."

Rufus

"At least some one feels my plight. Does this mean you'll tell this crazy Bitch to let me go.'

Mona

"Sorry sister girl, no can do. I can't risk you out there on the streets of Pasadena after what you saw."

Rufus

"Please let me go, I won't say nothing."

Mona

"Ashley, you know what to do with him."

Rufus

"No Please!" he says pleading as Ashley drag him away.

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Episode:97, Unleash the Dragon!

Written by ML Cooks, Durand Saint Hilaire, and Tara Smith

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Ria walks up to the nurses station with a rose and some take out.

Nurse

"Can I help you?"

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"Dr. Whitfield please?"

The nurse pages Kiko as Ria takes an inhale of the Chinese food she's brought. Kiko walks around the corner and is a little surprised to see Ria.

kiko-headshot05.jpgKiko, with a slight smile on his face

"All this for me?"

Ria

"It looks that way cutie."

Kiko, shaking his head,

"I guess I can take an early lunch." He then looks at the nurse in charge

"Forward my calls to Diego." Kiko escorts Ria to his office. She walks in and is impressed to see his decked out office with art pieces and exotic plants.

Ria looks at his awards and achievements hanging on the walls. She sets the food down on his desk and looks at one.

"Harvard. I'm impressed."

Kiko, sitting down unpacking the food

"Not as impressed as I am with this stunt you pulled."

Ria, turning around and looking at him

"Is that what this is? You know I usually don't do these kind of things. ."

Kiko

"Why start now?"

Ria

"Because I want to. Is that ok with you?"

Kiko, laughing

"Yes."

Ria, beginning to eat

"You're nothing like your brother."

Kiko

"You're right….. My brother,…. I believe I told you that I don't keep it in the family."

Ria

"Pump your brakes. I just brought lunch down here to you to get to know you more. I know everyone is this city but you, you're a stranger. I just thought I'd be a good neighbor. Is that a crime?"

Kiko

"No not at all. Just ass long as you know nothing will ever become of us."

Ria

"You better eat this damn food. DO you know how much I paid for this, no no wait, do you know much I had to put into my tank to get over here?"

Kiko, laughing

"I'm glad you did all that for me."

Ria

"Uhm hmm." Rolling her eyes.

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Bryan is setting up the club when the door opens and Dre walks in.

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"Dre…"

He closes the door behind him.

BRYAN

"Can you lock the door behind you... We are not open yet."

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"I kind of miss it here... Haven't been here in a month of Sundays…"

BRYAN

"Yeah... last time you were ; when Chris was here? Wanna a drink? Its on the house."

DRE, grabbing a chair, and Bryan grabs a bottle of liquor...

"Man, I can't believe Chris is really gone; I mean... there's Daniel walking free. Beat on hi girl, smoked drugs and Chris, a true brave heart"

BRYAN

"It's was a sad real lost... He was a good man... A great man -"

DRE

"The system is to blame… Believe me I should no."

BRYAN

"I think we should do something - in his honor…"

DRE

"Like what?"

BRYAN

"Go after the state... The police, and everyone involved on that case did a lousy job…"

DRE

"You can just save it... It ain't going to work…"They drink.

DRE

"I guest congratulations - how's the youngen?"

BRYAN

"He is growing up so fast...Hey... you know Sabryn and I are getting married... And I'm still looking for a best man."

DRE

"Are you asking me?"

BRYAN

"Well, if you think you got what it takes - and you can handle the toughest job in a best friend's life. Chris was my first obvious choice, but you and him were like brothers so I would want you there to represent him in spirit."

DRE

"Can I take a rain check?"

BRYAN

"Nuah, this is it man... I am doing it once... I want to do it right."

DRE

"Well; sho rite then- what do I have to do?"

BRYAN

"Show up on time…"

DRE

"Fair enough... Do I got to wear a tux?"

Bryan

"Yes sir."

Dre

"I'll see what I can throw together….Well, got to run... I'll holla at you later.

BRYAN

"Should I call you a cab?"

DRE

"No need too.." With that he exits the room, and Bryan's cell phone rings, and he answers it.

BRYAN

"Hello…Natalia - Don't call me."

With that he hangs up the phone.

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Karim looks inside the very dark, pitch black house after he kicked the door open, and can't see one thing and notices how it smells horrible.

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"What the hell is this pla-…?"

Karim turns around when he hears an ear-rattling scream, almost like a battle cry, and sees his mother rushing towards him! Sister Pat jumps high into the air, and tackles Karim to the ground, and both of them fall onto the cement of the porch.

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"DON'T KNOW ONE, ever EVER, DISRESPECT MISS JENKINS LIKE THAT!!!!! Do you hear me, Karim?! Don't know one talk about, don't know one disrespect Miss Jenkins like that!"

Karim

"Mom, what are you doing?!?! Calm the hell down! All I was trying to do was go see what was in that damn house, because it obviously makes you insane! I can't believe you are so obsessed with one woman that no one knows about but you!"

Sister Pat

"You think you can just barge in on MISS JENKINS?!!?!?!? This is Miss Jenkins's house, boy, and Miss Jenkins don't take none of that! I don't care who you are, you don't be messing with Miss Jenkins!"

Karim

"What has happened to you?! Mom, what's happened to you?! All you ever say is Miss Jenkins…look at yourself! LOOK AT YOURSELF! Tackling your own son and pushing him to the ground just because he tries going into a house that you go into every day! I just want to know who, or what, this Miss Jenkins is!"

Sister Pat

"Miss Jenkins is Miss Jenkins, don't ever forget that! Its dangerous to mess with Miss Jenkins, and I don't want you to get hurt like I did!"

Karim

"Wait, what?"

Sister Pat

"Miss Jenkins is Miss Jenkins! Listen to my words!"

Karim

"That's it. I'm sick of this…forget it, mom, forget it! I won't even bother to try to find out about Miss Jenkins. And you've showed me today how crazy you really are."

Karim shoves Sister Pat off of him, and then stands up angrily, and quickly walks away, while Sister Pat lies on the ground and watches, and then turns and looks around Miss Jenkins's house…

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Kiko walks up to the bar after seeing his brother Dre, having a drink. He grabs a seat next to him.

Kiko

"What's going on with you?"

Dre, think of the tragic fate Chris has suffered

"Chillan man. Got some stuff on my mind."

Kiko, ordering a club soda

"What's on your mind?"

Dre

"Oh yo ass actually care now?"

Kiko

"Don't start that mess. We are brothers. It's a given I care for you. Now what is going on?"

Dre

"I am trying to make paper."

Kiko

"Paper? You chopping trees down now?"

Dre

"naw man. Paper…money."

Kiko

"Excuse me if I am not up to date on your slang. I thought you were a barber or something."

Dre

"I was till the shop was closed down. Mona's crazy ass kidnapped Sharan."

Kiko

"Well get a job some where else."

Dre

"It's not that easy. I need fast money man. A job won't cut that."

Kiko

"So what are you trying to do? Return to the street life? Sell drugs?"

Dre

"Actually yea. I am or I should say I was working for Ty. He offered me a job with cash up front."

Kiko

"I heard nothing but bad things about Ty. What the hell are you doing for him?"

Dre

"He wanted me to kill some one man. The chic is knocked up. I've done a lot of bad things but that's something I don't do."

Kiko

"That's serious. I don't know if we should be having this conversation. I don't want to know nothing like that."

Dre

"Oh, my bad Mr.' Goody Two Shoes. I don't have a medical degree from some expensive school."

Kiko

"The choice was yours. I didn't ask you to leave home to run the streets."

Dre

"I'm not going to run these streets for ever. I just need some quick cash man. I'm behind on my rent, bout to get evicted. I can't keep gas in my car with these damn gas prices. I can't eat. I got to do something."

Kiko pulls out his check book and begins to write out a check

"Here, you should have been come to me."

Dre

"naw man. You can keep that. I don't need your money. I'm a grown ass man. I can take care of myself."

Kiko

"Let your pride go. I rather give you this money then see you dead or working with Tyler."

Dre

"I'm good man. I can take care of myself. You wasn't thinking of me all those years after I left home, so don't start now doctor."

Kiko

"Why do you have to be like that? We are brothers. Let me help you."

Dre

"You can help by taking me to momma. I want to see her."

Kiko

"She does not want to see you. Besides, she wouldn't even remember you."

Dre

"I bet she knows who you are, The favorite son, the good one in the family."

Kiko, handing the check

"Here, just take this to get you by for a while."

Dre grabs the check and rips it up,

"I told you I don't want your money! Now leave me the hell alone! I can take care of myself." Dre finishes his beer and then leaves.

In an undisclosed location

Mona opens the door and walks in... she places the key in her back pocket.

MONA

"Sharan!"

MONA , after hearing no answer, she calls out to her again,

"Honey!" Still silent, and she makes her way to the room where she keeps her.

She opens the door, and just as she does Abe grabs her, and throws her across the room.

MONA

"Bitch!"

On the small chair in the corner is Sharan tied up to the chair, with masking tape on her lips...

MONA

"What the fu(k did you do? "

Abe rushes toward the door, and Mona rushes after him, and pushes him against the wall, slamming his face on the wall... Abe turns around and Abe slaps Mona, across the face, and she falls backward toward where Sharan is sitting.

MONA, looks back at Sharan, and she smiles.

"Hey love…" Throwing a kiss to Sharan as she quickly unties one of Sharan's hand.

ABE

"I am going to finish what I should have done long time ago."

Abe is making his way toward Mona, and Sharan starts shaking her head in horror, and just as Mona looks back, she was served with another slap.

ABE

"Come on get up! …..GET up!"

MONA

"You shouldn't have done that Abe…"

ABE

"I am just getting warmed up… You have hurt to many innocent people, Chris, Daniel, Sharan, Your brother Kevin, and Dondre"

Mona gets up from the floor and wipes off the blood from the corner of her mouth.

SHARAN

"Mona... No!!! Don't! - That's not why we are here!"

MONA, looking back at Sharan, and was working on freeing her legs.

"No one hurts my baby... and gets away with it." Mona launches a range of insults to Abe, punches coming left and right, and Abe is walking backward, and throwing couple punches of his own.

ABE

"Your baby? The woman you kidnapped, and held hostage."

MONA

"Well, I learn from the best! Isn't that right daddy? - Daddy knows best; thats what they say - Did you enjoy yourself, [!@#$%^&*] your own daughter night after night?"

Abe grabs Mona by the throat and pushes her against the wall,

MONA

"Made you feel like a real man; didn't it - all powerful - Just like now, come on take your best shot."

Mona opens both of her arms rested them against the wall.

MONA

"Come on Kill me!"

ABE

"You are nothing! You just like the whore for your mother!"

Abe squeezes more and Mona hits him in his groin, and he stumbles backward, and she reaches for her gun in her back pocket

SHARAN

"Mona no!"

Mona looks back at her, and Abe kicks Mona in her knees and the gun goes flying across the room in the corner... Mona falls on the floor, and Abe gets on top of her.

ABE

That's what you wanted; right?

He rips opens her blouse, and Mona is fighting him.

MONA

"Get of me you scum!"

Abe over powers her, and he rips opens her pants. Her hands and nails goes to his face, and scratches him.

SHARAN

"Get off her!"

ABE

"Shut up!"

SHARAN grabs the chair.

"Abe get off of her now!'

Abe turns to Sharan, and she serves him across the face with the chair, and Abe falls out of consciousness on the ground.

Mona and Sharan are looking at each other, Mona quickly gets up from the ground, and goes straight to Sharan, and she holds Sharan on the face.

MONA

"You did good honey…"

SHARAN

"Is he dead?"

MONA, looking back at him, and she fixes his clothes, and kneels down and checks for a pulse.

"No... The bastard will live, but no for long."

She drags him across the room to small metal pole in the corner of the room , and Sharan is watching nervously.

MONA

"Help me with this will you?"

SHARAN

"What are you doing?"

MONA

"Hand me my bag…"

Sharan remains standing.

MONA

"Now!!!"

She startled Sharan with abrupt command.

MONA

"I am sorry... Please."

Mona watches as Sharan grabs the bag, and Sharan looks back at Mona, and looks at the gun on the ground.

MONA

"Hurry up…"

Sharan heads toward Mona with the bag, and Mona removes hand cuffs from the bag, and hand cuffs Abe at the pole in a sitting position with both hands cuffed to the pole.

Without looking at Sharan, she speaks.

MONA

"Go ahead pick it up…"

SHARAN

"What?"

MONA

"The gun... I know you want too."

SHARAN

"What make you so sure?

MONA

"So the thought, never crossed your mind?"

SHARANS, lies.

"No…"

MONA, gets up, and she makes her way toward the gun, and picks it up, and she walks back toward Sharan.

"Have you killed someone?"

SHARAN

"Excuse me?"

MONA

"Its a simple question…"

SHARAN

"There's nothing simple about that - and no."

MONA

"But you would if you had too…"

SHARAN

"I don't like where this is going - and I am not a murderer."

MONA

"I think everyone is capable of murder.

MONA, Mona places her hand on Sharan's shoulder.

"Earlier... You wanted to kill him, I saw it on your eyes -"

She hangs her the gun.

MONA

"Go ahead... shoot him! If you love me, you would kill my father. Prove to me you love me"

Sharan looks at Mona, and looks back at the gun, and Abe.

MONA

"Come on... Do it!"

Sharan slowly takes the gun from Sharan. Abe slowly opens his eyes.

MONA

"That's it... nice and slow. "

Mona moves back, and pulls out something to smoke from her purse, and she lights up drug stick, and laughs out loud, and Sharan looks back at her.

SHARAN, tears in her eyes

"Please don't make me do this…"

MONA

"Kill him! If you say you love me then prove it to me by shooting him!"

She yells, and Sharan brings her attention to Abe, and slowly Abe is opening his eyes. His eyes try to focus on the image in front him, little by little his focus is getting clearer, and there's Sharan standing in front of him with the gun.

ABE

"Sharan! Don't listen to her."

MONA

"Shut up Abe!"

Mona places her hands on Sharan's shoulder.

MONA

"He's a monster... he doesn't deserve to live for all the things he did - to me, his own daughter... Think about love!"

ABE

"Don't!!! - She is setting you up!"

MONA kicks Abe in the face with the bottom of her heel

"Don't poison's my loves head -"

SHARAN

"Shut up!!!! Both of you!"

MONA

"That's my love! Now Kill him!"

ABE

"Wait wait wait! - Kelis;"

MONA

"Sorry dad... I can't save you now."

She turns and starts walking away.

ABE

"Sharan wait! Mona - I am not your father."

Mona stops.

ABE

"Your mother... She - she had an affair... With my brother; and you were the result that affair."

MONA

"You would say anything wouldn't you? Do it!"

Sharan's hand starts sweating, and she can't hold back, she sees her hand pulling the trigger, and suddenly her head is full with images; visions of how Mona introducing her to Mona Island , and all the pains Abe caused her Mona.

Tears starts pouring from Sharan's eyes, and everything starts moving in slow motion, Mona takes another puff from her smoke, and Abe is trying to say something, but all you see his mouth moving, and couldn't make out the words, Sharan looks back at Mona, and she wanted to aim the gun at Mona's head, and blow her head away, but she stops herself...

She returns her attention return to Abe's direction, and Mona claps her hand, and the Gun goes off...

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WHOOOOOOOOOOAAA HOLY GEESSSS !!!! THAT WAS JUST PURE DRAMA; PURE LOVE; PURE ROMANCE... WHAT A GREAT REAd!!! THAT'S ALL I HAVE TO SAY - EVERYTHING ABOUT THIS EPISODE WAS JUST PURE BEAUTY -

SECOND - I hope the tranny comes back alive, and Bit(h Ashley don't come back from which ever hell she is taking our poor beloved Tranny!!!!

OH - I would love if Miss Jerkins turns out to be MONA!!!!! - Good Story!!!

Man Dre is heading down hill; and the street will soon be too small for him, and can't wait to see who's their mom - oh WAIT!!! MISS JERKINS!!!!

Love me some STEAM any day - GREAT JOBS TO ALL THE WRITERS -

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Nice episode. I loved the part with Sister Pat tackling Karim, she must really have something to hide about this Miss Jenkins. And the ending was so good too, a perfect cliffhanger.

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Wow! One of the best episodes! Great!

I'm worried about Rufus!

Wow I just loved every bit of the Mona/Sharan/Abe scenes! So much intensity. Really great writing. And the ending was great! I can't wait to see what happens next.

So much drama! Loved it!!!!!

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Thanks guys for the very inspiring comments. I want to again thank Durand and Tara who have been a tremendous help to me these last few weeks.

3 more episode before the finally(It seems all the SONOP shows are about to air finales, sweet)

I am so damn happy. I am so tired and exhusated. I need a break.

I promise you though(esp the long time readers) this finale will be everything you have been waiting for, Miss jenkins, Mona and Pat, WHo's baby does Ash have, and so much more. I am going to leave no stone unturned. I''ve been building up all these stories since day one and it's all about to come crashing down.

I am truly going to out do myself this time around. Thanks for reading everyone and it has been a joy to tell my stories and receive so much feed back.

Matt, Bryan didn't ask Kiko because he barely Knows him. Also Chris and Bryan were very good friends and so was Dre and Chris so Dre was the next best thing.

I am so glad everyone is waiting to find out who Miss Jenkins is. We've talked about her all season and in the next few eps, we will see what this Miss Jenkins is all about and I promise you it will blow your socks off.

Sister Pat is now Mainstream with SONOP. Casting her was one of my most genius ideas yet. I LOVE WRITING FOR HER and I am considering doing a comedy spinoff starring her, her holy water and bible along with her antics. Stay tuned for that.

Also I am trying to soften up Ria just a bit but I see it's not happening. LOL. It's kool, I got BIG plans for RIA. She's about to be thrusted to the front burner FINALLY. I have a big story for her going into the third season that really gets into who he is and why she i the way she is. Alright enough with m y babbling and hoopla.

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LOL, thanks for thinking of me, my net was cut off, lol, damn gas porices but I will be back on this evening and steam will post, I just wrote 99 and let me tell u, i can't wors can't express.

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