Pentek Viktoria

It's better, thanks! I can't wait the next episode!

OK, Junior, I calmed down. It was the most beautiful and saddest episode you have written. You know I am Sophia's fan and it was too hard for me... I want to congratulate. Well done.

I am crying!!! How could you do that? How could you kill her? When you said that things would go better I meant that they keep her in alive with mashines. But now? How could you do that with that family? How could you do that with us???

You can't do that! You killed her, junior, you killed her!!!

Excellent work! I loved the mud scene! Thanks!

Hi Junior1z, I love your work but it's a bit difficult to read and understand for me. But I'm persistent and I can improve. Something to comment: It's strange what you've done with Warren. I don't wonder from Pamela but Warren is an other thing! I don't think that Warren would ever have an affair with an older woman especially not with Mason's mother. But it's your fanfiction! I look forward the next step! I love the scene in the bar! I love punch-up! Especially when it make women! Oh, how I missed it! Thank you for the enjoyment! Victoria

I vote for Carrington Garland !!!

[!@#$%^&*]??? means witch. Pardon. I've forgot to ask who these young people at the begginning of the chapter?

Juniorz1! Would you like to show us Sophia as a [!@#$%^&*]??? WHY??? I was shocked when I read the part with Elisabeth. UUUUUhhhhhhhh, what will CC get at home!!!!!!!!!

Oh, Juniorz1! How I love them! Just one thing: CC doesn't trust in anybody. Never and nobody. After a long-long-long time - perhaps. But I like your fanfiction. I can't wait the next chapter. Viktoria