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    S4 Episode 2

    I complelty understand your concern ML. I felt I couldn't tell this story without representing some stereotypes associated with it. Rocky is gay, Kevin is gay, and Eden was a call girl, I couldn't ignore the stereotypes surrounding this story. But yes at this point they have no idea which roommate is infected with HIV. But it will be revealed before the end of Tumbling Down, it's actually even more complicated then it seems. But damn it's sooooooo crazy!!! I still can't believe FTL is going there. Gavin lives in New York. Marti came back to Springfield and is trying to forget everything. Aubrey is pretty messed up in the head. She has some good stories coming up. Gus and Harley are back together and they are a hot couple. Leah is 16. The actress is a few years older but I do think that picture ages her a bit. So by the next chapter I'll have another picture. But we hardly see her this chapter anyway.
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    S4 Episode 3

    Nothing and no one is perfect in Springfield... Mallet and Dinah's House: Mallet and Dinah sit in their living room. They are going over wedding plans. She looks at him, "I just don't know. I mean technically this is our 3rd wedding. Our first was spur of the moment. But our second was a real wedding." Mallet looks at her, "Yeah but now your Dad is here. You always wanted him to walk you down the aisle." She sighs, "I know..." He rubs her back, "Don't feel guilty about having a third wedding to the same man. Believe me, in this town we're still normal." She laughs, "Amen to that." He looks at her, "What about the wedding party?" She sighs, "Hmm well my sister will not be in it for obvious reasons. And believe it or not I don't think I really have many friends." He looks at her, "I'm sure you do." She shakes her head, "I rarely talk to Harley anymore. Mel and Natalia haven't been my friends since we had our falling out a couple of years ago. Annie is behind bars, and Olivia is in rehab. Other than that, no friends." He sighs, "Well I have some guys on the force who I could get maybe they have girlfriends-" She covers her ears, "Oh no. Do not do that. Stop." He laughs, "I'm sorry." She sighs, "Maybe Anthony could carry the rings." He looks at her, "What about Belinda?" Dinah nods, "Ooh that's right! She's actually been very sweet lately towards me." He stares, "Really?" Dinah nods, "Well for her." Mallet nods, "That's good. She seemed happy on Christmas when we got engaged again." Dinah looks at him, "I know she has been upset lately but I think she's finally coming around. Maybe those crazy teen years are behind us." Mallet puts his arm around her, "Now we can enjoy the few years we have until Anthony is a teenager." The two kiss and continue their wedding plans. Cedars: Michelle is walking down the hall in her doctor's coat. J walks up next to her, "Hey." He puts his arm around her. She shrugs it off, "Hey what's up?" He laughs, "Jeez cold much?" She looks at him, "What?" He smirks, "Don't 'what' me. You know my manners suck so I'm going to obviously point out that you shrugged me off just now." She sighs, "We're at work." He stares, "So..." She nods, "We need to be professional." He continues staring at her. She nods, "And my family works here. Okay? You happy?" He stares, "And you still haven't told anyone that we've been seeing each other right? You know this is starting to bum me out." She shakes her head, "It's really complicated for me." He nods, "Really because it's not complicated for me. I want to shout it from the rooftops and brag to everyone." She sighs, "I have kids. They lost their father a few years ago. I made the mistake of rushing into an engagement with Bill that failed miserably. I'm not letting that happen to my family again. I'm sorry." He stares, "So what does that mean for us Michelle?" She shakes her head, "I don't know okay?" He looks at her, "You know what I think? I think you're the one who is afraid to get into a relationship again. And you're using your kids as an excuse." She scoffs, "That's not fair." He looks at her, "No. What's not fair, is that I'm putting my heart out there for you, that's something I don't do, and you're spitting on it." She sighs, "J..." He walks off, "Just don't." Michelle watches as an upset J walks away from her. Springfield High: It's almost the end of the day at Springfield High. Coop hands Spencer her paper as she walks out of the room. He nods, "Your poetry is quite remarkable for someone so young. But I have to say it's pretty dark. Anything you want to talk about?" She takes her paper and walks away. Robbie sees her in the hall and follows her, "Emma." She rolls her eyes. He sighs, "I mean Spencer." She keeps walking. He catches up with her, "I wanted to talk to you." She nods, "You are." He sighs, "I'm worried about you." Spencer shakes her head, "Don't be." He looks at her, "Why because there is no problem?" She looks at him, "Mind your own business Robbie. I don't get why you keep harassing me. We aren't friends." He sighs, "Maybe I want to be." She chuckles, "Wow. No thanks." He sighs, "Maybe I want to be more than friends." She stops and stares at him, "What?" He nods, "Remember when your Dad was engaged to my Mom? We were so excited to be related but all I could think was that it would complicate things when we grew up and I asked you to marry me." She scoffs, "You were a weird kid." He takes her hand, "Spencer... I'm going to the school and telling them about the cuts on your arms and marks on your neck." She stares, "Why can't you just leave me alone?" He nods, "I told you." She shakes her head, "You don't really like me. You like girls like Marti Lewis who are cheery, preppy, and a conformist. You just like that I'm different, you want to see if I'm fun in bed. You don't want to be with me in the long run." He sighs, "You don't know that." She stares, "Did you tell anyone you 'like' me? My brother James? Your cousin Jude? They apparently are your best friends right?" He looks down. She nods, "That's what I thought." He keeps following her, "Just give me a chance. She looks at him, "What do I have to do to get you to leave me alone?" He stares, "There is nothing you can do." She smirks, "We'll see." Spencer walks away from Robbie. Museum Apartment: Maureen sits in the living room with her guitar. She looks through her notebook of songs she's been working on. She takes a drink of water. Maureen takes a deep breath and clears her throat. Jason walks in behind her and stops. She begins to strum her guitar. Jason quietly watches. Maureen begins her song in a very peaceful voice,"Just listen Don’t try and stop me Just hear me out Hear my whole story When I hear you I hear my boyfriend When I touch your hand I feel my husband When I see your eyes I see my soul mate To know you feel the same would feel oh so great Just listen Don’t try and stop me Just hear me out Hear my whole story When you talk to her I hear my boyfriend When you touch her hand she feels my husband When she sees your eyes she sees my soul mate Why cant you see what I see as fate? Just listen Don’t try and stop me Just hear me out Hear my whole story." She stops and rest her face in hand. Jason walks towards her. She hears his footsteps and turns. The two stare at each other. Jason smiles, "That was beautiful." She turns away, "I thought everyone was gone..." Jason sighs, "I know you probably didn't want anyone to know about your song." She looks at him, "Yeah-" He nods, "I know who it's about Maureen." She stares, "You do?" He nods, "Yeah I do." The two stare at each other. Company: Dalton and Ashlee are having lunch. Dalton smiles at her, "When do you have to go back to work?" She smiles, "I have the rest of the day off." He sighs, "I wish you had told me that I need to go back to the club and talk to the new bartender." She sighs, "Oh damn. Well I can go to the gym and we can hang out later." He stares, "You don't need the gym. You're fine." She laughs, "Everyone should go to the gym. But I am far from fine." He looks at her, "You're in a relationship now. You don't need to try and look like a Barbie doll. You already got me." He grins at her. She sighs, "I still wish you hadn't talked me into dessert." He looks at her, "You ate it really fast." She nods, "I guess I was hungry." He kisses her on the cheek. Ashlee stands up, "I need to use the restroom." She walks over to the ladies room. Once she gets in she checks the stalls. They all seem to be empty. She pulls her hair back. Ashlee goes into the stall and closes it. Ashlee's feet face the bottom of the stall as she leans down and purges into the toilet. Once she is done she walks out wiping her face and heads to the sink. She washes her hands thoroughly. She grabs the mouth wash from her purse and rinses her mouth to cover the smell. She stares at herself in disgust and disappointment before walking out of the restroom. Towers: Rafe and Clarissa are in his suite. Rafe is lying in bed undressed. Clarissa is getting dressed a few feet away. He smiles, "Why are you leaving?" She sighs, "I told you I have errands to run." He grins, "Come on." She laughs, "I let you talk me into sticking around long enough. I'm already running late and I hate that." He sits up, "Do I need to come over there and get you." She walks over to the bed and kisses him, "I'm sorry. But I'll make it up to you later. Okay? I love you." He sighs, "Come on Babe." She grins, "Stop it." He hollers, "Clarissa." She turns. He smiles, "I love you too." She grins as she walks out the door. A frustrated Rafe lies back down. He is already missing Clarissa. Suddenly there is a knock at the door. He jumps up still naked, "I knew you couldn't resist." He answers the door with no clothing and smiles. To his shock Aubrey Cross stands outside. She smiles as she looks him up and down, "Wow. Welcome home to me." Rafe stares in shock. PART TWO: Cedars: Michelle sits in the doctor's lounge. Mel walks in, "Hey." Michelle looks up, "Hey what's up? You decide to put the white jacket on again?" Mel laughs, "No. I tried to balance being a doctor and a lawyer and once I was done I swore to stick with one at time. Besides having two titles like that seemed a little pretentious at times." Michelle laughs, "I see. So you visiting Rick?" Mel nods, "Yes, and unfortunately he's busy. But fortunately I can hang around with my favorite sister in law, who so happens to look just as upset as the handsome doctor I just walked by. What's going on with you and Dr. Chamberlain?" Michelle shakes her head, "Mel..." Mel stares, "You can tell me." Michelle sighs, "We've been dating a little these past few weeks." Mel grins, "I knew something was about to happen. It's been brewing for a long time. Yay! This is great. I'm so happy for you Michelle." Michelle looks down. Mel looks at her, "Is there a 'but' coming up?" Michelle nods, "It's not easy for me to get close to someone. That was my biggest problem with Bill." Mel stares, "Funny I thought Olivia was your biggest problem with Bill." Michelle sighs, "That too. But ever since Danny died... the idea of getting that close to another man? The same thing happened with Jesse." Mel looks at her, "Well between you and me, Jesse wasn't really right for you in this chapter of your life." Michelle sighs, "I know! But I guess maybe there is a reason that my last two relationships have been with ex boyfriends from before Danny. But J and I had a thing when we were kids." Mel stares, "Oh yeah. I'm confused on that too. Aren't you guys cousins?" Michelle sighs, "Not really. My Mom wasn't my biological mother so technically no. But our Mom's are sisters and my Mom was my Mom so yeah." Mel stares, "Hey stranger things have happened in Springfield." Michelle sighs, "I don't know what to do." Mel looks at her, "Just don't do one thing. Don't be afraid. I almost ruined my marriage for a second time because I was too afraid of things." Michelle looks at her sister in law. Springfield High: Jude walks out of the school with his bag over his shoulder. He walks out the back doors towards the parking lot. Spencer stands against the wall, "Hey." He turns. He watches as she smokes her cigarette. Jude nods, "What's up?" She looks at him, "You going home?" He shakes his head, "Just putting my stuff in my car. I got to get back inside. I'm not doing to hot in math this semester and I need to get some tutoring in." She stares, "That's boring as hell." He laughs, "Coming from the girl who never goes to any parties, football games, basketball games, school dances, or anything where people smile." She looks at him, "I find other ways to have fun." He stares, "Like what?" She stares, "What do you think?" He walks towards her, "I don't know drugs, self harming, playing psychological games with people's heads, sitting around thinking about how messed up the world is?" She nods, "Maybe. But there are other things." He smirks, "Like what?" She walks towards him, "You want to me to show you?" He stares, "Are you coming on to me?" She stares, "Sure." He looks at her, "Why?" She shakes her head, "I don't know. I'm bored." He laughs, "You're messing with me." She grabs the front of his jeans and reaches down his pants. Jude's jaw drops. She stares at him with a blank look on her face. She sighs, "I guess you've grown up a little since we were kids." He smiles, "You too Emma." She squeezes, "Don't call me that." He winces in pain, "Spencer. Sorry." She nods, "Let's go." She puts her cigarette out against the wall. Jude looks around as the two walk to his car. Gym: Ashlee is running on the treadmill. She can feel her heart beating intensely. She tries to put all of her emotions aside. Eden walks in, "Hello Ashlee." Ashlee stares, "Hey Eden. What's up?" Eden walks to treadmill next to her, "Just keeping myself in shape you know? I'm not too worried, I have good genes. But I gotta look good for my husband." Ashlee nods, "Coop is a lucky man." Eden smirks, "Yeah he is." Ashlee stares, "Do you have a problem?" Eden shakes her head, "I'm married to a great man. I have no problem." Ashlee looks at her, "It's not a problem for you that I'm still friends with Coop is it?" Eden lightly jogs on her treadmill, "Not unless you make it one sweetheart." Ashlee is sweaty and running as fast as she can. She looks at Eden's tight body as she gently takes her time, not even breaking a sweat. Ashlee stops her treadmill. Eden looks at her, "I hope I didn't make you feel uncomfortable." Ashlee walks into the locker room. She goes to her locker and opens it up. She begins to take her shirt off. She hears women chuckling from a distance. A paranoid Ashlee takes her stuff and moves to the other side. Ashlee begins to undress. She turns and sees herself in the mirror. She almost cries as she looks at herself in disgust. Museum Apartment: Maureen and Jason look at each other. Jason walks towards her, "It was kind of obvious who it was about Maureen." She sighs, "Oh... I guess." He nods, "You want the truth?" She nods, "Of course." He sighs, "I think you're being stupid if you think that would be a good idea." She stares, "What?" He sighs, "Plus, you're not the type of woman who goes after a man who's involved with someone else." She nods, "I know but-" He looks at her, "Maureen if it didn't work the first time why the hell do you think it would work the second time? Do you understand what I'm saying?" She looks down, "I guess. I just thought some things deserved a second chance." He shakes his head, "Not when you're too good for someone." She stares in shock, "How can you say this to me?" He looks at her, "Why would you even think of getting back together with Mallet?" She stands up, "Mallet?" Jason sighs, "Mallet and Dinah are back together! They are going to get married. You deserve someone so much better than him anyway." She looks at him, "Oh my God." He nods, "You said yourself that you felt like you wasted your time on that relationship. Besides, how could you do that to Dinah again?" Maureen shakes her head, "The song wasn't about Mallet." He stares, "Come on. Mallet and Dinah just got engaged-" She shouts, "No. It's not about him. I regret my relationship with Mallet, and I would never get back into something like that again. It wasn't about him." He stares, "Then who was it about?" She puts down her guitar and walks towards him, "Who do you think Jason?" He looks at her. She puts her hands on his face, "You aren't that stupid are you?" Maureen kisses Jason. Towers: A naked Rafe stands in front of Aubrey at the door. She smiles at him, "You're so happy to see me. That's sweet. He turns away and grabs a pillow, "What the hell is going on?" She shuts the door behind her, "Did you know I was coming?" He stares, "Do I look like someone who knew you were coming?" She smirks, "You look like someone who needs a bigger pillow." He turns away, "I thought you were someone else. Why the hell are you back in Springfield Aubrey? Are you trying to get yourself arrested?" He slips his boxers on. She looks around his suite, "Looks like your trust fund finally kicked in. What's it like being a Spaulding? Because you guys have it made." He walks back over, "Aubrey seriously?" She smiles, "Not even a hello kiss?" She kisses him on the cheek. He shakes his head, "Who knows your here?" She sighs, "No one. Otherwise you would have heard it on the news. I'm kind of a big deal I hear." He stares, "Do you have any idea what happened after you left? This whole town was shaken by the stuff you did Aubrey. And I'm not kidding." She sits on his couch, "Ooh. Elaborate." He sighs, "My Mom's marriage to Alan fell a part after she found out he covered up for us. Jonathan and Sarah went on the run again. Reva got hit by a car protecting them from Alan. Marina became a drug addict stripper when she thought her baby was dead. And don't even get me started on the rest." Aubrey stares, "I went out with a bang huh?" He looks at her, "You shot Liz, burned down Marina's house, kidnapped her baby and made her think it was dead, then you split town." Aubrey nods, "You're forgetting the part where we kidnapped Sarah together." Rafe turns away, "That was a long time ago." Aubrey walks over, "Well I'm back and you are the first person I've come too. So far the only one. I'm pretty dependant on you right now." He looks at her, "What?" She walks towards him, "I need you Rafe." Aubrey rubs his face and stares into his eyes. Mallet and Dinah's House: Mallet and Dinah sit together. He is kissing her neck. Dinah laughs, "You really don't want me to be successful with this wedding do you?" He laughs, "We can do it later." She looks at him, "Come on." He smiles, "We have all the time in the world." Dinah turns and begins kissing him back. The two lay back on the couch. She begins to unbutton his shirt. Mallet kisses down her neck. The doorbell rings. She sighs, "Crap." He shakes his head, "No. Anyone who rings the door bell is probably nobody. Anyone who knows us would knock. You know that Babe. Come on." The two continue kissing. There is now a knock at the door. Dinah sighs, "Okay. We're coming." Mallet shakes his head. She looks at him, "Get the door." He lays back, "You need to get the door." She laughs. Dinah fixes herself and walks over to the door. Her smile drops once she opens it, "Oh my God." Cyrus and Marina stand together with Marina's son Daniel. Cyrus sighs, "Hi." Mallet walks over, "Oh my God. What are you two doing here?" Cyrus stares, "I got your letter." Dinah scoffs, "I sent no letter." Marina looks at her, "Dinah. We flew out here for you. Your letter said it was urgent." Cyrus hands it to Mallet. Mallet stares, "Dear Cyrus, Belinda needs her biological father now more than ever, please come back to Springfield. Don't call, just come as soon as you can-" Dinah rips it out of his hands, "I would never- Oh my God." Mallet looks at her, "Seriously?" Cyrus looks at them, "What?" Dinah looks at Mallet, "Annie Dutton." The two stare at each other. Police Station: Annie Dutton sits in her cell. The guard hollers, "Dutton you got a visitor." She turns, "Ah. I was expecting you." RJ Winslow walks in, "I'm confused to say the least." She looks at his backpack, "You just get out of class at Springfield High?" He stares, "I go to college." She grins, "Cute." He sighs, "If this is about the Lewis Enterprises take over I'm not really a part of that. I'm just sort of an honorary member of the Lewis family." Annie nods, "I know sweetheart. It's not about that." He stares, "Then why did you request me to visit you?" She grins, "It's not about your family. It's about your girlfriend." He stares, "Belinda? What do you know about Belinda?" Annie grins, "Oh trust me, it's pretty interesting." RJ stares at Annie Dutton through the bars. PREVIEWS: RJ worries about Belinda! Dinah argues with Cyrus Aubrey has a request from Rafe Maureen confesses to Jason Michelle makes a decision Robbie confronts Spencer
  3. Can't wait to see what Rufus does! Lauren finally being revealed to be alive has a been a great story and it seems almost everyone in Pasadena is affected somehow. Anything that can get a big group of people involved is fun to watch.
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    S4 Episode 2

    The beginning of the new year continues in Springfield... Police Station: Annie sits in her cell. She looks around. Annie shouts, "I'm going crazy in here!" Edmund and Marah walk in. Edmund smiles, "You passed crazy a long time ago Annie." She stares, "Well look who it is." Marah stares back at her. Annie smirks, "You here to confess? They'll go easier if you turn yourself in but either way you're still going down Marah. We're about to trade spots." Marah smiles, "You're really lost it haven't you?" Annie looks at Edmund. He is smiling. She shakes her head, "What the hell is going on?" She notices the two are holding hands. Annie scoffs, "No. What the hell? Edmund I told you everything and you were supposed to help take Marah down. What are you two sleeping together again?" Marah holds up her hand. She flashes her engagement ring. Annie stares. She looks at Edmund, "You double crossing son of a bitch!" Marah and Edmund back up. Edmund chuckles, "Just when I thought you couldn't get any more vicious." Annie shakes her head, "You two deserve each other you know that? I can only imagine what Josh and Reva think of this little engagement." Edmund laughs, "I've made quite and impression on the Lewis family." Annie shakes her head, "What the hell does that mean?" Marah looks at her, "You haven't heard?" Annie sighs, "Unless the cops are talking about it I don't know anything." Marah turns to Edmund. Edmund smiles at Annie, "You are looking at the CEO of Lewis Enterprises." Annie's jaw drops. Cedars: Rocky and Kevin are in his room. Kevin smiles, "Hi." Rocky stares, "What are you doing?" Kevin hands him a gift, "I bought this for you." Rocky shakes his head, "I don't want this." Kevin grins, "Come on! I spent the last of my money on it. I pawned most of my stuff to buy you guys those presents. And everything else got destroyed in the fire. Plus I'm sure I've lost my job by now." Rocky sighs, "My God. Where have you been staying?" Kevin sits on Rocky's bed, "Here and there." Rocky shakes his head, "You look terrible." Kevin looks at him, "You're not one to talk." Rocky scoffs, "You did this to me!" Kevin sighs, "I felt horrible when I found out what happened. My whole world was shattered. I don't know what I'd do if I lost you Rocky." Rocky stares, "You seem fine now." Kevin nods, "When I found out you were okay... I felt something come over me. Rocky I thought you had fallen out of love with me. But you ran towards that car to save me. Now I know that you love me and you always will." Rocky stares, "Are you really serious? That's all you've gotten from this?" Kevin looks at him, "Am I wrong?" Rocky turns away. Kevin smiles, "I know I'm not." Rocky sighs, "I love you. I can't control that." Kevin nods, "I know. You need to stop trying. We're meant for each other." Rocky looks at him, "You really don't get it do you?" Kevin looks at him, "Come on! There is nothing to 'get'. You love me and I love you." Rocky shakes his head. Kevin nods, "Yes I do. I love you." Rocky shakes his head, "No. You scare me." A very confused Kevin stares at him. Harley's House: Gus and Harley pull into the driveway. Gus looks at her, "I can't believe you made me wait this whole time." She laughs, "We're not kids. We're cops. I'm not having sex in your car in front of the station." Harley gets out. Gus gets out next. The two hurry into the house. He kisses her neck. Harley laughs, "At least let me shut the door. Harley kicks the door shut. Gus and her continue kissing. They throw their jackets off. She smiles, "Upstairs?" He shakes his head, "I can't wait that long." Gus picks up Harley and puts her on top of the counter. The two continue making out. He unbuttons her top. He kisses her exposed chest. Harley wraps her legs around him. Gus rips his shirt off. Harley reaches over and closes the curtains. She undoes his belt. Gus's pants drop the floor. The two make love. Towers: The cameras are still rolling. Baby Clay is awake from his nap. Liz puts baby Clay into his stroller. She smiles at him, "We are going for a walk around town." The producer nods, "Yep. This will make great footage for the opening sequence." Liz pushes him out in his stroller. The camera crew follows. Her suite is completely empty. Aubrey sneaks out from the nursery. She looks around. She examines the room. Runs her hand along the wall. She enters Liz's bedroom. She smirks. Aubrey sits down at Liz's vanity. She stares into the mirror, "Princess Elizabeth. Oh sweet Elizabeth Spaulding, the heiress to Spaulding Enterprises. The richest family in all of Springfield." She begins to put Liz's make up on. She slowly applies the make up to her face. Aubrey gets up and begins to undress. Slowly she removes all of her clothing. She stands naked as she reaches into Liz's drawer. She takes out Liz's lingerie, "Ooh. Elizabeth has a sexy side." Aubrey slips it on. She then goes through her jewelry box. Aubrey puts a diamond necklace around her neck. She smiles into the mirror. She grabs some lipstick and lays down on Liz's bed. Aubrey smears the lipstick on her lips. She runs her hands up and down her body as she lies in Liz's bed. Springfield High: Leah and James walk down the hall holding hands. Robbie approaches them, "Hey." Leah smiles, "What's up?" Robbie sighs, "You guys know Emma Spencer right?" James laughs, "She's my half sister dude." Leah nods, "Of course. She was my best friend when we were kids. I tried talking to her when she first came back to town but she's pretty closed off." Robbie nods, "I noticed a few things about her. She always wears something on her neck and around her wrists, you guys ever notice that?" Leah shakes her head, "I try not to comment on her style. I just accept that some people choose to look that way." Robbie sighs, "Seriously. I saw her wrists when she was walking away, she has a lot of cuts up and down her arms." James stares, "Really?" Robbie nods, "And I noticed her neck has a lot of marks on it, they look like rope burns." Leah sighs, "Okay let's not overreact to anything. Maybe she's just into some kinky stuff." James scoffs, "Eww." Leah looks at him, "Just because she's got that goth style doesn't mean she hurts herself. It just seems a little stereotypical you know?" Robbie sighs, "Stereotypical or not I've gotta do something." On the other side of school. Marti is at her locker. Belinda smiles at her, "I'm surprised you decided to show your face here again." Marti sighs, "I know you're mad at me." Belinda laughs, "Oh mad doesn't even begin to describe it. It's bad enough I found out that you slept with RJ-" Marti shakes her head, "Before he was your boyfriend." Belinda nods, "Oh don't give me that crap. You stole Leah's boyfriend, I'm not about to let you steal mine. Besides, I know you're the one who sent my notebook to my parents." Marti sighs, "You were bullying me. You made my life here a hell." Belinda laughs, "You think that was hell? Then you can't even imagine what I have in store for you." Marti looks at her, "Things are different now. I'm different. Just forget about it. Please?" Marti starts to walk past her. Belinda grabs her and throws her up against the locker. Belinda looks at her, "Oh no. You see you only focused on my sexual past. But if you had dug a little deeper you would have heard that I used to be a very violent girl. And I still can be." Belinda walks away. A very shaken up Marti begins to cry at the feeling of being physically assaulted again. She has flashbacks to her sexual assault as she emotionally heads down the hallway. Cedars: Coop stares at Ashlee. She nods, "One of your roommates is infected with HIV. Coop sits down, "What?" Ashlee nods, "You have no idea who's medication it was?" Coop shakes his head, "No. I saw the pill and I thought maybe it was Kevin's. If he was on drugs then that would explain why he was acting this way. And then I could prove something to Rocky." Ashlee sighs, "It could be Kevin's." Coop looks at her, "You think I'm supposed to present that theory to my brother? Accusing his boyfriend of having HIV? Kevin's already trying to get it into his head that I'm homophobic." Ashlee shakes her head, "Whether you ask him because he's gay or don't ask him because he's gay it's just as bad Coop. I know you're not homophobic." Coop stands, "What if it's none of my business? I don't have the right to ask." Ashlee looks at him, "What if it is your business Coop? What if it your brother? Or your wife?" He turns to her, "Eden? How can you say that?" Ashlee sighs, "You never know Coop. Maybe she's afraid to tell you." Coop looks around, "It could be anyone. Eden, Rocky, Kevin, Jason, Maureen, Vi. What am I supposed to do? Do I make a big announcement and ask for answers?" Ashlee stares, "I'm sorry Coop... I know this is tough for you." He looks at her, "You're a doctor Ashlee. Who do you think it is?" She sighs, "It could be anyone Coop." Coop looks at her, "On a totally statistical standpoint?" She sighs, "Some of the biggest victims are men who have sexual relations with other men and... prostitutes." Coop turns away. Ashlee sighs, "Rocky and Kevin are gay, and I'm sure they have had themselves tested enough but I don't know. And I don't know if it's true but rumors about Eden are that she used to be a call girl-" Coop stands up, "I know what you're thinking okay. Just don't." She sighs, "I'm sorry." Coop begins to worry about his loved ones. PART TWO: Harley's House: Gus and Harley lie on the couch together. The two are out of breath. Harley smiles, "Oh my God. Oh my God." He laughs, "Ditto." She laughs, "You know this sneaking around thing is fun." He smiles, "I'm right about these things huh?" She sighs, "But-" He moans, "Ah! No buts!" She sighs, "But, we can't do it forever. You know that." He sighs, "I know." She looks at him, "We made a promise that we would see how things worked out between the two of us and keep everything under the radar before-" He nods, "Before we tell the kids anything. Because why get their hopes up-" She sighs, "If we are not ready to get back together." The two lay down and look up at the ceiling. Gus sighs, "I miss this. I miss being with you." She looks at him, "I miss you too." She puts her hand on his chest. He kisses her head, "But if it's going to have the same problems as last time we can't put ourselves through that again. Or the kids for that matter." Harley sighs, "Well Zach and Jude are practically adults... which I'm not ready to talk about. And Angela isn't a little kid anymore... I don't know." Gus looks at her, "Let's just enjoy whatever this is while it last. She rubs his chest. He smiles, "You know what that does to me." She giggles, "Do I?" Gus rolls back on top of Harley. The two begin to make love again. Police Station: Annie stares at Edmund and Marah. She shakes her head, "What are you guys talking about?" Edmund nods, "Marah and I took it upon ourselves to release the information about Josh's illness to the company and they were not pleased about being left in the dark by the Lewis family." Annie stares, "No way. Marah would never do that to her father. Marah looks down. Annie looks at her, "Oh my God... Oh my God. I finally get it. You two aren't in love at all are you?" Edmund laughs, "You're nuts." She shakes her head, "You're blackmailing her. This is all part of your plan isn't it? You're using your own daughter's kidnapping to get control of Lewis Enterprises." Edmund grins, "What I do with my company is my business." She shakes her head, "My company! I helped make Lewis Enterprises what it is today. If anyone is going to take over from the Lewis family it should be me." Edmund smiles, "From behind bars." Annie scoffs, "Son of a bitch. You got everything you wanted. I'm here to take the fall for her. So you can use her as a pawn in your games." Marah stares at Annie. Annie looks at her, "You're pathetic. I thought you were some strong woman that I should actually worry about. But you're nothing Marah. You're a coward." Marah looks at her, "Screw you." Annie laughs, "He controls you. Your life is over." Edmund puts his arm around Marah, "Let's go." Annie scoffs, "It's only a matter of time before one of you kills the other." Marah and Edmund stare at her. Annie begins laughing. Marah stares, "I can't believe I ever looked up to you." Edmund shakes his head, "Come along." The two walk out. Annie's laughter becomes uncontrollable as the two exit. Cedars: Coop stands with Ashlee. She looks at him, "I didn't mean to offend you." He shakes his head, "I'm sorry I snapped. I'm just stressed. I feel like my biggest problem is how I try to control the people I love sometimes. It's pushing my brother away. It ruined my relationships with Ava, Stephanie, and... you." Ashlee stares at him, "There was a lot more involved in our break up. We both just changed and we grew a part. It was nobody's fault." He sighs, "I'm glad we are still in each other's lives." She smiles, "Me too." Coop sighs, "I don't know what I'm going to do." She looks at him, "If there is anything I can do... I wish there was more." Coop shakes his head, "You've done enough. Thank you." Ashlee rubs his back. Coop turns and smiles at her. The two hug each other tight. Eden walks over with two coffees. She clears her throat. Coop jumps up, "Hey Babe. Thanks." He takes the coffee and kisses Eden. Eden looks at Ashlee, "On your break?" Ashlee nods, "Yeah." Eden nods, "It's nice you have time to comfort your ex boyfriends." Ashlee looks away. Coop laughs, "Ashlee's a good friend. She was just giving me some good advice about my brother." Eden looks at him, "Well I'm glad you trust her." He sighs, "Come on." Eden and Coop walk down the hall. Coop looks at her, "Are you feeling okay Babe?" She nods, "Yeah... why?" He shakes his head, "Nothing." The two leave the hospital. Springfield High: Marti is walking down the hallway. She continues to have flashbacks to New Years Eve in New York. Gavin presses himself up against her back. She turns around, "Don't touch me." He grabs her arms, "Hey. Your friend Leah was the tease. You're the sure thing." She pulls away, "No I'm not and I wouldn't sleep with you anyway. You're a dweeb." He stares, "Liar." She laughs, "Get over yourself." Marti begins to walk away. He grabs her from behind and pulls her close. Marti wipes a tear from her face. She walks over to the guidance counselors' office. She knocks on the door. Bridget walks out, "Marti. Hi. You okay?" She stares, "Principal Reardon... I didn't know you would be here..." She nods, "Well Ms. Hayden is out for the day. So I'm taking on some of her appointments that couldn't get rescheduled. Is there anything I can help you with?" Marti stares at her. Leah, Robbie, and James walk up. Bridget looks at them, "You guys okay?" Leah sighs, "We need to talk to you about something. Bridget sighs, "Well I'm with Marti at the moment-" Marti shakes her head, "No. I just had some questions about my schedule but I think I can figure it out. Go ahead with them." Marti walks away. Robbie looks at Bridget, "We are concerned about a student." Bridget nods, "Which student?" Leah sighs, "Emma Spencer." Bridget nods, "Okay well what's going on?" James sighs, "We think she might be hurting herself." Bridget sighs, "Did she say anything or do you have proof?" Robbie shakes his head, "No..." Bridget sighs, "Well I'll set up an appointment with the guidance counselor and you 3 can tell her your situation and I'm sure she'll find a way to help you." The three of them all look at each other. Towers: Aubrey is lying in Liz's bed. She hears the door open in the main room. Liz walks in with her camera crew. Aubrey quickly hides under Liz's bed. Outside in the living room. The camera crew packs up. The producer looks at Liz, "Use this time to take a nap. We'll be back in a few hours." Liz nods, "Okay sounds good." After putting the baby down, Liz walks into her bedroom. She sits on her bed. Aubrey looks at Liz's feet from under the bed. Liz takes off her shoes and lays down on her bed. She notices it's a bit wrinkled but doesn't pay attention. After about a half hour, Liz is fast asleep. Aubrey slowly works up the nerve to crawl out from under the bed. She gets up and looks at Liz. She stands over her. Aubrey leans down and watches her sleep. Aubrey's heart is racing as she knows Liz could wake up at any moment. Aubrey stares at her enemy who is incredibly vulnerable. She feels Liz's breath brush against her face. Aubrey leans closely and stares at her. Very slowly Aubrey plants a kiss on Liz's lips, "I'll see you soon." Aubrey gets up and walks out of the room. Liz continues sleeping. Cedars: Rocky lies in his bed. Kevin stares at him, "I scare you?" Rocky looks at him. Kevin stares, "Do I really?" Rocky nods, "Yes you do. You scare the hell out of me Kevin." Kevin's eyes fill with tears. Rocky looks at him, "I'm sorry." Kevin looks at him, "When did this start?" Rocky sighs, "Our first encounter as adults was you bashing me for being gay. Then you confess your feelings for me. Maybe it's always been there... but lately your passion and emotions have just been really overwhelming. One minute it's fun and your happy and then the next it's dark and scary." Kevin cries, "So I'm a monster?" Rocky shakes his head, "No." Kevin looks at him, "I gave up everything for you! I don't have a job, I don't have money, I don't have a home! I have absolutely nothing!" Rocky looks at him, "I never asked you to do that." Kevin backs away, "I don't know what's wrong with me. I don't know why I've always been like this. I'm so sorry Rocky. I'm so sorry." Rocky stares, "I want you to get help." Kevin shakes his head, "There is no help for me. I'm worthless." Rocky sits up, "No you're not." Kevin sighs, "I think I just need to go away... You'll all be better off." Rocky sits up, "Kevin!" Rocky is in too much pain to get out of his bed. Kevin walks away. An emotional Kevin exits the hospital. He looks around. He has no idea where to go next. PREVIEWS: Dinah and Mallet get a shock Spencer pushes Robbie away Ashlee reverts to old behavior Michelle worries about her relationship Aubrey surprises someone Maureen confesses her feelings Annie makes a shocking move!
  5. So excited for all of this. I feel like now more than ever I'm really getting to know these characters. You're writing for plot has always been great but now you're character writing has become even better and more clear. I'm so excited to see where everything goes and what else you have in store for us.
  6. Another great opening scene! Two slaps for Karim! Lmao I love stories like this one with Lauren. One of my favorite parts of those kind of stories is people’s reactions. I’m glad you’re having everyone find out and letting us see their reactions. I hate it when shows gloss over that. Like “oh you’re alive omg,” then they are over it. OMG shocking ending. This episode was good for so many reasons. I love the way you break them up now. The stories are much easier to follow. I hope Ria is okay! Poor Ria. I cannot wait to see what happens next. I’ve never been more into STEAM. This two parter thing is great, no joke.
  7. JAYJAY

    S4 Episode 1

    So glad you enjoyed it. The chapters thing has really helped me organize my stories so that evertyhing happens faster but not too fast. And every episode can have something big. And yes the HIV story was something I wanted to do this season and at the last minute I realized it was perfect for this chapter. The Musuem Apartment has helped that story with the mystery of which roommate has it. Edmund and Marah are going to be huge in this chapter. Annie has huge plans and her story is probably the biggest part of Tumbling Down. It will tie into at least 8-10 other characters. Aubrey has been on the run from the law and is now hiding in Liz's place to stay close to Liz her worst enemy. Worst of all she is close to Liz's little baby. So glad you loved it. The drama is going to keep coming, one crazy thing after another until it all comes tumbling down in the chapter finale.
  8. They were probably the most popular characters. Ella was the most popular over all. The rest weren't as successful because one of the biggest complaints was MP2 had unloveable characters. Each one of them has been compared to another character from the original series: Amanda, Allison, Billy, Jake, Jo, Sydney, etc.
  9. Wow a really good episode. This really helps learn more about the characters. Reminds of Guiding Light when they did the Inside the Light episodes that focused on one storyline or one character. Though those were sometimes horrible the character sucked. Really helps understand everything too. BTW what's with that picture at the end?
  10. JAYJAY

    S4 Episode 1

    The new year has begun in Springfield... Lewis Enterprises: Edmund is moving his stuff into the CEO office. Marah follows him. He smiles, "Can you believe it Marah? Things are finally looking up for us." She shakes her head, "I don't know about that." He stares, "Are you still bitter that we had to knock your family down a peg? I really thought you would be over that by now. I sure am." She turns to him, "Did you see the looks on their faces when I voted for you? They were heart broken. I am the worst daughter in the world." He walks up behind her and starts massaging her, "Hey, calm down. Sometimes we have to hurt the people we love. That's just a part of life. Survival of the fittest." Marah shakes her head, "Not like this." He smirks, "Would you rather your family know that you were responsible for Ava's kidnapping? Just imagine their faces then. You would be an instant outcast for life." She turns and looks at him, "Like you?" He nods, "Exactly." She looks into Edmund's eyes. He brushes her hair. The two kiss. They hear someone clear their throat. They turn to see Reva standing in the doorway. She looks at them, "Sorry if I'm interrupting." Marah sighs, "Mom..." Reva walks towards her, "I honestly don't know what to say right now. Quite frankly I'm surprised. I never thought you could do something like this." Marah sighs, "Mom I..." Edmund smiles, "Marah is capable of a lot more than you give her credit for." She turns to him, "Edmund!" Reva stares, "What the hell does that mean?" He grins, "Marah is a smart, independent, free thinker. She doesn't need to follow the herd like the rest of your family Reva. She is out of your control." Reva looks at Marah, "You hear the way he talks to me?" Marah looks down, "Edmund rubs people the wrong way sometimes." Reva stares, "Marah please. Whatever he has on you, I can help you out of it. But first you need to be honest with me. What is going on?" Marah looks at her mother and then back at Edmund. Police Station: Annie sits by herself. She is muttering to herself constantly. Harley and Gus approach her. Harley stares, "Annie." Annie looks at her, "Detective Cooper." Gus looks at her, "Your trial is coming up soon. Are you sure you don't want to change your story before you go through with it? It could get ugly." Annie laughs, "You two are so good at your job huh?" Harley stares, "We have a history Annie. I can't pull anything over on you and you can't pull anything over on me. So let's just be up front with each other." Annie looks at her, "Uh-huh? So what am I hiding now? I've told you the truth." Harley stares, "There is a lot of evidence against you. The only problem is that we are still fuzzy on a possible motive. If you didn't kidnap Ava, then you know who did. Correct?" Annie laughs, "I should get my lawyer." Harley stares, "Annie. I'm not looking to pin you to the wall. I want to find out who did this. If you know something then you need to tells us." Annie looks at her, "I can tell you that being a mother has obviously effected your sense of style." Gus stares, "We obviously don't know each other that well." She stares, "I know that you're Harley's ex husband. And you had a drug problem." Gus nods, "Something we have in common?" Annie smiles, "Indeed. Plus you're Alan's son. Another Spaulding huh Harley? Very nice. Why did you two get divorced? Did he cheat on you like all your other husbands?" Harley looks away, "I don't know why I tried to help you." Annie stares, "Didn't your little brother blow up on New Years Eve? Why don't you go check on him instead of bothering me okay?" Harley sighs, "I knew this was pointless. I'll see you in court Annie." Gus and Harley walk away. Annie laughs to herself. Cedars: Rocky lies in a hospital bed. He has suffered some burns. Coop and Eden are in the room with him. Dr. J Chamberlain walks in. Rocky looks at him, "Hey." J nods, "How are you feeling? Is the medication helping?" Rocky sighs, "As much as it can." J nods, "That's good. You're very lucky the EMT's go to you in time. This could have been a lot worse. As a cop you think you'd know that you're not supposed to run towards a burning car." Rocky nods, "Well as a cop I'm supposed to rescue people. I thought my ex boyfriend might be in the car... I don't know. It was an accident." Coop scoffs, "Accident. Yeah." Rocky looks at him. J sighs, "Just take it easy. No more trying to a hero when you're off duty." J walks out of the room. Coop stands up, "The fact that you're calling this an accident is a little disturbing." Rocky sighs, "Kevin didn't mean for this to happen." Eden stare, "Rocky he set his car on fire! You could have been killed. Anyone could have been hurt. He knew the risks when he did that." Rocky shakes his head, "Kevin is going through a lot right now." Coop scoffs, "Yeah hiding from the cops. He's probably on the run if he's smart." Rocky sighs, "He's probably scared and upset somewhere." Downstairs on the main floor of the hospital. Kevin is brushing his teeth in the restroom. He dances to the metal rock he hears in his head. An old man walks in and stares as Kevin jumps around the restroom. Kevin splashes some water on his face. He smiles at himself. He grabs a present he bought from the gift shop and rushes out of the restroom. Carriage House: Blake lets Ross inside her house. Ross looks at him, "Have you heard anything?" Blake sighs, "No and I'm sick to my stomach. Jason and Clarissa say they haven't heard anything from him either. And Rocky is still in the hospital." Ross sighs, "Have you heard anything on his condition?" Blake nods, "Rocky is hanging in there. I just don't know what I would do if Kevin had indirectly caused Rocky's death. I don't know..." Ross looks around, "Where is Clarissa?" Blake nods, "On a date with Rafe." He looks at her, "You shouldn't be alone." She sighs, "You're alone." He sighs, "I deserve to be alone." Blake shakes her head, "No one does. Especially our son." She sits down. He sits next to her, "I'm worried about him too. And not just about him being out there hiding from the police. There is something wrong with him Blake." Blake sighs, "He's emotional. He always has been. He has mood swings." Ross looks at her, "I think there is something else." She stares at him, "Why do you say that?" He sighs, "Look at his behavior Blake. I know you're his mother and it's hard for you to see the truth about him. But the signs are more obvious than ever." Blake shakes her head, "My son is not perfect and he has a lot of things to work out. But you're implying that he's mentally ill or something." Ross stares. Blake looks at him, "Oh my God. You really think that don't you?" Ross and Blake stare at each other. Springfield High: It's a new semester at Springfield High. Marti Lewis stands outside of her school. She is bundled up in her winter clothes. Her usual smile is now replaced with a blank stare. She walks up to the school and goes inside. As usual the guys check her out as she walks down the hall. Only now Marti feels uncomfortable. Leah and James are across the hall. Leah rushes over to her, "Hey!" Leah gives her a hug. Marti sighs, "Hi." James smiles, "We weren't sure if you'd be here. Zach said you haven't been feeling well since you got back." Leah nods, "Yeah and you haven't been returning my messages. Are you coming to cheer practice tonight? We have basketball season to work on still." Marti sighs, "I'm just really busy now. And I don't know if cheering is a smart idea this semester." Leah stares, "Huh. Well a part of me is really happy that I'm a shoe in for Cheer Captain senior year. But I'm still going to miss having someone on the squad who is actually good." Marti nods, "Sorry." Marti walks away. Leah and James notice the difference in Marti's personality. On the other side of the school. Spencer walks down the hallway. Robbie approaches her, "Hey." She looks at him, "Hi." He nods, "So I saw you at Caliente on New Years Eve." She nods, "Cool." He stares, "Did you have fun?" She sighs, "Sure." He smiles, "Did you get really wasted?" She stops and stares at him for a minute. She then continues down the hall. Robbie follows. Towers: Liz is holding Baby Clay. Her camera crew is still filming her reality show. Her producer looks at her, "You ready to shoot your interview for the voice over segments?" She nods, "Oh yeah. Let me just put the little guy down." The producer rolls his eyes, "Come on." She scoffs, "Excuse me. You're the one who made me fire my Nanny." He nods, "She was dull. Besides we can do a whole episode centered around you searching for a new nanny and doing all the interviews." Liz sighs, "I suppose." Liz takes Clay back to his nursery. The one room where cameras are not allowed. Liz lays him down in his bed. She sighs, "Please sleep for Mommy. I love you so much." Liz kisses her son before she leaves the room. She shuts the door behind her. The closet door opens up. Aubrey Cross steps out of it again. She switches off the baby monitor. Aubrey looks down, "That's some Mom you got there." She rubs her hand on Clay's face. She smiles, "Look at you. You look so much like your Daddy. Your sister looks like her Daddy too. I should know I helped raise her. Until your Mommy came and took every thing away." Aubrey leans down and kisses Baby Clay on the head. She slowly tucks her arms underneath him and picks him up. PART TWO: Lewis Enterprises: Reva stands with Marah and Edmund. Marah looks at her, "I don't know what to say." Reva stares, "Come on Marah. I know you and this isn't you. You wouldn't hurt your family this way. Especially your father who is going through chemo right now." Marah sighs, "I do what I have to do. Survival of the fittest." Reva scoffs, "Oh my God." Marah looks at her, "You don't know me. I'm not Dylan, or Shayne, or Jonathan. I'm didn't give you a bunch of grandchildren, I don't have a natural sweetness, and I don't have some special bond with you. I'm just Marah." Reva shakes her head, "I love you. But you're right, I don't know who you are anymore." Marah sighs, "I'm Marah Lewis, soon to be Marah Winslow." Reva scoffs. Edmund smiles, "Just accept it Reva, your daughter has fallen in love with me. And someday we will give you lots of beautiful grandchildren." Reva nods, "And in a few months your daughter will give us a grandchild." Edmund grins, "It's a little incestual. But when has that ever stopped two people in this family from being in love?" She turns away, "I've heard enough." Marah sighs, "Mom..." Reva looks at her, "I love you. Your family loves you. But honestly... you are breaking all of our hearts. And something like this might literally kill your father." Reva has tears in her eyes as she leaves. An emotional Marah stands still as Edmund rubs her shoulders. He grins, "You were great." She nods, "Indeed." He kisses her neck, "I love seeing you in action." Marah turns around and kisses him back. Police Station: Harley and Gus are with Mallet. He looks at them, "She say anything?" Gus sighs, "Nothing useful." Mallet shakes his head, "Are you surprised?" Harley sighs, "I know what it's like to be accused of a crime you didn't commit. In my case, a crime that never happened in the first place." Mallet looks at her, "This is Annie Dutton." Harley nods, "I know. But our job is to put the bad guys behind bars. And what if she didn't do it and there is a real kidnapper out there getting away with it?" Mallet sighs, "We just have to do the best job we can and hope that everything falls into place. But sometimes everything just falls into all the wrong places." Gus nods, "True words my man." She shakes her head, "I still have a feeling there is something we're missing." Gus scoffs, "Well try bringing that feeling into court and see how far it gets you." She scoffs, "Wow thanks for the support Aitoro>" Mallet looks at them, "Take your personal divorced business out." Harley nods, "I try." Gus sighs, "Yeah right." Harley looks at him, "My car is in the shop. Can you give me a ride home?" He looks at her, "I suppose." The two walk out. The second the are out of sight, Gus grabs Harley. He puts her against the wall and begins kissing her. Harley smiles, "Sneaking around is just as fun as it ever was." He laughs, "I couldn't agree more." The two continue kissing. Springfield High: Robbie is still following Spencer. He smiles, "So what's new with you?" She shakes her head, "Nothing." He looks at her, "I like the new look. I know most people aren't crazy about the whole goth thing but I really like it. It's kinda cool you know." Spencer nods, "Yeah." He sighs, "I know I'm probably annoying you right now..." Spencer doesn't respond." He clears his throat, "... But we were really close friends when we were kids. Back when your Dad was engaged to my Mom. And so I thought maybe we could hang out now. Catch up." She looks at him, "You can do anything you want." He looks at her, "Well maybe you can come with me to a party this weekend? Everyone from school is going to be there and they're supposed to get a keg." She stares at him. He looks at her, "What?" She laughs, "That's not my scene. A bunch of teenagers, in their preppy mall clothes, dancing to hip hop, taking pictures of themselves with alcohol to put on facebook... no thanks." He stares, "Well what is your scene?" She smirks, "If you have to ask, odds are you'll never understand." Spencer walks away. As she walks Robbie notices the cuts on her wrist that is sticking out of her long sleeved shirt. On the other side of the school. Marti is in her locker. She stares at herself in the mirror. She can still feel Gavin holding her down on the bed. Suddenly she feels someone standing behind her. She looks in her mirror. Marti jumps and turns around. Belinda is standing behind her, "Hey Oklahoma. Welcome back. We have business to settle." A scared Marti stares back at her. Towers: Liz stares into the camera for her interview. She sighs, "So I am now without a Nanny and I just don't know what to do. So I'm thinking that I have to start auditioning different Nannys." The producer interrupts, "Liz. Very good, but make it sound more exciting. I mean we have some interesting people lined up for this episode." Liz clears her throat, "Okay... So now I am basically without a Nanny. And oh my God, I don't know what I am going to do at this point. So now I'm thinking, I need to audition Nannys." The producer nods, "Great, great. Can we fix her make up?" The make up artist comes to touch up Liz." Liz looks around, "Clay isn't crying is he?" Inside the nursery. Aubrey sits in the rocking chair holding Clay. She smiles, "Look at you. Beautiful little boy." Aubrey kisses him on the head. She slowly rocks back and forth. She hums a tune to the little boy. She slowly stands up and walks around the room. Aubrey stops and stares in the mirror. She smiles, "Look at us. Beautiful huh?" She walks back over to the crib. Aubrey gives him another kiss on the head before she gently lays him back down. She hears Liz walking towards the door. Aubrey quietly walks back into the large closet and closes it. She sits down and crawls behind the boxes. She listens as Liz checks on her son. Carriage House: Blake is with Ross on the couch. She stands up, "I cannot believe what I am hearing." He looks at her, "I know that you're his mother-" She looks at him, "Oh stop it! Like you're one to talk. Your daughter is a psychopath who killed my brother and you never saw her for what she was." He shakes his head, "This is not about Dinah." Blake looks at him, "Exactly. Because if it was you wouldn't be as hard on her as you are on Kevin." Ross stands up, "That's not fair." Blake nods, "I agree. They are both your children. Kevin hasn't killed anybody." Ross shakes his head, "I love all of my children. Dinah, Jason, Kevin, and Clarissa are the most important people in my life. Nothing will ever change that." Blake turns away. He sighs, "I know you hate hearing this... but Kevin is really starting to remind me of your father and I want to save him before anything escalates to that level." Blake looks at him, "I cannot believe you just said that." Ross nods, "The similarities are frightening to say the least." She walks towards him, "Kevin is nothing like my father." Ross looks at her, "Maybe whatever Roger was going through in his life was hereditary." She shouts, "My father wasn't mentally ill and my son isn't mentally ill!" He looks at her, "Is that really what you want to believe? Because I believe that no one is entirely good or bad. Kevin is not a villain. There is something wrong." She walks away, "I'm not listening to this." Ross stares, "Blake please..." She opens the door, "Get out. Now." Ross walks towards the door, "When I was listing the most important people in my life, that includes you Blake. Please don't shut me out." Blake stares at Ross and he stands in the doorway. Cedars: Rocky is resting in his hospital bed. Coop and Eden are still with him. Coop stares, "You're unbelievable sometimes you know that." Rocky turns away, "Aren't you supposed to be at work? Because I'm pretty sure Jude said it was the first day of the new semester today." Coop looks at him, "I took the day off to be with you." Rocky sighs, "Well maybe you shouldn't have." Coop scoffs, "Maybe you're right." Coop storms out. Eden stands, "Coop." She turns back to Rocky. Rocky sighs, "Why won't anyone accept the fact that I know Kevin better than they do. And I'm not going to just write him off and let him be on his own." Eden nods, "I know how you feel Rocky. You can't choose who you fall in love with. I just got lucky enough to fall in love with your brother this time around." Eden walks out. Rocky lays there for a few minutes. Eventually he hears footsteps. He sighs, "Coop just go to work." Rocky turns around. Kevin is standing in his room. Rocky stares at him. Downstairs in the hospital. Coop approaches Ashlee. He looks at her, "Have you got the results back yet?" Ashlee sighs, "I did..." He sighs, "Okay. Well none of my roommates know I found pills in our apartment even my wife, so remember to keep this on the down low." She nods, "Of course..." He stares, "What? What kind of pills were they?" Ashlee hands him the paper work. He looks through, "I don't know... what is this? I can't even pronounce these words." Ashlee sighs, "They aren't illegal drugs Coop... they're for treatment." He stares, "Treatment for what." Ashlee sighs, "HIV." Coop stares at her. She nods, "One of your roommates is infected with HIV." Coop stares in shock. PREVIEWS: Coop leans on Ashlee Marah and Edmund visit Annie Rocky confesses to Kevin Aubrey obsesses over Liz Belinda warns Marti Robbie worries for Spencer Gus and Harley contemplate their situation
  11. Wow! Great opening scene. Sister Pat always makes things interesting, I loved the part with Dottie. Wow I didn’t expect the whole part 1 to be about Sister Patterson. With the DC and Lynn stuff thrown in as well of course. Very interesting choice there. Totally helps get to know her a lot better. Never seen an episode like this on other SON blogs. Do you plan on doing more of this?
  12. JAYJAY

    S3 Episode 102

    We'll see in the next episode. What happens with Kevin and Rocky. But the bigger concern was for Rocky who was running towards the car right before it blew up. And yeah I wanted Marti's scene to be a surprise because it certainly was to her. She uses her body to get what she wants and this time it backfired on her. Last year after my hiatus the show jumped ahead a year. It was obvious at first but after a while it wasn't because everything fell perfectly into place thank goodness. Yep but Marah's real choice is either screwing over her family or letting Edmund turn her in for Ava's kidnapping. Aubrey was Jonathan's sweet wife he returned with but she turned out to be a psycho who faked a pregnancy, kidnapped Marina's baby, shot Liz and caused a number of crazy things that affected lives all over Springfield. She has been on the run ever since and now she's back!!! The rest of the episodes will be Season 4 the final year of FTL beginning from January to December storyline wise.
  13. Ella Simms: "I don't play the wishing game. If I want something, I go out and get it" The bisexual publicist for WPK, Ella lives her life through her blackberry. She has fears about monogomy and getting her heart broken (recently by her friend Jonah Miller). Ella idolized her mentor Amanda Woodward until Amanda stabbed her in the back. Now Ella has taken down Amanda but as everyone at 4616 Melrose Place knows, no one (especially Amanda Woodward) stays down for long. Lauren Yung: "All my life, all I ever wanted was to be a doctor." Lauren devotes her life to her medical career. She has always wanted to become a doctor and make her father proud. When times were tough Lauren even went as far as to become a prostitute to pay for school. Now she has turned her life back around and is happily living with her boyfriend David Breck who just happens to be the son of her professional mentor Dr. Michael Mancini. Riley Richmond: The school teacher and one-time model, Riley teaches her students to tell the truth and she wants to hold herself to that same rule. She rushed into a relationship with her college boyfriend Jonah Miller which led to an engagement, ending in a break up. Now she is head over heals in love with Dr. Drew Pragin, unfortunatly Drew's illness has rocked Riley's emotional world and the couple wants to enjoy every moment they have together. Jonah Miller: Jonah cannot imagine another career other than being a filmmaker. After having failed relationships with Riley and Ella, he now wonders if his career is worth the time he is putting into it. But Jonah is passionate about film and now that he finally has his movie being made he feels like a rockstar. David Breck: David is the son of Dr. Michael Mancini. Michael was MIA most of David's life until David's mother passed away. Now David lives off his trust fund and has recently purchased the club Coal. He gave up his life of crime to be with his girlfriend Lauren. However he is now being blackmailed back into his old ways which could cost him everything. Drew Pragin: "I don't know how long I have to live." Drew is fun, confident, handsome, smart, and he's a doctor. He seems to be perfect. His only imperfection is his heart defect he was born with that was saved by Dr. Mancini's heart valve. But now that Drew is aware that the heart valves are causing massive strokes, he has made it his mission to stop Michael from continuing to risks people's lives. Drew's life is bound to be cut short, but he is going to live up every moment with his love Riley Richmond. Violet Foster: Violet arrived at Melrose Place to be reunited with the mother who gave her up for adoption, Sydney Andrews. Unfortunatly their reunion was cut short when Violet found Sydney's body floating in the pool of the courtyard. Violet eventually avenged her mother's death by drowning the woman responsible in the very same pool. Violet then left the apartment complex with Auggie Kirpatrick a young chef that Sydney had once been involved with. The two rode off together, but Violet may not be away from Melrose Place for long...
  14. JAYJAY

    S3 Episode 101

    Yep and the whole chapters thing helps because other people don't have to leave the show but they can be on the back burner for one chapter and then get a bigger storyline in the next. Sort of rotating people in and out.
  15. Very different. The first episode is more of an intro sort of episode. And it all takes place during one day but the rest of the series will not be like that. It's soooo different but fun. And much easier in some senses. I don't have to plan out far ahead and I don't have to worry about over using people and forgetting about others.
  16. JAYJAY

    S3 Episode 101

    I'd say at least 15 of the current cast will be gone by the end of the third chapter.
  17. JAYJAY

    S3 Episode 101

    Well this is the last year and several characters will be exiting every chapter.
  18. JAYJAY

    S3 Episode 100

    LOL That's how I feel about Melrose Place now.
  19. Melrose Place 2.0 Set in a scandalous apartment complex in West Hollywood, Melrose Place first hit the air in 1992 on Fox. In 2009 it was revived on the CW but was cancelled after one season. Now the writer of FTL brings you a second season. 10 episodes ordered that will be posted over the course of the summer of 2011. The episodes will continue with the new format of being titled after streets in Los Angelas, the first upcoming being "Sunset". Don't miss the stories that will make you want to take a dip in the pool. Old faces, new faces, scandal, sex, drugs, crime, passion, blackmail, deception, illness, tragedy, love, and drama.
  20. Unfortunatly the time is coming. Espcially since I'm moving soon and trying to focus more on school. Putting out over a hundred episodes a year is tough. But there is no other way I can properly tell the story of FTL. But I promise a powerful ending. But this will be the fourth season so to speak, and starting with episode 1 and ending with episode like 102 maybe. So I have a year worth of stories left to tell don't worry too much 5 chapters starting with Tumbling Down. It takes place from the beginning of 2012 to the end of February (the Annual Masquerade ball will end the chapter).
  21. JAYJAY

    S3 Episode 101

    Hmm everybody has something going on but it's all working towards limiting the number of stories by combining storylines. They all sort of tie together in one way or another. Such as the Annie vs Dinah and the take over at Lewis are connected through Annie's wrath. Annie is going down and taking everyone with her. I think the reality show can give Liz some of the that classic spoiled girl stuff that people love about her. A little fun since she's had a rough year but crazy stuff is coming her way. Spencer has given me so much to write with. Cutting herself, burning herself, drug use, pass out games, all a part of her exterior. Robbie and Jude have been on the back burner but not for long. Sort of a rotation of teens. Leah and James are on the back burner for now. Can't wait to hear what you think of 102!!! I had so much fun writing it!
  22. JAYJAY

    S3 Episode 100

    It's hard to cut people out of holiday episodes because then you have to explain why someone wasn't with their family on the holiday. The holiday episodes are more of getting back to the family roots of the show. But yes everything always goes back to the drama and the New Years Eve episodes are crazy.
  23. JAYJAY

    S3 Episode 99

    With Kevin's story could easily be written as a soap cliche of an unexplained turn to villian. But this is going to be a big story about what is really going on with Kevin. I love writing Spencer's scene. She is such a complex character and has so many layers to her. LOL I wish I had known that. I have been planning this story for Liz for quite some time. But the reality show is more of a plot point to the bigger story of course.
  24. JAYJAY

    S3 Episode 98

    Edmund is furious with Marah on one level but now he has control over her. Yep Dalton is pushing Ashlee to give up her dieting, he isn't aware of how bad her disorder was in the past. Belinda has so much crazy stuff coming up this year. Rocky and Kevin are on shaky ground right now. Thank you for commenting
  25. The first chapter of the final year of FTL is coming. Someone will break down A few will fall down One will be thrown down Some will be turned down Others will begin to crack down The population will go down And one of Springfield's biggest events will go into lockdown... The coldest winter in Springfield, “Revenge is a dish best served cold” Finding the Light: Tumbling Down
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