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Mike's Reaction2Jodie!!Episode42


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Dru99.jpgRia pulls up to her old house, in Westwood Park.nightviewofwestwoodpark.jpg She doesn't see her things out on the curb like Karim said they would be so this gives her a little hope. She sees Karim's car parked in the driveway and gets out her car and knocks on the door, not knowing how Karim is going to react to her, given how he, basically said he is done with her. Karim opens, doesn't say anything.

Ria

"I don't see my things on the curb."

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"I haven't had a chance to start packing. But I was just taping up some boxes. You can help."

Ria, entering the house

"Karim, please don't do this. I love you."

Karim

"If you love me then how can you cheat on me?"

Ria

"Baby I am sorry. It was a huge mistake. It just happened."

Karim

" And is that 5 letter word supposed to erase the pain in my heart? How long has it been going on Ria?"

Ria, not wanting to hurt Karim no further but still decides to be truthful.

"About 6 months."

Karim shakes his head, and chuckles.

"So for six months, I was being made a fool of. Why? Why string me along?"

Ria

"I wasn't stringing you along. Karim I do love you. With all my heart. Dondre was, just..just.."

Karim

"What Ria? He was what?"

Ria

"It was just sex."

Karim

"Sex,.huh, so what are you saying, I don't satisfy you?"

Ria

"I didn't say that. I love to make love with you baby."

Karim

"Then I don't understand. What does Dondre do for you that I don't?"

Ria

"It's just the thought of having sex with a rough neck, he's thuggish. He's raunchy. It's like you make love to me and he beats it up."

Karim

"So you cheated on me because I didn't beat it up? Ria. You should have opened up the lines of communications. I was under the impression, you don't like it rough."

Ria

"Baby I am sorry."

Karim

" Don't "Baby" me. You probably called Dondre the same thing. It's too late for all that. You had that man up in our house, in our bed. The house that I'm paying the mortgage on. I can't believe you would do that to me. I give you everything you ask for and more. You don't have to work, hell you don't have to do anything. I take good care of you and it wasn't enough for you."

Ria

"Please Karim, I appreciate all that. I'm telling you I do. I love you. Nothing has changed."

Karim

"Yes the hell it has. I feel like an ass. A complete jackass. You played the hell out of me now I want you gone Ria. Get the hell on. Pack your bags Miss lady, go be with Dondre. Let him beat it up all night long baby girl. "

Ria, pleading with him, turning the water works on

"Please Karim, don't do this. I need you." She says grabbing his shirt. He pushes her off him and goes to the bedroom and start throwing her things outside, with tears in his eyes as well.

Ria

"Please Karim, I'm sorry. I love you" Karim is not having it and throws the rest of her things out on the front lawn.

Karim

"Now get out!" Ria sinks to the floor in an uproar of tears.

Ria

"Please don't do this Karim. Give us another chance. ..I'm not leaving you."

Karim

"That's what you think. Next time use your heart and not your eyes" Karim grabs Ria by her arms and drags her out his house, as she kicks and screams knocking over vases and knocking tables and chairs over on her way out. He drops her in his yard

Karim

"Stay the hell away from me!" He goes back in the house and slams the door in her face.

Ria is still in tears, embarrassed, with some of the neighbors looking out their windows and come outside to see what's the yelling about, slowly gather her things and puts them in her car. She realizes the neighbors are watching her.

"What the hell yall looking out! Show's over, go to bed." (I'm going to get Sharan for this) She thinks to herself

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Episode: 42

Written by: ML Cooks with MON!QUEB1TCHES

Kevin and Sharan's House

Kevin pushes play on his stereo system and The song "Between the Sheets" by Ronald Isley comes on. He takes his silk black boxers off and slides into the hot tub with Sharan. Sharan lays against Kevin's chest as he wraps his arms around her. They both are chillaxed by the candles and soft music. Kevin takes a sip of his champagne.

"I love you."

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"I love you too. I had a wonderful time today."

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"I did too."

Sharan

"This feels so good. After a hard day's work, I get to enjoy some time with my man at the Norman Brown concert, then to end it right here, in your arms."

Kevin

"Yes, it does feel good. Baby I want to talk to you about something."

Sharan

"What's on your mind?"

Kevin

"It's about us. We have been together for a long time and I could not be any more happier or more blessed to have you in my life. Everything you say and everything you do gets me lost in you days at a time"

Sharan

"I feel the same way."

Kevin

"What do you think if we took this relationship to the next level?" She gets up and looks into Kevin's eyes.

Sharan

"What do you mean?"

Kevin reaches behind him, and pulls a black velvet boxthat he hid. Sharan's face lights up.

Sharan

"Oh, my God Kevin!" Tears of joy begin to run down her face. He opens up the velvet box to reveal a stunning diamondring.gif.

"I have never loved anyone so much in my life. You light up everyday of my life. You have been there for me when no one else has. Without you I would not be here this very moment so Baby, would you do me the honor of becoming Mrs. Kevin Williams?"

Sharan

"Of course." He slides the ring on her finger and they embrace each other. Sharan has thoughts of Dondre kissing going through her head.

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"Say what?"

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"I have HIV" She whispers to him."

Mike is taken aback, words can't come to his lips.

Jodie

"Please don't think less of me because I have this death sentence. I'm still a good person"

Mike

"Jodie, I am very sorry to hear that. I don't think of any less of you. So please get that those kind of thoughts out of your head" Mike quickly flashes back in his mind to his Pub, the night Jenn walked in on him and Jodie embracing each other.

Mike

"If you hadn't told me tonight, would you have ever told me?"

Jodie

"Yes I would have. Mike I told you I care for you. I know you're probably thinking of the time we were comforting each other at your pub."

Mike

"I am."

Jodie

"I would have told you Mike. Especially if we got closer."

Mike

"I really wish you would have told me the first night I met you."

Jodie

"Why, would things be different? You wouldn't have nothing to do with me?"

Mike

"I didn't say that. I don't know what difference it would have made. I wish you were more open from the start."

Jodie

"Mike, I'm not going to tell everyone I first meet. What am I supposed to say, Hey, how You doing, where you been? oh, guess what, I have HIV. It's not that simple. Do you know how hard it was to admit to myself that this is a reality let alone make commercials for everyone."

Mike

"I can understand that. Jodie, I care for you too. It does not change how I feel about you."

Jodie

"How exactly do you feel about me Mike?"

Mike

"I think we are two lost souls who need each other right now." He grabs her and holds her tight. Jodie, lets out a big sigh, relieved that she has told somebody about her status and they have not turned their back on her.

Mike

"You don't need to get mixed up with Ty, Jodie, you can stay with me until you get on your feet."

Jodie

"Mike, thank you so much. You don't know how much this means to me." They walk out The Blue Note and head to his house.

At The Williams House

Abeblair.jpg puts his house coat on and his slippers and goes outside to get the mail before he cooks a surprise breakfast for his family. He sees a strange letter with his name on it and no return address on it nor a stamp. He looks around him to see if he sees anything suspicious. He opens the letter and reads it.

"Secrets have a way of coming out. The skeletons in your closet will be revealed."

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Bryan climaxes inside of Natalia.2516349875.jpg She gets up off him and the pool table and puts herself back together. She goes into Bryan's office.

dkjh.jpgBryan still being drunk passes out on the pool table with his pants still halfway down leaving him exposed.

In Bryan's office, Natalia takes the cd out the TV and puts another one in.

"This will come in handy" She says as she walks out the club with a tape of her raunchy sexual escapade with her enemies man on DVD.

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Very touching episode. This was the first time I was really into the Ria/Karim/Sharan/Kevin quadrangle. I really felt Ria's desperation to keep her man but of course she deserved it which will only complicate things even more when Karim goes after Sharan!

The Jodie/Mike plot is very dramatic and I was worried how it was going to be written but it's very classy. This raises tons of story plot oppertunites about Mike wanting to get closer (physically and emotionally) to Jodie.

Last but not least, my favorite BIA herself was amazing. Which is funny because another character on PP will be pulling a similar stunt. We must be telepathic or something!

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