Wow... And the point of this storyline was?????

You basically ripped the entire 04 storyline on the real show and did it on your show in a matter of weeks, instead of months. Orginality isn't your best feature, is it?

And I'm only going to guess that Sami and Carrie's stalker is um, oh, Alan Harris? Could you not be so blunt about your upcoming stories? They're very predictable.

Just a little input. Hope you don't mind the criticism.

I am enjoying it. And will most definetly give it a chance before going one way or the other. Great writing so far.

Oh I don't mind

criticism. I want

it actually.

The point was to get

everyone to the island.

Once you know who the

real mastermind is it will

become clear why I did what

I did. Wednesday's show will

be the beginning of my new

stuff.

I do mind be being attacked

for not being original. Drew

you saw my first fan fic back

in the winter and were in love

with my stories. I took a

different approach with this

and I am basically taking alot

that has been done and I am

trying to rectify damage done

to the history of the show. I was

going to do this in a different way

with my old fan fic but never did it.

I wanted to shock people with the

fact that the dead were alive again.

I was expecting negative response

but I was not expecting people

attacking me for not being creative

I think there has been some creative

things so far like the drugs in the water

supply, Theo being brainwashed early on

(which KR commented on a while back)

Victor/Maggie, trapping enemies

together, etc. The stalker thing was meant

to be obvious-I am not going for surprise on

that like I am the mastermind. What the stalker

does with Carrie in the coming weeks is the

surprise.

I do respect your opinions Drew and Keith but

just give things time. I appreciate the feedback

I just think attacking my originality is a little unfair

since I had a previous fan fic that was well-liked and

this one has had creative ideas. I do see your point

about killing everyone but this time it was pretty much

everyone not a select few and it is the only way I could

involve everyone. Again, thanks everyone for commenting.

I have been waiting weeks for feedback .

I hope you all keep reading and see how the summer plays

out before making judgements.

Oh and guys let's remember

this is only a fan fic. I know

it wasn't intentional Drew and Keith

but yoru responses were a little

harsh. I want you to comment

and I appreciate you being readers

but it just hit me a bit hard.

I mean alot of this is in good fun.

There was things I didn't like in other

fan fics but I know if you are too harsh

you can break the spirit of the fan fic writer

a bit so criticize away but try not to be as

harsh. I consider you all friends but when I saw

some of the responses I was stunned to be honest.

Thanks though for reading and responding.

I do appreciate it.