Amanda04

Wow! LOVE the Ross twist and what is staring w/ this chapter w/ that. Good chapter!

It's sad that a born on screen, tied to a true rooted family character like Marah is sacrificed for no-tied character like Ava. How Marah is acting is like a 180, sounds like a child of Annie's not Jeva's. I did like how chapters before you had Roxie and Johnny being Ashlee's bio parents, enjoying that. Still not getting the new "teen scene" stuff. Guess b/c they weren't characters I know and weren't built up on the show so its hard to invest in.

Interesting where you've gone with it. Only thing I'm finding interesting is the Marah SL, but I hope being such an on screen born, central character she'll come out on top. I understand hard times (she's Reva's daughter) but still. Esp over Ava who is in insta character w/ no ties. And Cassie too who even though in this story life is back in a good type role, is just ruined even in this for me of how she was changed on screen. Any story for Reva, Roxie?? How Annie came to change and get back w/ Josh after everything?? Billy? Vanessa? Dinah? Maybe get rid of some dead weight characters and bring back on like Holly? The young, teen scene is just not investing into as I guess b/c they weren't characters invested in on screen. Guess like always I just love the vets and older characters.

Good episode! Don't leave us waiting long for the next.

Wow that was a twist. So it's like a fresh start?? Year later like the show lol. Annie and Josh together again? Crazy, I just could never see it after the past. Jeffrey and Cassie? Interesting, as I was liking Jeffrey and Marah. And now Marah having a "dark" side and being manipulative? And Reva alone w/ cancer? Noah no longer around? I guess she will lose the battle as you hinted she might be written off before. Guess I'll keep reading and see where you go w/ it. Hope you don't keep us waiting long!

Yay! Since cancellation I've been checking your page for updates, then wondered if b/c of it you decided to not do it anymore. I'm glad you will be! Reading any new fan fiction for me is the best in keeping GL going and the characters still alive.

I really hope you don't write Reva/KZ off. My favorite of all so I'd hate to see her gone from this as reading through all of it there hasn't been much for her. I say bring Kyle back for her and have him for the first time really around Josh and see what his reaction would be to Ryle back together.