Wow, great story! I just clicked through to your blog and read the whole thing in one sitting. You've done a great job capturing the dynamics of the various relationship and also in setting up believable conflict between Luke and Kevin -- it's not contrived, it just comes from their own insecurities and doubts.
That was a really fun read! I hope you continue this story for a while.
"The Luke and Kevin Story" part 7
in "The Stories"
A blog by All My Shadows in General
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Wow, great story! I just clicked through to your blog and read the whole thing in one sitting. You've done a great job capturing the dynamics of the various relationship and also in setting up believable conflict between Luke and Kevin -- it's not contrived, it just comes from their own insecurities and doubts.
That was a really fun read! I hope you continue this story for a while.