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Golden Days Epi. 1 "The Pilot"


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NEW DAY

(Donovan Enterprises; Board Room)

"Shows Carla sitting at the big table looking at her phone when the door opens"

Maggie- uh... it's you?

Carla- yes it is me.

Maggie- what are you even doing here don't you have a café or something to run

Carla- yes but just like everyone else who has a job I get time off as well and I could ask you the same thing?

Maggie- well I am here to see my fiancé

Carla- not for long you are

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(Donovan House)

"Shows Addie answering the door to Jaxon standing here"

Addie- Jaxon what are you doing here?

Jaxon- what can't I come see my favorite grandmother

Addie- well of course you can. I just figured that you would be at work

Jaxon- nah I just decided to take the day off

Addie- oh okay, so how are things going between you and Maggie?

Jaxon- things between Maggie and I are just great it's everyone else who is causing problems for us

Addie- what do you mean by that?

Jaxon- everyone thinks that Maggie is only marrying me for my money

Addie- well do you think she is?

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(Lockhart Publications; Gina's Office)

"Shows Gina pouring herself a glass of water and she takes a sip as her phone rings"

Gina- Gina Lockhart... yes this is her, what oh my god... yes... okay I'll be on my jet in 10 minutes and on my way there

Drew- is something wrong

Gina- Come on we need to get on the jet and I'll explain on the way

"Gina calls someone on her phone"

Gina- hey it's my get the jet fueled and ready I'll be their in 10 minutes

"Gina and Drew walk of her office and the door closes"

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(Carla's Café)

"Shows Gabriel and Bailey sitting at a table"

Bailey- I wander what's taking Drake and Lila so long to get here

Gabriel- well you probably know what's taking them so long if you get what I'm saying.

Bailey- Gabriel!

"Gabriel laughs"

Gabriel- come on you know it's true

Drake- sorry we're later we got caught up at the library

Gabriel- so that's what they're calling it now a day

Lila- what?

Bailey- Gabriel thought the reason why you all took so long was that you were having sex

Drake- I wish!

Gabriel- well I have to get going I have a final I need to go to Linwood U and sign up for my classes

Drake- hey I'll come with, you ladies have fun

"Gabriel and Drake walk out"

Lila- I think we just got ditched

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(Donovan Enterprises; Board Room)

Maggie- look you hateful old woman. Your son and I are going to get married next week and there's nothing you or anyone else can do

"Maggie walks out of the room"

Carla- I wouldn't be so sure of that

"Carla grabs her phone and dials"

Carla- hey it's me I need another favor from you. I need you to look up some dirt on a woman named Maggie Newhart

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CAST USED-

Jacklyn Zeman as Carla Sanders-Donovan

Bree Williamson as Maggie Newhart

Peggy McCay as Addie Donovan

Ryan Peavey as Jaxon Donovan

Cady McClain as Gina Lockhart

Jason Cook as Drew Lockhart

Kate Mansi as Bailey Donovan

Jason Tam as Gabriel Ramiro

Robert Adamson as Drake Donovan

Jordan Lane Price as Lila Braxton

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Great start. Scenes were well written all but the Scenes with Gabriel and Drake. Dialog was choppy at the end.

THe main story in this episode was easy to follow, Maggie and Jaxon's marriage. Seems like this is going to be a classic soap so far. I cant wait to see where you take us.

Some cast pics would be nice.

Good Job Josh!!

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